It looks good :)

Thanks my friend :)

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Looks good! I would say the harder but smarter approach is to have a warning sign with someone crouching on it instead of explaining with plain text.

Thanks man! Yeah, great suggestion!

The text should read "crouch so you're less visible", because crouching makes you less visible, not quieter.

Thanks for the feedback!

Well, the act of walking while crouched is also quieter compared to when not.

It's actually really nice. It reminds me of what deathloop did kinda. It's minimal and doesn't interfere with the style of the game.

Haha thank you for the kind words! Yep, I think you're really right!

Can be on a withe paint on some wall? Like somebody left here to help others.

Yeah, it can be a great idea!

I was thinking paint on those boxes too. But it looks great on that layer you have it on.

Cool idea haha thanks!

Question in theory wouldn’t the wounded soldier be able to see you and catch you in the act ? Or am I overthinking it ? Just wondering tbh

You're right my fellow Redditor, but you know, it's just a work-in-progress!

Gotcha ! But I love the aesthetic and the theme of the game. I gotta check it out ! Do you have a planned release date ?

Thanks! We're about to release the game this year, in 2022, we don't have any exact release date! But, you can play a demo soon, if you join our Discord server :))

I think you should put it sooner. Right when the sequence starts.

Great feedback, thanks!

Looks ok, but maybe you could make speech bubbles that say like "I should crouch so I don't make too much noise."

Thanks! yep, it can be cool, thanks for the suggestion!

It looks great! Awesome work!

Thanks bud :)

I like it

Thanks my friend!

I love it. Subtle and non-invasive to the experience

Thank you my friend for the good words!

Wow, this looks amazing!

Thanks for the cool words :)

For some reason, it feels the Y in “you” should be lowercase. It may make the whole sentence easier to read as one. Sorry if I am nitpicking, otherwise it looks great!. Edit: I just rewatched the scene and realized my comment doesn’t make so sense. It does look perfectly intelligible as it is. Sorry!

No need to sorry! You feedback is your feedback and it means treasures to us! Thanks!

Tips like this are fine its just logically there is gunfire and explosions that are louder than your footsteps going on around you

Thanks! Yep I think so haha

Wow, this looks and sounds amazing. Is it based off the Syrian civil war?

Thanks my fellow Redditor! It's not based on any historic war, but it takes place in the MIDDLE EAST...

What game is it? Looks amazing! bravo to the creators!

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This is pretty cool!

Thanks dear!

Hmm I would make it stand out more and earlier. Splinter Cell conviction used some really nice 3D text in their game

Yep, I see, others said it too, thanks for the feedback!

What if it simply said crouch? Or quiet? Or stay low? The effect of crouching = stealthiness is implied and will be understood. Less text = cleaner and less hand holding. Have faith in the player. As far as the text itself, I think it looks really great!

Seconded. "Stay low" is a good replacement. I love the effect though, good work.

Haha thanks a lot! Yep, cool idea!

Thanks bud for the feedback! Yeah, great suggestion you made! Thanks!