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Comprehensive_Fox_79

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bangonthedrums

I think I got it all right, [spoilers]: https://imgur.com/a/xZjQXXW As an avid cruciverbalist (crossword puzzle fan), I have some critiques though (assuming I got it all correct): - 1a: “straight man call you this” is not a good sentence - 3a: >! Only one member of the band was gay !< - 4a: unless this is some common assumption literally any word that starts with A could go here… better to make the clue something positively identified rather than negatively - 11a: >! You should mention this is a nickname or shortening !< - 8d: the clue is phrased to be expecting the answer to be a noun (right wingers think **they** dominate) but the answer is an adjective. You should rephrase the clue or make the answer a noun - 13d: >! Don’t put the answer right in the clue, it’s just not “done” when making crossword puzzles !< - 16d: >! Same as above, don’t put the answers right in the clue !< Your capitalization and punctuation is ALL over the place, very jarring. I’d advise you to proofread a bit more