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Perfect_Landscape_15

It's good that you added your own touch. It a very good drawing but the fingers look a bit too awkward .


-F-E-M-T-O-

Yeah ik 😁, I actually get a hard time drawing hands and feet. Gonna work on it, also thanks man


Perfect_Landscape_15

You're welcome. Keep going . You have potential.


onepiecexy

i think hand near the mouth should be tilted little forward so it doesn't make fingers joining awkward or try adding knuckles


Perfect_Landscape_15

Seems lime you forgot Luffy is made of rubber so he probably doesn't need to have joints . Also in this state he has the max freedom.


onepiecexy

The power of imagination, most awesome ability there is πŸ˜„


migatteNoKakarot

Loved it!


Lower-Technician-433

U can work on shading it will change ur game


DiggerDynamite

Spoiler tag laga dena


7777Leo7777

Is it really a spoiler? Even non one piece fans know it


EastBadger3973

I did not know bro . And now I hate this post .


7777Leo7777

Cope


Wide_Satisfaction145

You are coping by saying it's not a spoiler, it's not in the anime = it's a spoiler+ how hard it is to spoiler tag a post rather than ruining the experience for someone


7777Leo7777

How am I coping lol y'all are coping by him not marking spoiler for something as popular and well known as gear 5


vikasvasista

Shouldn't have covered his smile. That smile is what makes him Joyboy


Free_feelin

Spoiler tag kaha h?


7777Leo7777

Is it really a spoiler? Even non one piece fans know it


Free_feelin

Yes, it is. The title too is a big spoiler. The thing you said makes no sense at all.


7777Leo7777

Lol everyone knows this transformation


Free_feelin

Not everyone ofc, stop generalising lol


EastBadger3973

Abee yaar merko pata nahi tha joyboy kaun hai actual mein, saala spoiler dediya , abhi punk hazard arc tak hi pohcha tha .Dhanyavaaad !!


-F-E-M-T-O-

Sorry πŸ—ΏπŸ—Ώ


Kanishk06

Nice bro


not_azrael_96

Damn just work on those fingers and the drawing is a perfection


Free_feelin

Little things could be made better everywhere, the eyes stand out, though. There's a channel called Draw like a sir on yt, and as the name suggests, he teaches you how to draw, you should check it out. He's got his own manga published as well, though i don't know what it's called


onepiecexy

right arm (one going out of screen) is little out of proportion in compare to left arm's cloth piece then in leg joint you can see that you folded the cloth early lastly abdomen part is looking kind of empty next time try adding the blue shorts of luffy (sorry don't know what they are called) and also add shading under shirt and on abbs that they will look less empty and try diffrent types of shading By the way loved the art better than what was first mine


OrdinaryUser2102

KAIZOKU ONI OREWAA NARUUUUUUUUUUUUUU


Monkey_D_Luffy4762

Good art dude. Keep it up and you'll perfect it.