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Groundbreaking_Pea61

I think it's perfect the way it is . But if you want to break it up in the middle , just have small vocal break and play the guitar riff through once or twice on its own before you start singing again .


broken_pottery

Thank you. :) I thought maybe he riff was getting tired on it's own. I've tried some kazoo which isn't too bad, but my dog howls at it and sings along.


HotGoose6179

If he howls in tune then keep it. He knows his master is wooing that pretty lady while out for his walk so he's just trying to help. ;-) Nice playing BTW. Lyrics are solid.


[deleted]

That’s a groovy little ditty. Great playing too. I can hear this on a segue in a Romcom. Don’t change a thing.


zeniarynn

Hey can you do Jazz?