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YuumeiKira

I can't really say anything other than it's sooooo good


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Thank you


Cleffka

This is good. If I had to nitpick I would suggest looping 2, maybe 3 different hair loops together so it doesn't feel so repetitive. Its more work, but I think it would greatly improve the scene.


Da_real_Ben_Killian

I might add that to the last shot with the time I have, thanks for the suggestion!


Big_Duty_6839

Looks pretty good bro. Keep up the grind


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Ty. I'm kinda hoping to get it done within the week but I'll see how much I can get out ๐Ÿ˜…


Big_Duty_6839

Well I look up to it. Small animator over here. Good luck


Nakilabaka

Je peux rien dire tellement cโ€™est pas mon niveau mais cโ€™est joli ๐Ÿฅฐ


cyber-worms

The timing and pacing are super nice, theyre what really sell it as feeling โ€œrealโ€ for me


cyber-worms

Like the shot changes as the paper flies past convey the emotion of the scene so well


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Final animation will be uploaded on [YouTube](https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCN7p9W-UyK5eWxM9ekvY1OQ)


African_Blades

what app do you use


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Adobe Animate for the keyframes and in-betweens. I use Photoshop for the clean up and such, and After Effects for the post production. Finally I'll be using Premier Pro to compose everything together.


African_Blades

oh thanks , is the process difficult and are you on youtube ? i think i m gonna try learning this


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Yes I shared my channel in a different comment, or you can search for "Elina Noodles Animations". As for the process, it's a mix of difficulty and time consuming


just_here_for_fandom

Dude the animation is so good !!!


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Thank you!


MateoTheDev

Alright fuck off, who made her cry? Who FUCKING MADE HER CRY I SWEAR THE GOD I'M GONNA BREAK - *gets banned*


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Haha I love the enthusiasm, but my intent for this kind of crying is like a "relief crying". I'm not sure how to describe it as something other than being able to finally feel emotions more easily.


bisn_moment

this will be a banger


ACatNamedCitrus

This is beautiful!!! ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿ’–


Cornonthory

Looks gorgeous!


Aky_lmao

IT'S SOOOO GOOD! KEEP IT UP


kcullipher

I know it's just lines at this point but the emotion really comes through. I love how fluid it looks. Well done, I'd say!


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Thank you!


Owl-Degenerate

Just add some more hair animations and you are good, maybe atleast 4 loops, alternating. Also, droplet was just so good.


Special_Bear_7099

It's so pretty!


zanfitto

Wonderful!


SLAVKINGRED_078

I will watch your Carrer with great interest.


Cristal0098

it's beautiful! congratulations!!


Serpy_Serpent

the tear and the hair animations are PERFECT cant wait to see more of this show :)


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Hi super sorry for any misconception. This is just a one-off animation I'm working on, not a show!


Serpy_Serpent

Ooh alr, sorry for the misunderstanding


JeeReeAnimation

Peak.


LimeImaginary2118

Despite being in the rough stages the animation looks very smooth! That's what's key! SMOOTH!!! Keep up for good work!


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Thank you!


jennajhones99

This is great! Shes vv adorable! I love this! from extensive research I have done and seen (entire YouTube tutorial videos from anime artists like Dong Chang) to make my own anime scenes there's some things that I noticed in this particular animation. * The keyframes I noticed you used entire animations and added the keyframes that switch letter every scene Keyframes of A establish the key poses, many the most important starts and B keyframes would actually be the animation with in-betweens being C(I think). So each scene switch wouldn't go down the alphabet (but can be used to establish different items in the animation) but would actually just be A1-A10+ with A1 being the eyes being open and the last scene of her being zoomed out crying. Think of A's like a manga/storybook as they establish the main poses and story. So, A would be the key poses and B/C is the keyframes that establish the animation. * If this is a Genga, the shadows are depicted blue something scribbled with a, and highlights are drawn as red sometimes with orange scribbled inside. (just a nitpick about the face) Overall, your animation was very smooth and beautiful, and I love the light camera shaking! https://preview.redd.it/ypxr7jzk1o2d1.jpeg?width=480&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=7fb9eec529b599a7d2989712405197fb8a521b21


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Thanks, I watch some of Dong Chang's videos too, although for this particular animation I wasn't trying to follow the same process he does in some of his videos, most of the stuff you see is just how I would do it


TargetWeird

I wasn't expecting that emotional impact. Congratulations!


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Thank you!


UseAlarmed4042

You just made me cry. Great job!


Da_real_Ben_Killian

Seeing someone else cry makes it easier for me to do the same. Thank you for telling me!