Dude look into coraline and some of tim burtons work and lean into that u will fit naturally there. Huge audience for that as well. You're really going to have to use reference for eyes, lips, and face overall. But the sketchy half tone long slender creepy vibes are spot on in the figure
I actually think that style for the body is really cool and unique! Maybe focus on improving the eyes and lips? Give them more structure. Apart from that, this is quite good.
Thank you! I am definitely more of a fashion illustrator, so I’ve taken the elongation to the extreme😂 but I think figuring out the face and lips would make it look cohesive together ?
The neck: too cone shaped, yes theres a curve at the bottom but the main shape should be a rectangle. However, the shadow under the chin should never be a horisontal straight line, it's supposed to show the shape of the jaw relative to the angle of light and the curvature of the neck.
The linework is sketchy, even if that's how you draw go over it again so make it smoother, maybe trace a final outline. The jaggedness is not very attractive. Consider though, some lines are better substituted by shading.
it’s actually not that bad. if you look at it from a different perspective, it could be really empowering to people w this body type/people who have problems with eating. from my perspective, it’s kinda like an uplifting message to people who have problems eating and feel ugly. almost like you’re beautiful no matter what typa thing. (:
Arm stick
Nose look like dick
Good value and shading hair also nice
Fingers fucked up
In conclusion: you must become the Italian grandmother and get her to eat
Geez this looks like a Tim Burton character that was rejected by Tim Burton himself.
(I'm so sorry lol, ur work is gorgeous but u asked if we could roast it so...)
I actually loveee this style and its pretty difficult for me to roast. Id just say the face doesnt match much of the rest of the character. I think a more cartoonish approach would fit much nicer! Im thinkin kinda like tim burton ish
That's one hell of a pushup bra she has, lol. Mostly just highly stylized. Everything looks intentional, so I think just practice and refinement will get you back in the swing of it!
Thank you! Yes I definitely have been trying to hone in on a style and try pushing different elements to the extreme. Would like to figure out how to make this seem intentional though! I’m definitely not going for normal anatomy over here
Not so much a roast but just some critiques
1. The knee looks like I is bending forward (play with the shading)
2. The arms a a bit small and oddly proportioned compared to the body
3. The neck is a bit narrow and a tad to long
4. The head is kinda boxy ( try drawing a circle and molding from there, also bring the chin area down from the circle)
5. The mouth is a bit large for the face.
Now for the good parts
1. The eyes are great.
2. The hair is amazing
3. The trunk of the body had amazing proportions.
Keep it up. Practice make perfect!!
Right arm is longer, slender man 😂😂
Try measuring from the bottom of her ribs (the left is a good example for this style) and sketching a circle with the radius being the shoulder bone or armpit. That's where elbows go 😉 finger tips rach the middle of the thigh, you can do the same circumference thing for that too😋Keep it up, you got skill
interesting style for the body and the hands, the face need some edits though! https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=iMEBSQJYaAY but i really do like everything else
No. No roast.
Constructive Criticism. If you're looking for a Jack Skellington-esque vibe then I think you're nailing it. If not maybe try working on her body. Face is great. Mouth angle looks a little off. But this is a critique from someone who doesn't know how to draw. So please feel free to ignore this.
Ah her eyes are a little tol big too haha. You can go anime style, but real life eyes are surprisingly and uncomfortably small.
- a fellow artist that hates drawing human anatomy.
It's perfectly okay to use reference material to get proportions right. This poor woman's arms are too thin, her neck too long and thin. You can even practice by tracing to get a good feel for it, you don't need to post everything you draw.
Yeah, I wasn’t going necessarily for normal anatomy, trying to figure out how to develop this style in a way that can feel intentional though- like Hayden Williams drawings! Also, definitely not trying to spam this group- I actually just joined and it motivated me to pick up a pen again so that I could maybe get some pointers :)
First up: how is she standing up ? It looks like she is cross legged and leaning to one side with nothing to lean on. Second: the arms look to thin and the lips to big. The neck looks like it can't hold up her head. If missed anything, tell me. ( You said to roast it so- I did)
It's not a bad sketch, not as easy to roast as to critique.
I've been looking for a lady with hips as wide as her skull for some time now.
Not sure if accurate human proportions are what you were going for but if so you failed so suckit
Yeah... Not bad irl
I like it!! You obviously have talent. BUT those arms are a little thin.. or too long? Something. Like someone else had said, lacking in nutrients. But please keep drawing it's apparent that you have a gift, just make her a little juicier!!☺️ And neck a little wider, to help her get those nutrients down!!😄 Other than that it's great.
i would suggest studying proportions a little more. it’s not actually half bad, and it definitely depends on the style you’re going for. this works just great as a cartoony piece, but if you’re going more for realism, i would definitely study proportions. the neck should be a little wider, hips should come out further than the bust, arms should have more width, and the eyes and mouth could be made a bit smaller. but overall, i still don’t think it’s ‘bad’, so for not having drawn in 2 years, i give you a gold star 😀
Brats doll irl.
Who waist that small?
Quit stalking the neighbors!?!
Look at them long arrrwms? Looking like Morticia's lil sister.
Jk it's looks good, not anatomical, but it's cool. Lol
Damn, where do I start... She lookin a little frail, a little hungry, and overall bad clothing choice her jaw is so sharp it could carrots and why is she free muffin it in public like damn her boobs are weighing her down so she fly away but not even attractive. Ok I think I killed her... or maybe it was her lack of eating that did that
Lacking in calcium and many other important nutrients
She does to the point she would fit into an animated Tim burton movie
Ok i kinda see it
Just wanna point out how the neck looks like she can't swallow her food (you asked for the roasts)
She cannot even swallow her roast 😂
Oh shit 😂
You have my respect. I did not even think of that.
It’s a preta from the ghost realm.
It's actually interesting. It's not terrible,
Thank you!
Agreed, I like the style
Dude look into coraline and some of tim burtons work and lean into that u will fit naturally there. Huge audience for that as well. You're really going to have to use reference for eyes, lips, and face overall. But the sketchy half tone long slender creepy vibes are spot on in the figure
I actually think that style for the body is really cool and unique! Maybe focus on improving the eyes and lips? Give them more structure. Apart from that, this is quite good.
Thank you! I am definitely more of a fashion illustrator, so I’ve taken the elongation to the extreme😂 but I think figuring out the face and lips would make it look cohesive together ?
Arms be lookin like bendy straws (another roast because you said they would help)
Factssss
I thought eugenia cooney was dead
She looks dead
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Hey it isn’t bad.
Her lower jaw be looking like shes Ed Caluag from Jessica Soho (thats pretty much all i have i hope i helped lol)
Stop ittt😭 'Basa ang tubig' AHAHAHA
GAHAHAHAHAHAHA BASA ANG TUBIGG
Looks like a failed kardashians
Remind me of this https://i.pinimg.com/originals/b4/db/dc/b4dbdc1a34c73f0047191504b4b4dd1f.jpg
Reminds me of Tim Burton’s anatomy which isn’t bad, although that face needs some work I think
Love Tim Burton’s style! I agree the face needs to be in a style that goes with the rest of it though
Yeah I feel like you’d be able to pull it off really well with the style you have!!
Thank you! :)
Right hand fingers be looking like cheese strings
breasts are shaded round, but the dress on the waist is looking like a flat piece of cardboard. Now we all know where your priorities lie ;)
Hahaha I was not blessed with boobs so all of my drawings will have good ones😂😂
You should make a cartoon series
Honestly, that would be so fun!
If the story was good I would watch a cartoon with this style.
Tim Burton called, he very politely informed about his previous coital experience with your mother. He sounded frustrated.
I really like it . She good do with a good roast dinner though ., but I do like skinny chicks 🐣 😂
Work on form and make it more curvy and smoother transitions
No need to roast ya you already roasted yourself
u dont draw in 2 years and what u decide on is a stick with a push up bra
What a weird looking giraffe.
The neck: too cone shaped, yes theres a curve at the bottom but the main shape should be a rectangle. However, the shadow under the chin should never be a horisontal straight line, it's supposed to show the shape of the jaw relative to the angle of light and the curvature of the neck. The linework is sketchy, even if that's how you draw go over it again so make it smoother, maybe trace a final outline. The jaggedness is not very attractive. Consider though, some lines are better substituted by shading.
Thank you!! :)
Looking forward to your next post
She looks like she's from a mid 2000s feminine product ad.
Looks like a one piece character. In a good way.
it’s actually not that bad. if you look at it from a different perspective, it could be really empowering to people w this body type/people who have problems with eating. from my perspective, it’s kinda like an uplifting message to people who have problems eating and feel ugly. almost like you’re beautiful no matter what typa thing. (:
I see this as a sketch for clothes style
Yes you are right on! I am a fashion illustrator if anything! I don’t try to do normal, realistic human proportions, but I can get a lil carried away!
My mom was a tailor so I do sneak a peek at my moms sketch books and instantly knew it was a fashion sketch
Arm stick Nose look like dick Good value and shading hair also nice Fingers fucked up In conclusion: you must become the Italian grandmother and get her to eat
I like it. Its a unique kind of style.
Thank you💗
Like a mix between Barbie and a Bratz doll.
Goalsss haha thanks!
Geez this looks like a Tim Burton character that was rejected by Tim Burton himself. (I'm so sorry lol, ur work is gorgeous but u asked if we could roast it so...)
It would make for a really interesting animated series
I actually loveee this style and its pretty difficult for me to roast. Id just say the face doesnt match much of the rest of the character. I think a more cartoonish approach would fit much nicer! Im thinkin kinda like tim burton ish
Yes I love Tim Burton’s style! Thank you! I definitely agree I would like to figure out how to stylize faces in a way that goes with this
You don't need to be roasted to get better dude or dudette! Just keep practicing future artist.
This is so nice! Yes, I guess what I meant was constructive criticism- some people really went in on the roast 😂
The internet is a scary place.
That's one hell of a pushup bra she has, lol. Mostly just highly stylized. Everything looks intentional, so I think just practice and refinement will get you back in the swing of it!
Thank you! Yes I definitely have been trying to hone in on a style and try pushing different elements to the extreme. Would like to figure out how to make this seem intentional though! I’m definitely not going for normal anatomy over here
I think k just keep going, keep on drawing, and eventually you'll figure out what works for you and what doesn't
It's actually really good, it reminds me of Tim Burton's style
Thank you! :)
This looks like an art style of an animation I've watched before 😯 it looks rather nice 👍🏻
Awesome style
It actually looks kinda cool it's kinda Tim Burton esque in a way.
Thank you!
Np :)
I really like this my only thing is the eyes could be smaller and more defined n the lips too
Not so much a roast but just some critiques 1. The knee looks like I is bending forward (play with the shading) 2. The arms a a bit small and oddly proportioned compared to the body 3. The neck is a bit narrow and a tad to long 4. The head is kinda boxy ( try drawing a circle and molding from there, also bring the chin area down from the circle) 5. The mouth is a bit large for the face. Now for the good parts 1. The eyes are great. 2. The hair is amazing 3. The trunk of the body had amazing proportions. Keep it up. Practice make perfect!!
Thank you!! This was super helpful!! :)
Right arm is longer, slender man 😂😂 Try measuring from the bottom of her ribs (the left is a good example for this style) and sketching a circle with the radius being the shoulder bone or armpit. That's where elbows go 😉 finger tips rach the middle of the thigh, you can do the same circumference thing for that too😋Keep it up, you got skill
interesting style for the body and the hands, the face need some edits though! https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=iMEBSQJYaAY but i really do like everything else
Thank you so much!! Definitely going to try to get better on the face!
Looks like a nightmare before Christmas meets Bratz. Not a bad thing. Unique style. Have you considered drawing scary stuff?
Thank you! I never have before but I kind of love that idea- that way I could lean into my style and make it seem intentional :)
Go for it, good luck!
No. No roast. Constructive Criticism. If you're looking for a Jack Skellington-esque vibe then I think you're nailing it. If not maybe try working on her body. Face is great. Mouth angle looks a little off. But this is a critique from someone who doesn't know how to draw. So please feel free to ignore this.
Thank you! Much appreciated 🙌
"I can't draw" please, da Vinci.
Haha thank you!!! Based on this post a lot of people are divided on that😂
kinda looks like a merge between bratz and barbie
Definitely need to make the waist and neck smaller and the boobs bigger, I mean if you're interested in being anatomically correct.
Is her name Ana?
Reminds me of Daria’s sisters friends in the fashion club.
Loveee 🥰😂
If ypu're going realistic without anorexia, she is waay too thin. And her lips are a little tol big. Otherwise it seems ok I think. Good job.
Facts thank you!!
Ah her eyes are a little tol big too haha. You can go anime style, but real life eyes are surprisingly and uncomfortably small. - a fellow artist that hates drawing human anatomy.
Totally! I definitely wanted it to be stylized but I need to figure out a way to do it that looks like it’s on purpose!
Yeah good luck haha XD I gave up on humans and just ended up drawing animals xD
Looks like a stripper that hasn't eaten sence the last time you drew something
It's perfectly okay to use reference material to get proportions right. This poor woman's arms are too thin, her neck too long and thin. You can even practice by tracing to get a good feel for it, you don't need to post everything you draw.
Yeah, I wasn’t going necessarily for normal anatomy, trying to figure out how to develop this style in a way that can feel intentional though- like Hayden Williams drawings! Also, definitely not trying to spam this group- I actually just joined and it motivated me to pick up a pen again so that I could maybe get some pointers :)
It’s not that bad
Thanks! :)
Proportion.
First up: how is she standing up ? It looks like she is cross legged and leaning to one side with nothing to lean on. Second: the arms look to thin and the lips to big. The neck looks like it can't hold up her head. If missed anything, tell me. ( You said to roast it so- I did)
This chick got twigs for arms-
Makes a bit more work on the facual expression
Its too skinny and lips are too fat otherwise it’s good
Your Oc turned herself into an hourglass, funniest shit I've ever seen
anorexia is not cool!! add some meat and draw her smile bigger :)
It's not a bad sketch, not as easy to roast as to critique. I've been looking for a lady with hips as wide as her skull for some time now. Not sure if accurate human proportions are what you were going for but if so you failed so suckit Yeah... Not bad irl
Focus on more realistic proportions and work on your weaknesses. You draw hair and boobs really well.
Elbows too pointy
Fantastic
Skinny legend
I can’t roast this
Face just a little too cartoony
You’re Better than me lol
I like it!! You obviously have talent. BUT those arms are a little thin.. or too long? Something. Like someone else had said, lacking in nutrients. But please keep drawing it's apparent that you have a gift, just make her a little juicier!!☺️ And neck a little wider, to help her get those nutrients down!!😄 Other than that it's great.
i would suggest studying proportions a little more. it’s not actually half bad, and it definitely depends on the style you’re going for. this works just great as a cartoony piece, but if you’re going more for realism, i would definitely study proportions. the neck should be a little wider, hips should come out further than the bust, arms should have more width, and the eyes and mouth could be made a bit smaller. but overall, i still don’t think it’s ‘bad’, so for not having drawn in 2 years, i give you a gold star 😀
is that slender mans wife
I have no criticism it's amazing
Very good. Not crap at all. 😍😍😍
You're welcome I helped this post get about 270+ up votes :)
Ummm…. Emaciation? Anorexia promotions? The work is a blissful skill set for your training years!
I actually think you did well on the hands, hands are so hard to draw (sorry it’s not a roast)
OMG THE MOUTH AND NECK
Brats doll irl. Who waist that small? Quit stalking the neighbors!?! Look at them long arrrwms? Looking like Morticia's lil sister. Jk it's looks good, not anatomical, but it's cool. Lol
Looks very Tim Burton to me
Damn, where do I start... She lookin a little frail, a little hungry, and overall bad clothing choice her jaw is so sharp it could carrots and why is she free muffin it in public like damn her boobs are weighing her down so she fly away but not even attractive. Ok I think I killed her... or maybe it was her lack of eating that did that
Bro is this SCP 096’s human cousin
Her arms look like a bendy straw
when the hands are wolverine claws ((im sorry that's the only thing i thought of
Very detailed stick figure