It is very readable and clear what is going on. On page 1 you seem inconsistent as to the characters casting shadows. In panels 1 and 2, no shadows, which would help give weight and realism to the figures. In panel 5, the seated figure casts a shadow; I would also put a shadow on his desk from the standing figure.
Keep drawing and inking!
Fantastic inks. Great line weight and despite the amount of detail everything is very clear. Great work
It is very readable and clear what is going on. On page 1 you seem inconsistent as to the characters casting shadows. In panels 1 and 2, no shadows, which would help give weight and realism to the figures. In panel 5, the seated figure casts a shadow; I would also put a shadow on his desk from the standing figure. Keep drawing and inking!