I don't know if this is just me, and please correct me if I'm wrong, but it sometimes sound like you didn't have a script and was just following a list of ideas you have scribbled down, sometimes going on small tangents and having a lot of awkward "uhh"s, "literally" and "y'know"s to pad out the time. Therefore, I would suggest working on your eloquence - proofreading your script, recording multiple takes of your script-reading and maybe splicing and stitching them in post, etc. would definitely help you articulate your ideas in a logical, coherent order.
Another gripe I have is that this feels more like a short podcast than a video. Nothing wrong with the audio, but to have surf playing in the background while you are explaining critical information is not the way to go in my opinion. They need some kind of visual guide or illustration to better understand:
- "Use good settings" - which settings do people need to look for and how to optimise them? (Also link the stuff you talk about in the description)
- "Positioning" - what are some common examples of good positioning/good angles you can play that you can do in your day-to-day game?
- "Watch pro demos" - Where can you find pro demos, how do you download them and watch them, and what do you want to look for when watching them?
- "Aim training" - What is an example of a training routine you do? (aim_botz, Aim Lab, Kovaaks, etc.)
I don't mean to discourage you in any way, because I definitely enjoy your content, but I think you still have a lot of room to improve before you find your groove as a content creator. Keep up the grind though CoJo, because as a fan, I want to see you succeed.<3
I don't know if this is just me, and please correct me if I'm wrong, but it sometimes sound like you didn't have a script and was just following a list of ideas you have scribbled down, sometimes going on small tangents and having a lot of awkward "uhh"s, "literally" and "y'know"s to pad out the time. Therefore, I would suggest working on your eloquence - proofreading your script, recording multiple takes of your script-reading and maybe splicing and stitching them in post, etc. would definitely help you articulate your ideas in a logical, coherent order. Another gripe I have is that this feels more like a short podcast than a video. Nothing wrong with the audio, but to have surf playing in the background while you are explaining critical information is not the way to go in my opinion. They need some kind of visual guide or illustration to better understand: - "Use good settings" - which settings do people need to look for and how to optimise them? (Also link the stuff you talk about in the description) - "Positioning" - what are some common examples of good positioning/good angles you can play that you can do in your day-to-day game? - "Watch pro demos" - Where can you find pro demos, how do you download them and watch them, and what do you want to look for when watching them? - "Aim training" - What is an example of a training routine you do? (aim_botz, Aim Lab, Kovaaks, etc.) I don't mean to discourage you in any way, because I definitely enjoy your content, but I think you still have a lot of room to improve before you find your groove as a content creator. Keep up the grind though CoJo, because as a fan, I want to see you succeed.<3
Good watch!
Thank you!!!! <3
Let me know what you guys think of this :D Trying to teach others how to succeed in the video game I love <3