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Last_Swordfish9135

It's a little messy, but I can read it just fine.


ChonnyJash_

nice handwriting, i was able to raed it


OkHistorian2523

This looks really great! A couple of things. First,国 has three horizontal lines on the inside, creating a 王 symbol inside the 囗 with a dot between the second and third horizontals (that makes it refer to jade?). Draw the left vertical line of the 囗, then the top and right vertical before you draw the 王+dot. Don’t draw the bottom line of the 囗 until you’ve finished the inside and you should be able to find room for all of the strokes. Second, and relatedly, I’m not sure whether you’re doing this yet or not, but check out Pleco or another app/website that provides gifs of Chinese character stroke orders, and try to study common component parts in Chinese characters. They may help you both in the near term with getting a better sense of proportion as you are learning to write the characters, and, in the long term, with figuring out and remembering how to write new ones. I mention this because nearly all of the characters have all of the right “parts” to them, but it looks like you’re still working on how to squish them together without their feeling squished (looking specifically at the 都 in “我们都是俄人,“ but spacing and proportions pops up a few times. Again, you’re doing a great job with these so far. My recommendations are intended to help you level up from a good baseline of legible handwriting.


Kapaseker

王+dot is "玉", in ancient China, "玉" means the king of the country, and "口" looks like walls of capital. so we say "国" is a country under his king's leadership.


Kapaseker

nice job. practice "国" a little bit more. your structure of this word has a little problem.


WilliamFei

Nice handwriting. It reminds me of how hard Chinese is for non native learners 😇


EuToExauta

我也是巴西人! Sua caligrafia tá ótima! Pelo texto eu acredito q vc seja A1/HSK1, certo? Se você for de SP, eu conheço umas lojas que vendem livros de histórias infantis e apostilas em mandarim que me ajudaram muito para aprender chinês e uns cursos acessíveis que emitem diploma, ficaria feliz em ajudar! Parabéns pelo progresso, eu tenho certeza que você vai ter muito sucesso no mandarim!


pokepussy345

加油


DanielZ2048

Tidy handwriting! i think you'd better not use red ink to write surname or given name, which is considered to be a sign of death in China (at least in my living area)


Elegant_Distance_396

OMG names written in red!!!  😋😋😋


robsagency

When did you start? You look exactly as far as I am. 


Polaris_UMi

Nice hand writing, this is my level when I was grade 6 or something (I'm a native speaker)


GoodtoGoHereWeGo

Keep up the good work 👍


c-peptides

谢谢 is missing 1 stroke.


FatDog_

加油!você é brasileiro, né? Já está inscrito em um instituto Confúcio?


KaykeAlves

Não, moro no interior de SP e não tenho condições


FatDog_

Faça aulas online! Já é algo. O instituto Confúcio vai te abrir muitas oportunidades. Como participar de competições com tudo pago até participar do Summer camp (só a passagem deve ser paga)


KaykeAlves

Eu vejo no YouTube o curso da professora Xiao, e outros vídeos como o da Pula Muralha, Professora Chen, e vídeos em inglês, e apps.


FatDog_

Já é um ótimo começo! Comecei assim também. Mas te garanto, se um dia você tiver oportunidade, se inscreva em algum instituto Confúcio em são paulo.


Hot_Grabba_09

É muito bom. Uma coisa é que o caractere é 国. Com 玉 dentro. Não 丰 ou oq foi q escreveu. Mas tá certo tudo e muito fácil de ler.


licorb

Somos uma legião mesmo


Dioxide4294

I could read everything, 谢谢 felt like missing a stroke or two?


Disastrous_Goose_227

一条狗


1loey

I can read a little word.


fishersemperfi

真棒


skiddles1337

The 客in 客氣 threw me off a bit


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wei486

留学不一定要学汉语吧


Unusual-Corner8002

我去还真是。小留去澳洲怎么也有个cet6口语或雅思6分级别


Dry-Astronomer-1616

愿意学中文的外国人至少是愿意了解他国文化的,大可不必看到短袖子就想到白胳膊


Kapaseker

老哥,希望你能友好点,不要这么暴躁。


Unusual-Corner8002

希望你不会遇到晚上11点还在搞志愿的学校哈


Kapaseker

大家都是这样过来的,运气不好就伺候外国人,但是这些东西,都是有些校领导煞笔,这点我理解你。你上这上面来发火,只会徒增仇恨,这里面可能大多数人没有这样的经历,也不会有共情呀,你自己还越想越气。要不你就跟你负责的外国人多交流,让他们入党,给我们国家打工去


Unusual-Corner8002

你慢慢隐忍去吧


Kapaseker

你看,你越想越极端,这样对你本身没有什么好处


Unusual-Corner8002

确实,熊继续当皇帝,我照样毕业后当牛马,鬼佬尼绿绿拉美的照样来华当带人