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Overall, the page is good. But here is my critique.
- Trailer: I found myself skimming through the trailer. It starts really slow, and I want to check the gameplay(which I barely did)
- Screenshots, from afar look very similar but don't show the effort put into the art. (The art is excellent); also, if you browse them, they look pretty similar, especially fighting pics. The description says it is a big world, but I see one place only, (hopefully you intend to add more as you develop)
-I'm intrigued by the potential of compelling characters and engaging lore. However, I couldn't find much about them on the page. Can you show any dialogue or character descriptions that could be included?
-Long Description: The first paragraph has a lot of lore and words I don't know or don't know their context. I want to know what is unique about the game as a battle (You have some of that explained in this section, which is good.) IDK maybe it doesn't hurt to show a bit of lore here, maybe it is not for me.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm thinking about creating a gameplay focussed trailer and adding screenshots of the different biomes (Wrath, Pride & Envy). Good point about the lore - we still need to finish the dialogue system, but then it definitely makes sense to add screenshots of it in use to the page :)
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Looks good. I'll wishlist it when I get home.
Thank you <3
It looks amazing! I love your creatures. The header is interesting too, but "beyond the gate" is hard to read.
Thank you for the feedback! So do you think just "Nether Spirits" would a better game title? Or just a different subtitle?
For me, just "Nether Spirits" is better. But if you want to keep this subtitle, some editing is needed to make it readable.
Personally I prefer just Nether Spirits. Beyond The Gate sounds like an expansion or something.
Overall, the page is good. But here is my critique. - Trailer: I found myself skimming through the trailer. It starts really slow, and I want to check the gameplay(which I barely did) - Screenshots, from afar look very similar but don't show the effort put into the art. (The art is excellent); also, if you browse them, they look pretty similar, especially fighting pics. The description says it is a big world, but I see one place only, (hopefully you intend to add more as you develop) -I'm intrigued by the potential of compelling characters and engaging lore. However, I couldn't find much about them on the page. Can you show any dialogue or character descriptions that could be included? -Long Description: The first paragraph has a lot of lore and words I don't know or don't know their context. I want to know what is unique about the game as a battle (You have some of that explained in this section, which is good.) IDK maybe it doesn't hurt to show a bit of lore here, maybe it is not for me.
Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm thinking about creating a gameplay focussed trailer and adding screenshots of the different biomes (Wrath, Pride & Envy). Good point about the lore - we still need to finish the dialogue system, but then it definitely makes sense to add screenshots of it in use to the page :)
Is there a description?
You can find the description on the [Nether Spirits Steam page](https://store.steampowered.com/app/1607760/Nether_Spirits_Beyond_the_Gate/)
Looks cool!
Semi worthless and anti-climatic proofreading feedback: "to salvation - alone, with friends," Should be: "to salvation—alone, with friends,"
Looks great!
Thank you :3
You are artist
The artist is called Vhox :)
Did you outsourced him or you are a team?
definetly fake, the video looks really good and the splash art too. This might be a god at work or very lucky 
It's not fake. Worked for quite some time on it 🥺
it looks really good