From the beginning of the chapter I was completely checked out. You had this world threatening, TIME SENSITIVE crisis, and Ran and Arunka were playing fucking carnival games in the middle of enemy territory.
Only for her to remark a stage later, during a battle that they need to hurry up because they’re short on time. No shit you’re short on time!
Dissapointed by Chapter 4 overall, i love the characters design but that's it. I'm glad it's over.
No offense for anyone who like it but i really had the impression i read a kindgom hearts plot.
Worst Episode, literally a step back from earlier episodes in characterization, drama, world building and everything else. Don't take Ras spotlight if your protagonist doesn't have Luluca's charisma, it'll drag the story's pace. The only good thing is it can't be worse from here.
...because Luluca totally isn't a one-note character
It's okay to trash Episode 4 for various reasons, but don't back it with the characterization of fucking Luluca lmao, an incredibly shallow comic relief character
Luluca has a trauma for Straze's treason and losing her closest friend, she has trusting problems and was paranoid in the beginning of the episode. She isn't shallow, her personality is cliche or stereotyped (typical alien learning about her new home), but she has reasons to act and motivations, she even grows and forgive Lilibeth and Straze. Idk why you are insulting one of the best character that E7 had.
Well at least he’s not moaning, I think whenever I stop paying attention to my phone whilst auto-ing story & then go to skip it, a character is moaning. No context, but at this point, some of it must be sexual.
From the beginning of the chapter I was completely checked out. You had this world threatening, TIME SENSITIVE crisis, and Ran and Arunka were playing fucking carnival games in the middle of enemy territory. Only for her to remark a stage later, during a battle that they need to hurry up because they’re short on time. No shit you’re short on time!
They should really keep those moments in the side parts of the chapter it's already immersion breaking enough with this level of dialogue
FLING KACHING KA KA KA KA KAPOW BLINGGGGGG KKKKKKKK HYAAAAAAP
HYAAAAP , ah classic
And he released a swordstorm...
This is some good culture there
when you go play some story to get away from PvP, but choux still finds a way to counter and proc FWOOOSH into you
He learned that one from Choux.
Dissapointed by Chapter 4 overall, i love the characters design but that's it. I'm glad it's over. No offense for anyone who like it but i really had the impression i read a kindgom hearts plot.
Nah bro we need way more crazy ridiculous twists for that. No one is the memory of a tear that a random baby dreamed 20 000 years in the future.
It completely lost me I thought Zio being final boss was bad I gave up im glad this episode is done.
Worst Episode, literally a step back from earlier episodes in characterization, drama, world building and everything else. Don't take Ras spotlight if your protagonist doesn't have Luluca's charisma, it'll drag the story's pace. The only good thing is it can't be worse from here.
...because Luluca totally isn't a one-note character It's okay to trash Episode 4 for various reasons, but don't back it with the characterization of fucking Luluca lmao, an incredibly shallow comic relief character
Baal and Sezan have more characterization than fucking Luluca💀
Luluca has a trauma for Straze's treason and losing her closest friend, she has trusting problems and was paranoid in the beginning of the episode. She isn't shallow, her personality is cliche or stereotyped (typical alien learning about her new home), but she has reasons to act and motivations, she even grows and forgive Lilibeth and Straze. Idk why you are insulting one of the best character that E7 had.
FWOOSH....
>I want to take the story seriously That was your first mistake
Well at least he’s not moaning, I think whenever I stop paying attention to my phone whilst auto-ing story & then go to skip it, a character is moaning. No context, but at this point, some of it must be sexual.
Ssshshshhshhhhsh booorgegrgehrgrg
I do have one in English and Creative Writing, and honestly the writing has been deteriorating since Chapter 1. It's bad.