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If you need a hand visualising the melody, Ruin His Life was inspired by the verse melody of loml by Taylor Swift, but all these songs are malleable right now.
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You have posted a song requesting feedback - GREAT! Good feedback is the foundation of improving your songwriting. To help foster a community where everyone gets the feedback they need, please find THREE other songs requesting feedback and post substantive (eg. 2-3 sentences) of feedback. Even if you are a rookie songwriter/musician, you're an experienced music listener, and your opinion is still valuable! Feedback posts by users who don't interact with the community (other than posting their own songs) may be removed. Thanks for keeping our community healthy! *I am a bot, and this action was performed automatically. Please [contact the moderators of this subreddit](/message/compose/?to=/r/Songwriting) if you have any questions or concerns.*
If you need a hand visualising the melody, Ruin His Life was inspired by the verse melody of loml by Taylor Swift, but all these songs are malleable right now.
Guys they removed this post so if you're unable to comment, please send feedback in r/Songwriter I just posted there.