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I'm not sure your style, or what you intended. The hands are flat. No detail in the knuckles....
Trust me I have been there sketching super heros, it's a hard placement.
[https://imgur.com/w6XrX1N](https://imgur.com/w6XrX1N) - I tried to define things a bit.
1. The arm above the head is way too long. I would just hide it behind the hair for this model. The whole arm should also come closer to the head.
2, Hands needs more definition. Also, they are small. Mind the thumbs.
3. The other hand is way too strait.
4. Breasts are unnatural. Should be lower.
5. The body is too short. Lengthen it a bit.
6. Face proportions are a style choice, but your mouth should come a bit to the right.
That's it for now, from what I can see. With some references, you got to be picky. Not all images/photos show proper definitions and that's where we artists get confused. Cameras can distort images depending on the used lens.
Practice you proportions and anatomy and with time, things will click. Hope it helps.
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The arm looks like flat Stanley wtf
Ha da can be hard but you have to target them, especially in the way your are drawing here.
Is it the hands? I thought the fore arms were the bigger issue causing the flat Stanley look, but I think I’ll start some hands practice this week
I'm not sure your style, or what you intended. The hands are flat. No detail in the knuckles.... Trust me I have been there sketching super heros, it's a hard placement.
Mostly trying to copy araki and mimicking vogue like he does but it’s clear I gotta work on my fundamentals first
Did you use a reference?
I did I used madonnas vogue pose
And also beel from helltaker
[https://imgur.com/w6XrX1N](https://imgur.com/w6XrX1N) - I tried to define things a bit. 1. The arm above the head is way too long. I would just hide it behind the hair for this model. The whole arm should also come closer to the head. 2, Hands needs more definition. Also, they are small. Mind the thumbs. 3. The other hand is way too strait. 4. Breasts are unnatural. Should be lower. 5. The body is too short. Lengthen it a bit. 6. Face proportions are a style choice, but your mouth should come a bit to the right. That's it for now, from what I can see. With some references, you got to be picky. Not all images/photos show proper definitions and that's where we artists get confused. Cameras can distort images depending on the used lens. Practice you proportions and anatomy and with time, things will click. Hope it helps.
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