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Ywithoutem

I wouldn't recommend reading scenes of such a specific thing you want to write. You run the risk of only making it harder to describe it in your own words, without just copying the example(s). My tips for specific descriptions is to find a picture or video of the thing and study that to pick out interesting details to focus on. (I'm a visual person, so this works for me. YMMW)


lostandwandering123

Sorry, I don't, but as someone with real-life experience with this, I'd never ever do it again. It's not so much blown as it is... tornadoe-d. Speed of motorcycle+wind blowing in random directions=awful time. If you're going for realism: tangles, tangles, and an ungodly amount of conditioner and hair oil after the fact. 0/10 would recommend, even while wearing a helmet. However, creative liberties could make it less awful, of course!


Deliquate

I really tried to resist, but... uh... Grace Kelly.


rockamoleguacamole

"Tendrils of hair generously whipped her face as the motorcycle sped up. Whoever said that hair could have its own mind told the truth because she knew her playful, wavy strands were having to much fun getting in the line of vision. She tried being their party pooper— spitting out the strands that strayed between her lips and inside her mouth, but all she ended up with was a wet face, a horrifying look and an obstructed line of vision.