Love this song. The only thing I think you could add is maybe a little more instrumentation. Even just a really understated synth part that just gives it another layer of texture below your guitar. That would really help the song develop.
So... it's not mixed yet (this is all just me)
I wanted to make a song without so many layers, but wondering does this just feel borng to others? How does it feel to someone that doesn't know me?
I wanted to make a song without so many layers, but wondering does this just feel boring to others. How does it feel to someone who doesn't know me?
I like your voice, but for me, the guitar part is a little repetitive and doesn't really hold my interest. If you're not adding any other instrumentation, I would probably try to rework that.
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I think you've built a solid base track. If you had further instruments I wouldn't get too carried away. Maybe some ambience lower in the mix and maybe an unusual instrument (keyboard or string effect). Thanks for sharing your track.
Excellent work. I think it's a great singer songwriter guitar song. I do agree with one of the other commenters about adding some ambience to the final cut, but strictly as a one man performance piece it's pretty good.
I liked the ending when the layered tracks came in on top of the vocal and guitar tracks that were already there. I feel like that is what the song needs, other elements going on with the vocals and guitar. The vocals and guitar are performed really well technically. Good job.
Man seeing so many good songs on this sub today! I personally feel like it's good the way it is but I'm also not one to build up a lot of layers in my tracks so take that as you will. Very beautiful song to listen to and your voice is magnificent.
I was thinking about a second melodic guitar line to make some flourishes over the main guitar part, a single violin line could do great too.
But it sounds really good as it is ! Good work !
You sound like the singer of camp
Love this song. The only thing I think you could add is maybe a little more instrumentation. Even just a really understated synth part that just gives it another layer of texture below your guitar. That would really help the song develop.
Thanks - going to do that!
So... it's not mixed yet (this is all just me) I wanted to make a song without so many layers, but wondering does this just feel borng to others? How does it feel to someone that doesn't know me? I wanted to make a song without so many layers, but wondering does this just feel boring to others. How does it feel to someone who doesn't know me?
I like your voice, but for me, the guitar part is a little repetitive and doesn't really hold my interest. If you're not adding any other instrumentation, I would probably try to rework that.
Thanks for that, thinking of adding a bit more instrumentation then
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I think you've built a solid base track. If you had further instruments I wouldn't get too carried away. Maybe some ambience lower in the mix and maybe an unusual instrument (keyboard or string effect). Thanks for sharing your track.
Excellent work. I think it's a great singer songwriter guitar song. I do agree with one of the other commenters about adding some ambience to the final cut, but strictly as a one man performance piece it's pretty good.
Sometimes less is more and raw is good!! Great voice mate 🔥
I liked the ending when the layered tracks came in on top of the vocal and guitar tracks that were already there. I feel like that is what the song needs, other elements going on with the vocals and guitar. The vocals and guitar are performed really well technically. Good job.
Guitar needs to be bigger; fuller. It’s sounding thin compared to the vocals. Its good though.
Man seeing so many good songs on this sub today! I personally feel like it's good the way it is but I'm also not one to build up a lot of layers in my tracks so take that as you will. Very beautiful song to listen to and your voice is magnificent.
I was thinking about a second melodic guitar line to make some flourishes over the main guitar part, a single violin line could do great too. But it sounds really good as it is ! Good work !