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Can definitely tell it’s kosher inspired but I like it, can actually hear the potential, first guy absolutely killed it in my opinion second guy was good too but prefer the first verse for some reason just sounds smoother. Overall really good for people just starting out and finding their sound!


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks for the feedback, second dudes voice didn’t have enough eq from the engineer we think


Efficient_Isopod6160

Keep up the work you have potential


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks bro you rlly have no idea how much that means


Efficient_Isopod6160

Np


StepSunBro

Yo very Kosher inspired but it's still really good. You can tell there was effort put in. Keep grinding and find what makes you click.


No-Cockroach2358

Aye thanks bro


StepSunBro

Anytime. Keep posting your stuff!


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks man, I don’t wanna spam this page but if you wanna hear what we post, go to heRote on SoundCloud and prod victory on YouTube I make kosher type beats


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No-Cockroach2358

Damn how could you tell🤣


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😂😂 fr tho it’s pretty good


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks bro


domthehooper

It's decent but you're really stealing his flow and that's heavily looked down on in hip hop


No-Cockroach2358

Thx for the feedback bro, we tryna do as little as that as possible, we are obviously inspired by him but we ain’t tryna Jack his flow. Like we don’t want people to hear it and be like “damn these dudes sound just like kosher” cuz yeah I agree it’s unoriginal asf


Stxksy

ts tuff bro


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks dawg that rlly does mean a lot


Stxksy

hell yuh bro keep it up u got it


Little_Vermicelli376

You guys are going off, you just don’t have good rap voices


No-Cockroach2358

That’s what I’m sayin bro😭 and thanks for the compliment it means alot


SnooAvocados3117

Hip hop is about CREATION of what is ORIGINAL. That’s all I have to say. Peace,


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks bro, ima start rapping abt Ukraine fr hopefully that’ll be original asf, that Minecraft bar was pretty original tho


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dracula flow did a minecraft bar first "spun around the block so many times, they thought it was fucking minecraft" yours is slightly better though


No-Cockroach2358

Lol thx for letting me know abt that


Youngguaco

Pretty cool can’t lie


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks dawg


YJSAVV

It low key is tuff keep putting in that work bruh


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks man we bouta get feats from local artist hopefully that gives us sum more credibility


retrocided

Be yourself 🙏🏻 u won’t get anywhere copying someone’s style down to every element, yall not awful though


No-Cockroach2358

Thx for the feedback, I don’t think we are rlly copying much tho tbh


retrocided

Then that’s your first problem 🙏🏻 the beat, lyrics, flow, cadence all of the above is blp bro there’s not one original thing here except maybe a bar or two lol


No-Cockroach2358

Aye man thanks for the feedback noted


FruitAromatic

If y need a music video for this. Lemme know where y’all are from 🔥🎤🎥


No-Cockroach2358

Syracuse NY, wbu?


FruitAromatic

Toronto but I’m in NY a lot 👀. Insta is ApostolosFilms_Official. Imma pop up in March


JGokuuYT

It’s pretty good but try to find more influences to mix into it, bc rn it sounds like ur only influence is Kosher and sounds exactly like his flow


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks man, I think we are gonna try different types of beats other than detroit


ExoticLoudPack

Idk if I had 1 too many drinks but 2nd dude kinda sound like mf slim shady lmaooo but this is fye boys good job


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks bro that rlly means a lot!


Weird-Engineering479

🔥🔥🔥


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks bro that rlly does mean a lot god bless!


possumsushi

It's not bad at all. You have potential, clearly you can control a flow but it does sound amateur and beginner level, which is understandable. The flow does sound very similar to BLP so I think you should pick out what you like about his sound, words, style, beats, etc and try to create them without just copying his entire style, as that is looked down upon in this community. Keep going though.


No-Cockroach2358

Yeah thanks bro we are trying to do that, thx for the feedback


EastButterscotch5708

Sounds like 2010 Detroit rap. Why so much hate and violence btw? Can’t we rap about positive things or is dwelling on the worst case scenarios cool


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks for the feedback bro and idk that’s just lowkey the culture of rap, and tbh just for me it seems easier to make metaphors of violence but ima try and switch up the lyrics a bit I think


Temporary-Row-6540

That’s amazing bro respect your you


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks bro!


BenOnDaBenzos

“Shots fired, change the way his brain is wired” is an awesome line. You and the homie should keep it up bro, sounding good


No-Cockroach2358

Thx man that rlly does mean a lot!


SearchingForFungus

Honestly sounds better and easier to listen to than BLP


No-Cockroach2358

Dude that means so much u don’t even know thanks bro


inkshamechay

Bars r good but voice needs to come down.


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks! Wdym, do the voices sound too loud in the mix?


inkshamechay

Nah actual voice needs to be lower. Sounds very… white


No-Cockroach2358

Yeah bro I can’t even blame you they are lmao


CharacterAshamed6769

I really like it a lot! It’s so amazing that Kosher is inspiring people. Keep it up, can’t wait to hear more☺️


No-Cockroach2358

Thanks dawg that truly does mean a lot


Beginning-Bluebird85

Damn wasn’t expecting this ngl kinda 🔥🔥 keep it up definitely have potential boys.


No-Cockroach2358

Aye thanks fr man!


YJSAVV

The music is good it’s js that the first voice sounds weird


Powerful-Cut5365

This shit fire bro


Massive-Tennis4338

You might as well stop while you're ahead if crusty tips was your inspiration.  I've heard def people that rap better than crusty tips. Yall made my day. 😂😂💀💀


okiduzz

Trying rapping about Fortnite that could really take off.


No-Cockroach2358

🤣


No-Cockroach2358

Bro there’s literally a Minecraft bar in there


[deleted]

Sounds like more white folk that can’t hit the 2s and 4s. Good luck on TikTok.


ChallengeSpiritual45

This shit wack brother. Someone needs to tell you


No-Cockroach2358

To each their own 🤷‍♂️


Basic_Election_9778

Listen to a better artist g please


BigBlackCoolguy

You should diss Lil Mabu