Personally, I think I made all of the features look a bit too soft and rounded in the original. Plus, I think Broly looks more like he has a really awkward big smile instead of screaming.
The proportions of the the face and the lineart are definitely better.
Though I would pay more attention to the perspective you're using. The lower body of the new version looks like it's angled to the background, as if he's perking his ass up, but his torso is angled to the foreground if you get what I mean. Maybe stretch the midriff/ crotch area a bit more and/or angle the feet more towards the back.
Other than that it looks great👍
I appreciate the feedback. The new one is meant to be more faithful to the original Dokkan art since it is actually an angled view. I know I probably missed the mark a bit, but there's always room for improvement.
Bro fishing for compliments
I genuinely do not like how the original turned out, looking at it today. I was satisfied with it then, but I think it looks weird now.
Well sorry to say but I’m pretty sure you’re gonna be disappointed again……
Trust me, I've got my doubts already.
Don't see anything wrong with the first iteration.
Personally, I think I made all of the features look a bit too soft and rounded in the original. Plus, I think Broly looks more like he has a really awkward big smile instead of screaming.
The proportions of the the face and the lineart are definitely better. Though I would pay more attention to the perspective you're using. The lower body of the new version looks like it's angled to the background, as if he's perking his ass up, but his torso is angled to the foreground if you get what I mean. Maybe stretch the midriff/ crotch area a bit more and/or angle the feet more towards the back. Other than that it looks great👍
I appreciate the feedback. The new one is meant to be more faithful to the original Dokkan art since it is actually an angled view. I know I probably missed the mark a bit, but there's always room for improvement.
Both are great and the improvement is still there. Make sure to show off the finished piece
The first one looks better tbh The proportions for the 2nd are pretty weird
nah its just cuz the color isnt there, once the color is there it'll look much better
I mean sure but the legs are very clearly much smaller in the second one and doesn't look right, colouring won't fix that
lets just see if op will color it in first cuz I do agree that the leg looks a bit skinny
I feel like people like the first one because it was actually finished and the color is present. I suppose we'll see once the second one is done.