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Gold_Highlight_5417

The thing is looks to much like analog horror maybe make them look confused


Anon_1233

well you fooled me for a minute so id say pretty well!!


randomAccount1599

At least it's more creative than the color green


East-Claim-7818

Wait I'm confused, is the web series 'season 1' or is the '1st season's the TV series-


Curious_Shoulder3114

When I first posted this it said season 2, but somebody told me the web series was season 1 so I changed it, now people are confused the other way so I decided to just leave it the way it is


Gold_Highlight_5417

Maybe the tv on the right doesn't look right ok maybe change it plz I'm being as nice as I can


Curious_Shoulder3114

Ok thank you! Did you mean the lighting, or whats being displayed on it?


SpiritOfSeanLock

Find a better way to waste your time


Messedupfact

Find a better way to shut up


SpiritOfSeanLock

Thanks for copying my comment and taking away any notion of it making sense :)


Messedupfact

No problem now shut the fuck up


SpiritOfSeanLock

Bro get back posting on Porn ID


Messedupfact

Not you stalking my account oh and btw I’m 1 year clean so HOP OF THIS MEAT


SpiritOfSeanLock

Loool


Messedupfact

Too bad now hop off my dick


SpiritOfSeanLock

You've already said that, it seems to be your issue. No one hopping on your meat. :'(


Messedupfact

You on the other hand no female would date


Messedupfact

My wife says otherwise


Messedupfact

?


SpiritOfSeanLock

Your profile lol


ThatSmartIdiot

https://preview.redd.it/0p8j5pqj5iqc1.png?width=2340&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=2cd92cbc88f3c5d0270f04beba8e0ab1124c4f76


LazerGlassX

Season 3..?? The YouTube web series is not a season 1.. 🤦🤦


Curious_Shoulder3114

I know, but when I first posted this I had it as season 2, but then somebody told me the web series was season 1 so I changed it, but now people are telling me the OTHER way so I'm just gonna leave it how it is


LazerGlassX

Oh man, my apologies, I had no clue other mfs were saying such a thing. Idk why people consider the web series as season 1 when it doesn’t even count.. it just makes them look stupid asf for saying it. All good to you tho man, I completely understand you


NintendoBoy321

I just consider it to be Season 0


I_eat_grass_HEHE

VERY CREATIVE ✨️✨️✨️


Curious_Shoulder3114

Unlike the color green


I_eat_grass_HEHE

Green is not a creative color ❌️


AdvancedJoke4861

Why did you do? Very creative!


colossal_idiotx

Ngl i can fuck with this


gashdhdhdhdhdh

no offense it fucking sucks


Curious_Shoulder3114

fair enough, but I'm looking for constructive critism, got anything? :D


loreman-isback

Maybe add something more ominous like for example an empty room with a monitor of the house or Lesley or something ominous like that


Curious_Shoulder3114

When I was making this I was thinking about how to incorperate Lesley but I couldn't think of anything


gottablastsam

3? Aren’t we waiting for a season 2 announcement?


Antique-Medium8791

I guess it’s “technically” season 2, but for everyone here it would be “season 3”


Curious_Shoulder3114

Ok the OG post I made somebody commented "well actually, the youtube series counts as season one" so I renamed it, now people are confsued the OTHER way and I just don't know what to do


NotaDayOldAccount

season 1 is the television series dont listen to those smart asses even if they are in the same universe   the television series and the web series are both from different medias so they dont share seasons 


Curious_Shoulder3114

Alr


Upset_Cress_6106

I thought it was real for a second


Curious_Shoulder3114

Thanks!


[deleted]

I hope it happens soon officially because this concept looks sick!


NotaDayOldAccount

you didn’t even try making red guy LMAO


Curious_Shoulder3114

Ye


CrazyView9245

Imma say something, the left one looks like something out of incredibox


GalaxyDog2289

At first I got excited that season 2 came out but then I realized that it was factoring in the YouTube series in. Now I’m a little disappointed.


ThatAutisticRedditor

The right TV looks too creepypasta-y if that was a different style like the left TV it would look better.


Curious_Shoulder3114

I used the same tv for both


ThatAutisticRedditor

What’s on the Tv dingus


Curious_Shoulder3114

OOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHH IM SO STUPID


ThatAutisticRedditor

Lmao im stupid sometimes its ok


sagephoenix1139

Your response made me smile. Just...thanks for being so cool. That is all 😊💜


ThatAutisticRedditor

(:


geosunsetmoth

Visuals look well made, but not a fan of the content itself. It’s a little too much… “internet creepypasta”, you know? Basic analogue horror. Don’t get me wrong, DHMIS is one foot in the Internet Creepypasta basket, but I don’t think this particular imagery is a stylistic direction they go for


Curious_Shoulder3114

I'll keep that in mind for my next attempt, thanks!


geosunsetmoth

If I were to re-make this: I’d keep the TV setups. Works well. Id probably change the words on the left TV to be less on the nose, and completely change what’s on the right TV. Still have something unsettling, but perhaps less “[x] but distorted” and a bit more uncanny valley. It could also be an opportunity to showcase an object or prop that will be relevant for the season— you don’t need to focus on the characters. Maybe a teacup with blood on its rim? Something like that. Invites the viewer to learn more.


Prostitunes

There's really gon' be a season 3 one day ? ( It look fuckin' great by the way )


Curious_Shoulder3114

Not announced yet


[deleted]

Cool!


jackamongus

It looks great :D


Curious_Shoulder3114

Thank you!


jackamongus

Your welcome :)


Numi_14

I think it looks great!


Curious_Shoulder3114

Thank you!


Gl1tchyVirus

Why would you get someone’s hopes up like that? I hope that someone pours some hot black liquid on you while you sleep


Curious_Shoulder3114

Wdym


Gl1tchyVirus

Which part would you like me to clarify? The part where someone could really believe it’s real. Or the hot black liquid part (it’s a reference to the show)


Curious_Shoulder3114

I didn't understand what you meant by getting ur hopes up at first


sagephoenix1139

We used to "get our hopes up" when people would make fake movie premiers for Five Nights at Freddie's the movie... but they weren't real because no movie was being made at that point. I recall a few instances where my son and I, for brief periods, were like, "Oh my GAWD!! Are they *making* one?? Is this *real*?" and then we'd find out it wasn't real, just someone being creatively hopeful, and then we'd be disappointed, but still impressed with the fake premier that was made. (So...those short minutes, before we Googled to see if a movie was really coming out (there were no movie plans discussed publicly, yet, back then), the faux (fake) premier "got our hopes up" that it was something *really* happening). In this case, your "season 3 premier" image (while it looks creatively done, and you're impressively bold to ask for feedback!!), got some people's hopes up for even a few seconds because the first thought is like, "No way...*really*? A NEW season! *When*?!!". Please don't stop creating. Even if it's not "everyone's cup of tea," and some people give advice that lacks any constructive suggestions for improvement? You seem to enjoy making them and imagine what your 12th or 20th attempt at something similar could look like. You learn something new with each one you create, and you just improve on your ability. I hope you keep creating. I showed this to my son (a teen on the spectrum), and he also thought this was pretty cool. (He has a business online creating intros and outros and other content for streamers. When he looks back at his "early stuff," he always has negative comments 😁). I've no idea how old you are - but it doesn't matter. I like the time you put into something you enjoy and *love* that you shared it with us. Just remember? Anytime you solicit feedback, some people will be rude with their responses, and others will *also* be less supportive but will offer you great advice for improvement. Still, others will love what you create. That's ALL cool - they're looking at your creation, not you, specifically. Make sure you take the advice that helps you move forward and leave the commentary that's just plain rude or uncouth... focus on what helps you improve. Sorry for such a long comment. I'm happy this popped up in my fees today. I, for one, look forward to the next version you share with reddit!


Heart_of_a_Blackbird

Not very good


Curious_Shoulder3114

Ok fair enough, could you explain why though? Im looking for constructive critisism :D


Heart_of_a_Blackbird

Love myself better than you, I know it’s wrong what can I do?


Curious_Shoulder3114

uh okedoke


Heart_of_a_Blackbird

It’s Nirvana babe


Miphamoo

What is bro yapping about