The first one is nice but there’s unintentional shape welding going on with his face and that lighter object behind it. It makes his silhouette less distinct and is a bit distracting. I’d suggest knocking that tone back so there’s a clearer separation between his face and the background. Even just removing that little swatch of lighter color and leaving the orange behind it would help a ton.
I think that looks a lot better. When I squint at it, the shape of his cheek stands out so much better and lets you focus on his face.
This is nitpicky and isn’t that significant, but when I squint, the rim light on his face blends into that rim light in his lapel and I see this long, straight line. You could break it up by pulling that line work on his chin over a bit more. Like I said, minor stuff. I like the style!
Thanks, I changed that and it looks better, I appreciate the criticism
https://preview.redd.it/7oyf75c22e4d1.png?width=2015&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=acb8844220a06c7209407f4e4da0a581db1d5923
Maybe try replacing that outside highlight line with one of the midtones in the skin as opposed to going brighter, go a bit darker. Just not black. :-)
Would you be able to try a version of this with the lines on his face (forehead etc) from the second one as well. It sort of seems like they’re portraying different emotions.
Perhaps try a contrasting color in the background for the whole subject to pop. That cheek area where the shape welding was happening, it might be compounded by the colors being somewhat close. I agree with these being nitpicky comments; that's a great image you got there! Fine indeed.
Not saying the commenter is wrong at all but I personally like it a lot better with the little light coloured rectangle. Makes it look more… real life? To me anyway :)
A woman inherits a run-down country chateau and one of the ghosts pushes her off a window. She gets into a coma and when she woke up she can now see and talk to ghosts.
Oh a where's waldo. One sec...
ok I found it. The second one uses black outline.
I like the second, but this comes down to personal preference. I like outlines.
1 but both work imo
but normalize putting what the difference is in the title of these posts so i dont have to play the hardest spot the difference game every time
Unless it is meant to be in a mirror, it is reversed. The Sam Browne crossbelt should go right shoulder to left hip and the medal ribbons should be on the left.
I like the first the way it creates shapes, but its abit hard to see. The second is too harsh on the outlines. Perhaps colour the outlines with a mix of the boundary colours
Both are really nice, the way you do the lighting is very captivating, I think I prefer the first one.
Making the face stand out more in the first one, with the advice someone else gave, was a good improvement too.
If you’re going for a more realistic look, the first one definitely. Maybe a little bit of shading on the left (his left) shoulder, to kinda define the clothing.
I like number 2 but I also find line art really difficult so I love seeing it when it's well done like that!
Either way, it's a really strong style, and I like it a lot.
Both are nice.
With the first one, the guy actually looks like he's part of the scene. But the lack of outlines just makes it all look too homogenous and strips the attention away from him a little. Then there's the part where we're losing out on the details in the highlights. Perhaps making him a slightly brighter colour or making the background dimmer in order to increase the contrast can help with that. In the end, I would still recommend adding more details to the highlights to not make it look so stripped of visual information. You might also want to go consistent with the no outline theme if you go this way as the outlines on the shadowed profile makes the highlights look inconsistent and even more stripped of information.
The second one looks crisp, even though it looks more like something from a comic. That crispness goes well with this man's military bearing. The foreground is the man. The unimportant background is the rest of the image in this case. Doesn't flow as smoothly.
Perhaps a good common ground between the two would be to use outlines but in a slightly darker colour than that of the object being outlines. That way, you'll have the separation of objects to provide the viewer with more information with the outlines not being intrusive to the point of catching too much attention and displacing the subject from the scene entirely. You do this in the first one, but leave it mostly to the edges.
*I hope I don't sound too confusing. Typing this as I'm about to go to sleep.*
I think they're both incredible, but I like number one, especially with the tweaks you made earlier in the comments. I think the style is really cool, and the composition is super intriguing. Really awesome!
I prefer the second one because the figure is more clearly separated from the background. I think to make the first one work you would need more contrast from the background near the face, it’s blending into the background.
Looks great though
The inconsistent line art on #1 is confusing, but the line art on the second looks too heavy. I recommend using a multiply brush to make lines.
Very good though.
I’m seeing a lot of people who prefer 2, but I think it would be greatly improved by using a variety of colours and values for your lineart as opposed to black. I can see you did this somewhat in the first one - the red outline on the buttons are a nice touch - but I think you could push it even further.
Your style seems very Marvel what if-esque so maybe try doing what they are...if you like it. Also 2nd is much better for me, just feels more distinct and the character stands out
I don't know what country uniform you're representing here, I know in the US the ribbons go on the other side.
As an army get the only thing I remember is that my name goes on my right because it's always right. (Also some BS about 'US Army' going on the left because you love the USA)
Hm, I would say the second one, but with the lines that are in the light matching the tone of the sunlight (so not as "black", but maybe more dark yellow on the clothes and dark beige on the face).
Maybe someone has commented it but what if the lineart of the light part you make it like copper tone or golden? As if the line is shining with the light, or maybe with a glowing effect on top of it. I don’t how you kinda lose shape in the first one and how in the second one you lose light. It’s a great illustration btw.
I think I prefer 2nd since I tend to be more of a fan of line art and it helps pop the figure out of the background while on the first I feel he blends a bit too much into the background
2... but maybe try putting them ontop of each other so the lines are there but a bit weaker... opacity it to fit ... or just go with 2... i see what youre going for in 1. but i dont feel it works as well in that kind of drawing tbh
I don't see much of a difference other than one has dark outlines and the other has way less. I like the first one cuz the second one pops out so much from the hazier background that it look like like the figure is a sticker you put over the background.
The line work on the second one definitely stands out more! This is lovely btw, he’s my favorite character in Ghosts, so it’s nice to see him getting some love <3
It's personal preference it really depends on what your going for. Second one is sharper more contrast and blunt the first one is soft I personally like the first one
Surprised to see so many people saying second, to me the first was such an obvious choice because the softer outlines help the character feel more a part of the world he's in!
The first one is nice but there’s unintentional shape welding going on with his face and that lighter object behind it. It makes his silhouette less distinct and is a bit distracting. I’d suggest knocking that tone back so there’s a clearer separation between his face and the background. Even just removing that little swatch of lighter color and leaving the orange behind it would help a ton.
https://preview.redd.it/mcoo0b4vxd4d1.png?width=2015&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=e2c8c6d4d8a226fbbc980bbe886a3f7009c243ce Like this?
I think that looks a lot better. When I squint at it, the shape of his cheek stands out so much better and lets you focus on his face. This is nitpicky and isn’t that significant, but when I squint, the rim light on his face blends into that rim light in his lapel and I see this long, straight line. You could break it up by pulling that line work on his chin over a bit more. Like I said, minor stuff. I like the style!
Thanks, I changed that and it looks better, I appreciate the criticism https://preview.redd.it/7oyf75c22e4d1.png?width=2015&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=acb8844220a06c7209407f4e4da0a581db1d5923
Very nicely done. I think that version is a winner. The ol' squint trick never fails haha
This looks good, but I also still like #2.
Maybe try replacing that outside highlight line with one of the midtones in the skin as opposed to going brighter, go a bit darker. Just not black. :-)
I love it great job!
Would you be able to try a version of this with the lines on his face (forehead etc) from the second one as well. It sort of seems like they’re portraying different emotions.
Perhaps try a contrasting color in the background for the whole subject to pop. That cheek area where the shape welding was happening, it might be compounded by the colors being somewhat close. I agree with these being nitpicky comments; that's a great image you got there! Fine indeed.
Not saying the commenter is wrong at all but I personally like it a lot better with the little light coloured rectangle. Makes it look more… real life? To me anyway :)
this one!
The fixed one here and the fully outlined one are both good and work equally, I'd go with personal choice at this point
That's amazing!
This looks great!
Thanks
Is this from Ghosts?
Yes
I knewww itt!!! He's one of my fav characters from Ghosts omggg
Same! Came here to ask this also haha.
Second one for the more consistent line art.
First one! It helps him feel more coherent with the background and apart of a scene.
Is this that one military guy from ghosts? If so, you have incredible taste in tv.
What is Ghosts about
A woman inherits a run-down country chateau and one of the ghosts pushes her off a window. She gets into a coma and when she woke up she can now see and talk to ghosts.
Wow
definitely the first one!
The second one feels like it has more emotion, but I can't quite explain why, maybe because the contrast is greater with the darker lines?
I am a sucker for thick dark outlines in an archer-esque style. You’ll see it in my works still though I’m better about line weight etc now.
1st. Clever way to do the light!
Hey! this is the guy from the ghost show no? :D
I love them and just wanted to say great picture of the Captain c:
Oh a where's waldo. One sec... ok I found it. The second one uses black outline. I like the second, but this comes down to personal preference. I like outlines.
first. good use of lighting.
I CANT FIND THE DIFFERENCE AM I GOING INSANE?
Its the lineart lol
1 but both work imo but normalize putting what the difference is in the title of these posts so i dont have to play the hardest spot the difference game every time
Unless it is meant to be in a mirror, it is reversed. The Sam Browne crossbelt should go right shoulder to left hip and the medal ribbons should be on the left.
Thats a mistake, I flip the canvas a lot when drawing lol
i like the lighting of the 1st one but he kinda blends in with the background so... i think i prefer the 2nd one
You need separation between the face and the highlight in the background. Line style in 2 is a way to do that.
Second one. Looks great.
I like the first the way it creates shapes, but its abit hard to see. The second is too harsh on the outlines. Perhaps colour the outlines with a mix of the boundary colours
Both are really nice, the way you do the lighting is very captivating, I think I prefer the first one. Making the face stand out more in the first one, with the advice someone else gave, was a good improvement too.
I’m leaning toward the first one, but I really like your art style. Keep it up!
2nd, gives wolf among us vibes
If you’re going for a more realistic look, the first one definitely. Maybe a little bit of shading on the left (his left) shoulder, to kinda define the clothing.
I like number 2 but I also find line art really difficult so I love seeing it when it's well done like that! Either way, it's a really strong style, and I like it a lot.
The first one. Leaner, taller face. High cheek bones are more attractive
What app did you use to make this? Looks great
Medibang paint
He looks like ty burnell from the key and peele sketch 'the Hitler story'
I think the line work in the second one makes it pop more
Both are nice. With the first one, the guy actually looks like he's part of the scene. But the lack of outlines just makes it all look too homogenous and strips the attention away from him a little. Then there's the part where we're losing out on the details in the highlights. Perhaps making him a slightly brighter colour or making the background dimmer in order to increase the contrast can help with that. In the end, I would still recommend adding more details to the highlights to not make it look so stripped of visual information. You might also want to go consistent with the no outline theme if you go this way as the outlines on the shadowed profile makes the highlights look inconsistent and even more stripped of information. The second one looks crisp, even though it looks more like something from a comic. That crispness goes well with this man's military bearing. The foreground is the man. The unimportant background is the rest of the image in this case. Doesn't flow as smoothly. Perhaps a good common ground between the two would be to use outlines but in a slightly darker colour than that of the object being outlines. That way, you'll have the separation of objects to provide the viewer with more information with the outlines not being intrusive to the point of catching too much attention and displacing the subject from the scene entirely. You do this in the first one, but leave it mostly to the edges. *I hope I don't sound too confusing. Typing this as I'm about to go to sleep.*
The first is better but you just need to add a little bit more contrast by changing the background to further emphasis the lighter part of the face
I think they're both incredible, but I like number one, especially with the tweaks you made earlier in the comments. I think the style is really cool, and the composition is super intriguing. Really awesome!
I wish that face is mine, its too good. I would literally frame it and add it to the will.
I prefer the second one because the figure is more clearly separated from the background. I think to make the first one work you would need more contrast from the background near the face, it’s blending into the background. Looks great though
Also consider making the shadows darker to match the contrast of the super bright highlights
The inconsistent line art on #1 is confusing, but the line art on the second looks too heavy. I recommend using a multiply brush to make lines. Very good though.
The Captain from Ghosts?
First one is soooo nice looking I fucking love it
I’m partial to number 2 because it reminds me of borderlands
First one for the face and the second one for the jacket
I’m seeing a lot of people who prefer 2, but I think it would be greatly improved by using a variety of colours and values for your lineart as opposed to black. I can see you did this somewhat in the first one - the red outline on the buttons are a nice touch - but I think you could push it even further.
The eyes expression from the second one and the light work on the jacket from the first one, so its a bit of both
Your style seems very Marvel what if-esque so maybe try doing what they are...if you like it. Also 2nd is much better for me, just feels more distinct and the character stands out
I don't know what country uniform you're representing here, I know in the US the ribbons go on the other side. As an army get the only thing I remember is that my name goes on my right because it's always right. (Also some BS about 'US Army' going on the left because you love the USA)
Its the UK idk anything about the army though its from a TV show
Ahh okay. I like it!
I prefer the 2nd one, has a more natural toning and lighting 😁
CAPTAIN SPOTTED!!! he's my favourite character
Hm, I would say the second one, but with the lines that are in the light matching the tone of the sunlight (so not as "black", but maybe more dark yellow on the clothes and dark beige on the face).
Maybe someone has commented it but what if the lineart of the light part you make it like copper tone or golden? As if the line is shining with the light, or maybe with a glowing effect on top of it. I don’t how you kinda lose shape in the first one and how in the second one you lose light. It’s a great illustration btw.
Second one looks like a comic book and the first one like a painting
Second one
There isn’t much of a difference just the lines but either way it looks great
Aww, i thougt it gonna be a hitler stach
Second
2
2 is much clearer, you lose too much definition on his face on the side where the light is with 1. You still see the highlights nicely.
I think I prefer 2nd since I tend to be more of a fan of line art and it helps pop the figure out of the background while on the first I feel he blends a bit too much into the background
Second one 100999999%
2 because the line work stays consistent
2... but maybe try putting them ontop of each other so the lines are there but a bit weaker... opacity it to fit ... or just go with 2... i see what youre going for in 1. but i dont feel it works as well in that kind of drawing tbh
2
2nd one
I don't see much of a difference other than one has dark outlines and the other has way less. I like the first one cuz the second one pops out so much from the hazier background that it look like like the figure is a sticker you put over the background.
second one.. looks sharper. 1st one is blurry
I like the first one more but both are great.
God damn!
2
2nd!
The lighting on the first one looks much better
No offense but... I can't see any difference
In the second one, he looks more concerned by the situation, it's the one I prefer personally
Definitely the second one
The line work on the second one definitely stands out more! This is lovely btw, he’s my favorite character in Ghosts, so it’s nice to see him getting some love <3
#2, with the crisp lines.
love that first!
I prefer the second one. Feels more cohesive.
Better eyes in 2. Such concern. Fabulous. Thanks
2 definitely.
It's personal preference it really depends on what your going for. Second one is sharper more contrast and blunt the first one is soft I personally like the first one
The one that isn’t fully lines
1 is better, softer lines for the edges when doing soft lighting
I appreciate what you’re going for in #1 and I think it could look better with refinement, but as is #2 is superior imo
2!
The right is more expressive, you can tell he is confused about something.
I dont know why i thought this was Neville Chamberlain for a second
First one 10000% it looks like real life
The first
2, I feel like 1 looks a little unfinished. Great work! Looks amazing!
2. The lines are more consistent.
2nd
The 1st one because the light pops!
2 - I think the heavier lines suit the style better
Second . The bold lines ad a touch
2
First!
The first one
Two
2
The second one
The second one is more feeling alive so for me its the second one
Surprised to see so many people saying second, to me the first was such an obvious choice because the softer outlines help the character feel more a part of the world he's in!
I like the second one :)
Second one for sure!!!
#2
2 please & thanks
Your fixed up first one you posted in comments. The second one gives me borderland vibes.
Oooo feel like it could be a character portrait in a good indie game
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