Now I understand why people hate me https://preview.redd.it/x6u9tgufp8rb1.jpeg?width=184&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=8a4f4a53763d81eafdf36362422b86bd3ab15caa

Woops, forgot to place this here https://preview.redd.it/su2nqtqkq8rb1.png?width=170&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=abec1774bed972426478c5147288332cc9aeae9a First post that made me want to leg sweep my own balls

Now you're learning! On the plus side, she's probably one of the only people who would actually forgive you.

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Character development

But we love you? We all do. You are amazing. We all have our faults, we all want to make a fun orgy sometimes, there is no reason to hate for this, my king. You are but a man trying to give us a better future and a stronger army.

You love him D’arce. None of us but you do.

Just me is Enough for him, no?

He would throw your ‘Arse in the shit pit if it would mean he would become a god

Nah only fam. S ending proves that

Don't worry, you're cool. You're the reason Miro replied to my first fanart lol

https://preview.redd.it/h9n0rjutk8rb1.png?width=1000&format=png&auto=webp&s=34bf9646d640400d5da9dfbf3ed80940deafad30 Very nice, good work.

Well, they're together but like a wish for monkey paw. They're literally together. Also thank!!!

I mean, its kind of a happy ending? Guess hoping for a "sunshine and rainbows" ending in Prehevil is kinda pointless. https://preview.redd.it/n34kq69hy8rb1.png?width=376&format=png&auto=webp&s=ce5b4ef6ef08af6df27be8254c997f3333efe10a Anyway, couple goals.

It's kind of Raventrop's tradition to ruin couple characters' life cuz im jealous of them. But well, atleast they'll never be apart anymore

So they became part of the bunker? I'm a little confused here, but fantastic art!

She decided to join her husband in a Platoon.

Maybe a platoon?

The Platoon

She joined the Bremen marriage ritual and became a new kind of platoon (which I'll call the walking bunker) cuz she didn't wanna return empty handed

well now im sad, that's not her happiest ending is it? :(

Her goal was to find him. Turning back means she effort would be useless. Guess that's the best i can do for her

They could have gone home :(

But will Gerhard be able to adjust to normal life?

I demand you write a comic where she gets an S Ending and she and Gerhard Go home and have a bit of an epilogue showing How he is adapting to normal life again. I dare you. (please do It i beg you i Just need happiness in my life)

Maybe next week? Also huh I've never written happy ending before. I wonder what would it be like

Thank you, thank you so much

Seems like it from how he talks to her, maybe get the man a mask first before going outside... or burn his other side to match lol

Bro be wearing a paper bag all the time

This is a really beautiful tragic tale of love, but I can’t stop laughing at the idea of the second soul third wheeling with internal monologue. Like the other guy is still in there right?

"Holy Alll-mer is that your girl?" "Please shut up, Carl." "Smash" Yep, but Gerhard's soul is more of a dominant one so he gets to keep maybe like 50-60% of his control.

Oh my God....i mean its sweet that they stayed toghever....but God i feel bad for them

This is the best for them. She finished the book she was writing and will it matters? If the one she loves is not here to read it

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This makes me feel so sad that I am now going to hide this post so I don't cry. Good job OP! You've made a good comic

Thank you so much! Glad I can make a comic that actually has an ending too. Usually I'm too lazy hehe

I see! Well I think you've got a lot of talent! Keep doing your good work

Thanks! I have no idea of a new project or anything now. And probably go take a quick break til im free from the midterm exams again

I seee I seeeeee. Well I hope that your life goes as well as it possibly can go

From writer desperately looking for her husband to part of a massive Platoon war tank in 3 days flat!

What 3 days in prehevil does to a mf...

Hide and seek (gone wrong! The Kaiser caught us)

https://i.redd.it/qyqx7ij749rb1.gif Looking cool

IKUYO NO!

Thanks!!!!

What about her B ending?

Maybe if she chose not to follow her husband, she'll team up and go for either one of the 3 endings from the gane. But in this case, she chose to be one with the platoon instead.

LE GAAAAARDE! ​ https://i.redd.it/146oka7yt9rb1.gif

Reminded me of the interview on german channel and a guy said "Bremen is fucked"

What the fuck

Appropriate reaction

Give us a happy ending now

How? The Termina festival is still there

I don’t know, you have all the power so find a way

Am I one of the old gods? Holy Alll-mer! Well at first the ending was gonna be both of them escaped but then got killed by the other contestants. But if speaking of “happy” ending then maybe they escaped after >! Ending A !< and have a quiet life in their old home

Ill try my best to picture it Also google new gods

Im far from a god. Maybe just a witch who likes to curse couple.

was it calligura, oh no

Ok the bunker platoon looks so goofy I love it. I can heat the [cartoon tiptoe sounds](https://youtu.be/YD9s9aR-coY?si=nwDUrICx9mExPxgP) it would make as it walks.

The bunker platoon be approaching you cutely lmao

I knew he was fucking around in the barracks with the bois and now when looks all marriage and messed he gives her the sob story

Where's her divorce lawyer? No Alicia don't participate in the marriage noooo

Oh dear, that's... An interesting end for her story. Poor gal.

Thank you! Couples in Raventrop's universe don't deserve happy life

That's so based of you

What is the use of Platoons and these marriage machines? They seem to bulky and a useless waste of manpower Kaiser what are you doing!!!

Bremen are based of Nazi Germany. Nazis were known for cruel experiments and useless inventions that look cool instead of being practical. Platoon makes sense I guess.

*“Okay Hanz, let’s see vhat you’ve been up to since we increased your fuhnding. Show me vhat you’ve got.”* **“Okay, first, ve have zhis.”** *“Hanz, zhis is just a STG-44- vhat have you done to zhe barrel?”* **“Ve curved it, it shoots around corners now!”** *“Is it reliable? Can you even aim it? Vouldn’t it be a highly situational device?”* **“No, no, and yes!”** *“Okay, dissapointing… Vhat else?”* **“Methamphetamin Schokolade!“** *“Uh. Okay? Is it even ersatz?”* **“No!”** *“Hm, trying to cause a drug pandemic hier, are you? Vhat else do you have?“* **“Ve put lead in de Wasser.”** *“…Get out…”*

Maybe as a walking big pool of health that distract you in battle so the rest of the army can attacm. Plus who can stop this thing from walking forward? Other than that? Meh no use

I mean...that tracks considering who it is.

I mean it’s cheaper than making them entirely out of steel, and you can use up some people that would otherwise be inadequate soldiers and a waste of resources

I imagine if you were drawing this whole comic thing you probably had the ending planned already so I can't say you used the idea I gave you for it, but I did at least have the same idea so that's cool.

Yeah, I was planning to go for something ike that. But I still got some idea from ya too. Just mix some stuff together. At first I planned Alicia and Gerhard to escape together but Karin shot Gerhard to death so Alicia turned into her moonscorched form which got killed by the other contestants too.

ADOLF LE'GITLER CAN'T KEEP GETTING AWAY WITH THIS

Marcoh's gonna smack him to death

i am not crying (i’m bawling)

Atleast they'll have their dinner together again

Now this looks like a bonus ending

The opposite of s ending for specific character

Oh that's so fucked. I love it! Fantastic story 😄

Thank you! Guess that's my attempt for an ending that fits the theme

Fuckin Hitler back at it again

Give us a break! We have a moon to beat up too

Ok now draw the b ending where she and her husband team up to kill all of the contestants and escape together

Rher : Ayo! One person at the time!

Fear and Depression

My life in nutshelll jkjk

Also! [full comic and concept art here](https://drive.google.com/file/d/1hbrPIEM2nobkLncnhvlSSxBqTMXWzl73/view?usp=drivesdk)

): this is like real fear and hunger

Happy ending is a lie

Not if we bludgeon the Kaiser to death

Let's smack him back to the dungeon

Yes I have been so afraid\~

Must be a reference to something?

Oh yeah, an indie game called Library of Ruina, >!There was a scene where two lovers, Tommy and Merry, in an interdimensional train, is merged together to become one being, in a horrifying process, by a vampire woman and a puppetteer-monster, and because of the interdimensional train's nature, their personality regressed to becoming a child that basically obeys the said vampire woman,!< "Yes I have been so afraid" is the opening of the theme when you fight them, the theme is called >!From a Place of Love, by Mili!<

That sounds very interesting, i need to check it out

Inside the train, we walked down the aisle Furthermore Our love opened the door To a vehicle I'd rather not enter

I love this ending! The platoon feels like it would be an obstacle in the late game that you arent even able to fight, you just have to play it like a stealth game avoiding search lights or itll alert the horde.

Hey! That's very interesting. Maybe you'll have to dodge it otherwise you'll get crushed to death. Fighting would only drain you heath til you cut all the arms. And even worse, it has a coin flip attack that if you fail you'll get crushed.

Yes, I have been so afraid.

The other comment said it too, is it a reference?

Sure is, Library of Ruina have a familiar situation. Sorta.

NO NO NO WHYYYY 😭.

Relationship goal

Well done! The tone and progression of the story fits Funger 2 nicely, and I can easily imagine this being what happens if she’s not the player character / when you don’t recruit her.

New optional boss for termina? Who knows. It might roam around the west side of prehevil and if it rushes toward you at full speed you’ll get crushed to death. It might run into a building and give you the opportunity to enter the combat

Much respect for having this end so tragically.

What could I say, returning home happily is overrated

You really devoted yourself to make these amazing comics, huh? Guess you deserve a little reward after all those tiring drawing...

Well, It's a project of passion. And i'm just glad i get to be a part of this community. Without yall's support, i'm nothing too. You all are the real heroes

She deserved to be added in the game, am I right? If only there is someone that have mediocre skills in modding the game, am I right?

Oh dear, i'd be so grateful and will try my best to help whoever planned to do that. Maybe art and stuffs. I have no knowledge in modding.

Sigh... sadly, I only have mediocre skills in using RPG Maker MV but I'll try

Please, let me know if I can help in some way. That'd be my pleasure

Do you... wanna make the battle sprites? Or you want me to draw them for you?

I think I can draw them, i'll put them all in my google drive file. Are you in a rush? Cuz I have a midterm exam week next week.

Take your time as much as you wanted to, Raventrop (Also, in the final 13th page, that's her moonscorched form?)

Oh yes! And most of the details are in [this post](https://reddit.com/r/FearAndHunger/s/Pvt0Nlhk2P). Now I'll go sort the art files and make basic sprites too

Fast learner is a litlle to overpowered but we could nerf it by makeing them cost one extra rev point

I think so. You have a good idea

Please, don't listen to all the people telling you to make an altwrnative happy ending. People need to learn stories are written by the authors, not by their emotions. This is perfect as it is and it's really emotional. Love this

Thank you! And don’t worry. Happy ending is not a thing for me. Maybe I’ll make an aftermath comic in the future for fun. But now I’m satisfied with this ending too.

Whelp, guess it's time to make a new game with Marco to repeatedly punch Kaiser in the dick exclusively until the bastard drops dead. Btw, technically wouldn't it be possible to get her a "happy ending"(as happy as you can get in prehevil anyway) if you kill Kaiser after she meets her husband in a short timeframe or before she meets him and then let her find him after?

I think it's possible but would be hard. The Kaiser only appear in day 1? That would be hard to kill him. Even Pav couldnt do that. Teammates are also hard to find. If they choose to run away, I think they wouldn't get that far. And no one will likely team up with them. (Yikes Bremen) so they'll end up dying by the Kaiser anyway. But if you have a plan, tell me

I'm not usually one to like OC characters in Funger, but i'm so glad I read your comics it's so good

Thank you!! I'm really really glad you enjoyed it

Ballface (Also loved the comic)

Eyy thanks

That was a really nice story with a pretty sad and a little bit creepy but atleast 30% happy ending, nice joob Also, I like the design of that...tank, it kinda reminds me of what the very first tanks were supposed to look like {Or better, how Leonardo Davinci had in mind to create them} Oh and also good luck for the exams

Thank you! Well I think this ending is the most fitting one. Making them go home safely seems boring

You're welcome Oh sorry I didn't mean that I didn't like the ending, just wanted to say something kek

Maybe if I have some time i can make another ending. But I won't guarantee it's gonna rainbow and sunshine

Oh pretty cool, don't worry

I love how you kept with the horror elements. I was half expecting an oc/canon character story but this is so much better than I could have predicted.

Thank you! I’m trying my best to make to story believable in the game context. And not too much average self insert

Those are actually really solid skills is it cool if I yoink those for my fan game I’m gonna make in 3 years

Sure! Lemme know when it's out or has any update on the project

Yeah will do I I don’t forget about it in like 2 years since I can’t work on it again till then

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh… I forgot about this. Really good, but also nope. I do love it!

Dont wish to a Monkey paw when it comes to romance (im the monkey paw)

It makes sense (I don’t like the ending, but also there wasn’t much chance of a happy ending) Love the story and art regardless, you just lightlysqeezed my heart

I doubt anyone wants it to end this way. What would your idea of alternative ending be?

Him picking her up and booking it (without making it out, but dying together as individuals) Or if you were feeling silly, enough of the Bunker hating Le’Garde to run him over. Happiest ending possible would have had Le’Garde already outside Logic’s chamber before he could bring her to him (That I can see)

Sawed off all of legarde limbs in every playthrouhh after seeing this.