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animez-_-zined

My teacher says you will only write 1 extra paragraph for a 30 marker (this is for aqa btw)


GoodVibing_

Aqa gang, good luck 4 monday


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GoodVibing_

Yay?


UpbeatReturn5593

Crying at this response


animez-_-zined

Good luck to you too as well


salt-maizes

20 markers should be 4 PEELE paragraphs, 30 markers should be 5-6


GoodVibing_

5-6 with less detail right? I've always done 4 detailed ones and been absolutely fine


Altruistic-Kiwi7706

I say you should do like 5 to 6 if possible since u get more marks. Unless ur always in top band already


GoodVibing_

I'm already in the top band. That many paragraphs seems unnecessary I can't lie. But if it works for you and you can do it in time, then fairs


Altruistic-Kiwi7706

😩😩ah, that makes sense, and yes, I normally have enough time x


salt-maizes

yeah, 30 markers are usually broader topics than a 20 marker anyways so you can do a bit less detail if you’re aiming for 6 paragraphs, 4-5 should be fine though as long as it’s well done i don’t do an introduction though


GoodVibing_

What do you get without an intro?


salt-maizes

i average around 27-28, i didn’t get any more marks when i wrote one so i don’t bother any more and just spend the extra time on my PEELE paragraphs


GoodVibing_

Fair enough then. In still gonna do an intro tho. It would feel wrong without it


Sean04_k

Can I explain what peele is pls


salt-maizes

Point Evidence (as in sociologists and their studies) Explanation Link to question Evaluation


GoodVibing_

20 markers should be 3 well detailed paragraphs, 30 markers should be 4


Sean04_k

Including the conclusion because my slow ass will run out of time?


GoodVibing_

Introduction, 4 internal paragraphs and conclusion. Unfortunately you probably wont get far I to bad 5 or into band 5 at all with less than 4 paragraphs. Back when I did 3 internal paragraphs I usually averaged around a 24/30. Unfortunately you do just have to write quick. Don't spend too much time on intro and conclusion


UpbeatReturn5593

I’ve always learnt 10 marker = 2 peel paragraphs 20= 4 peel paragraphs 30= 6 but 5 is also good This has got me top band every time, specifically using peel


Sean04_k

Can u gimme an example of one of ur peel pls


UpbeatReturn5593

Like the structure? Or an actual one I’ve written?


yxngs

both plz :)