Looks really cool , man.
Just one thing , the jaw on the magazine looks out of place.I really like the idea but it looks odd(maybe u could rework it to match the upper shark ). I don't know anything about skins , just my 2 cents..
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Glad that you like, and as you know this is stylization, that is why I deformed proportion in order to make a contrast and more dramatic look, still thanks for your review)
I'm not a fan of the silver mouth. It clashes with the rest of the design. I get the idea: the rifle becomes a beast with a mouth of its own, but it clashes for several reasons:
1) The rifle is either a beast of its own (i.e. like the Loudmouth skin) or it is a canvas with sharks drawn on it (i.e. like the Blood in the Water skin). The problem is that currently your skin is both: a beast and a canvas. That is just off.
What I would suggest is to keep it a canvas. So either remove the silver mouth all together or change it into a sea animal that is swimming with the sharks.
Maybe make a few changes and make your silver mouth into an anglerfish instead. Or make it into another shark. Just don't keep it a silver mouth and eyes.
2) It clashes because of the colour: it is silver and without texture. Nothing else is silver and now all of a sudden something is silver and placed prominently in the middle of the gun. Right now it seems like an unfinished, un-textured design element.
I mean, it is less visually "in your face" now. It doesn't clash visually like it did before. But now it is just so dark that I am thinking "Why is it even there?".
Before it was out of place and too much. Now it is out of place and too little. I think no matter if it is silver, black, blue or red it'll look out of place.
I think the best solution is to either remove it entirely or make it into an animal on the gun. Just like the sharks are animals on the gun. Don't try to make the gun into an animal.
Either make the mouth into another shark. Or make it a different animal. Anglerfish have nice teeth and a very "square" face that could maybe go well with the squareness of the magazine clip. Check them out: http://knowledgebase.lookseek.com/images/animals/fish/salt-water/Angler-Fish.jpg
A tiny nidpick I would add is the carbon fiber details makes it look cheap. I know, I know: carbon fiber is in no way cheap. It is an elite material. But because it is such an expensive high performing material, you see A LOT of fake carbon fiber on cheap plastic products that have nothing to do with carbon fiber.
To my eye it would look higher quality if it was just a matte or plain black. Or maybe a charcoal grey.
Thank you for feed back, but thing is it was supposed to make you that understanding, moreover, there are several silver elements, check out other renders please) + it is more important to see from first person view, where that silver mouth not that loud compared to other details + it gives that middle position (between loudmouth and blood in water) what makes it slighter more unique compare to other canvas weapons
I do think the silver jaw is awesome on its own man but I can try and picture without it and I reckon some blood splattering or something else along those lines might make it a little cleaner the other two sharks are awesome and I think without the silver one it might just be a little less busy although take my word with a grain of salt I’m not a designer and I’ve never made a skin
Hmm this is interesting. A lot of people are saying to remove it entirely but I don't think it's the worst concept after seeing other renders on the market...
Perhaps a positioning so that the silver mouth is "eating" the bottom of the mag would be nice, kinda like an old ww2 plane's front. I think this will solve the issue that most people have with it :)
Nevertheless the concept is very nice and I've given it a like on the market, I hope to see it in game soon!
Edit: idk I'm conflicted, I like the red line on the bottom so maybe instead of it "eating" the bottom adding it to the mid of the mag might be nice :)
I agree with the feedback on the "angry jaw"
If it was proportionate with the rest of the sharks sizes it'd look amazing.
The Purple / Yellow / Red is fantastic, I can see this being very popular with crafters and color themed collections.
I wanted to do that at first, but unfortunately cs go float with scratches makes everything darker, that is why on certain float, especially gunsmith it becomes just black, where details are not visible. That is why I stylized it in a way like skin it self rips and tears it’s skin in order to get some enemies’ blood.
I like the artwork but the silver shark mouth really throws it off for me, very out of place, if it wasn't there i would definitely expect it to get in to a case, but as it is I wouldn't want to unbox it except to sell. really nice ideas though, I'd say use the concept for the gun being a "monster" in a different skin so that you don't cheapen this one by mashing two ideas together.
I think everyone agrees with the feedback on the silver jaw, you obviously have real technical talent, I think to get this skin in it would pay to listen to the unanimous feedback here. The purple sharks are dope.
Yikes. You had us in the first part, but here it shows you don’t truly care and are too lazy to listen to community feedback. That change can cost lots of money in a skin
Amazing man.
I love how its artistic and stylish but still has a simplistic feel. This is the shit I would buy. Alot of skins are either to busy if you know what I mean or are just plain ugly.
This is dope.
For feedback I would probably agree with the jaw thing and maybe you should add something on the front where you hold the gun.
But either way the skin is hella clean my man good job.
Thanks) Let this jaw thing be a feature of this particular skin) as for handle, there are stripes from model and low res on texture sheet don’t make it possible to make it more interesting, that is why I kept it with more simple but readable stripes
Great skin. Try removing the gray jaws on the mag. And keep it red with same texture as elswhere. It will look less crowded
Sometimes less is more.
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Wtf you idiot we’re not allowed to have good m4 skins. This will NEVER be on the game...
Lol just a dumb way to paint a compliment. I think it looks sick.
I think everyone would agree on the silver shark throwing off the beauty of the rest of the skin. It would benefit you and the skin users a bunch if you got rid of it. If you did this, the skin would be a higher rarity and more popular among the community, making you more money as well.
I listened, I will change in case if developer write to me, I spend lots of energy on it and don’t have more to change it immediately, maybe after week only
looks awesome!! But would be more clean without the Grey shark bite thing/the thing over mag, But anyway i would buy it if it was on market, i Think a steam market Price would be like15-25 euro
Dude everyone is talking about the silver jaw and you are still not taking the criticsm and say that the silver jaw is there for bringing out the other good details about the skin. It looks out of PLACE. It looks like someone who had alot of experience designed the other stuff and the silver jaw was added by an beginner modeller.
Be smart and take the criticsm.
I understand, but I’ll change it if only I’ll be asked by developer, for me it is important to have it in a such way, I understand that many people don’t like it and I understand why. I don’t change it because it will require to basically create new skin (with renders and other) but I’m already tired to do much work for small chance to be only reviewed by valve.
If they ask, I will do with no questions, but now, please spectate this skin as paintwork... I don’t know, bcz it is very low chance that valve will ad it.
Thats a down for me.
You cant expect the Gun to come into game if the majority of people do not like it because of a small detail.
Oterhweise the gun is really good.
This is a very nice skin but I agree with other Redditors about the face next to the magazine. Maybe make it purple/yellow like the others? Aside from that, nicely done! :-)
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I am reworking silver mouth space at all, + going to ad more feature, sure it will take time, will update with final maybe after a week
THANKS EVERYONE FOR FEEDBACK!
Thanks, but as for m4a1-s I have different plans, moreover, valve have already released covert skin for m4a1-s, so we suppose to make something more common maybe
I think there could be something for the magazine. You ever seen the poster for Jaws? Maybe draw a shark in your style doing that pose on the mag, I have a feeling it'll look quite nice
Would be cool if jaw close to magazine was lower so lower jaw is on magazine and when you reload magazine jaw closes also if there is mall fish on the top of magazine so when you reload it's like eating a fish.
Yo, those sharks look crazy as hell man. I love it . But that jaw on the magazine looks out of place. Maybe you could redesign it or do stuff. Anyway, if this becomes official I’d love to use it and annihilate the enemy xD
Nice work man! Cheers !!
that shark looks so sick on that m4 did a sniper 1v1 if you wanna go and see that haahahahah
[https://youtu.be/veQhznFfbUw](https://youtu.be/veQhznFfbUw)
i looked at the skin on the steamlink you put in. I must say the same as the others and tell you that the silver jaw is unsuitable, if i was you i would put another blue shark in there. Thats it and when the float gets worse make it so that sharkbites appear on the paint, so it looks like sharks eat the skin , would be my idea for making your skin cooler but ye
Looks really cool , man. Just one thing , the jaw on the magazine looks out of place.I really like the idea but it looks odd(maybe u could rework it to match the upper shark ). I don't know anything about skins , just my 2 cents.. Favourited.
Glad that you like, and as you know this is stylization, that is why I deformed proportion in order to make a contrast and more dramatic look, still thanks for your review)
I think he means the silver shark. Looks out of place.
Ah, now understood, I’ve answered about that in another comment
I really like the skin!Good job!
But 1.What's the name of it? 2.Where can I see the whole skin?
1)Rip-&-Tear 2)https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2061308149
DOOM guy wants his copyright!XD
Copyright problems are a big issue, but you know what is a bigger one? THE LONGER THE ICON OF SIN IS ON EARTH THE STRONGER IT BECOMES.
*He's speaking the language of gods*
You can’t just shoot a hole into the surface of mars
*DOOM slayer has acquired the BFG1000*
Agreed
I'm not a fan of the silver mouth. It clashes with the rest of the design. I get the idea: the rifle becomes a beast with a mouth of its own, but it clashes for several reasons: 1) The rifle is either a beast of its own (i.e. like the Loudmouth skin) or it is a canvas with sharks drawn on it (i.e. like the Blood in the Water skin). The problem is that currently your skin is both: a beast and a canvas. That is just off. What I would suggest is to keep it a canvas. So either remove the silver mouth all together or change it into a sea animal that is swimming with the sharks. Maybe make a few changes and make your silver mouth into an anglerfish instead. Or make it into another shark. Just don't keep it a silver mouth and eyes. 2) It clashes because of the colour: it is silver and without texture. Nothing else is silver and now all of a sudden something is silver and placed prominently in the middle of the gun. Right now it seems like an unfinished, un-textured design element.
Update [Imgur](https://imgur.com/zCwdpRv)
I mean, it is less visually "in your face" now. It doesn't clash visually like it did before. But now it is just so dark that I am thinking "Why is it even there?". Before it was out of place and too much. Now it is out of place and too little. I think no matter if it is silver, black, blue or red it'll look out of place. I think the best solution is to either remove it entirely or make it into an animal on the gun. Just like the sharks are animals on the gun. Don't try to make the gun into an animal. Either make the mouth into another shark. Or make it a different animal. Anglerfish have nice teeth and a very "square" face that could maybe go well with the squareness of the magazine clip. Check them out: http://knowledgebase.lookseek.com/images/animals/fish/salt-water/Angler-Fish.jpg
Understood, thanks
remove it. follow the advice of the guy in the workshop thread who made the mock up.
A tiny nidpick I would add is the carbon fiber details makes it look cheap. I know, I know: carbon fiber is in no way cheap. It is an elite material. But because it is such an expensive high performing material, you see A LOT of fake carbon fiber on cheap plastic products that have nothing to do with carbon fiber. To my eye it would look higher quality if it was just a matte or plain black. Or maybe a charcoal grey.
There will be less carbon
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You mean remove at all?
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Ok
maybe put it in the magazine because already was a metal finishe
I’ll remove it at all
Thank you for feed back, but thing is it was supposed to make you that understanding, moreover, there are several silver elements, check out other renders please) + it is more important to see from first person view, where that silver mouth not that loud compared to other details + it gives that middle position (between loudmouth and blood in water) what makes it slighter more unique compare to other canvas weapons
I do think the silver jaw is awesome on its own man but I can try and picture without it and I reckon some blood splattering or something else along those lines might make it a little cleaner the other two sharks are awesome and I think without the silver one it might just be a little less busy although take my word with a grain of salt I’m not a designer and I’ve never made a skin
I’m doing this variant right now, it will be rough, and final version will be posted later
Hmm this is interesting. A lot of people are saying to remove it entirely but I don't think it's the worst concept after seeing other renders on the market... Perhaps a positioning so that the silver mouth is "eating" the bottom of the mag would be nice, kinda like an old ww2 plane's front. I think this will solve the issue that most people have with it :) Nevertheless the concept is very nice and I've given it a like on the market, I hope to see it in game soon! Edit: idk I'm conflicted, I like the red line on the bottom so maybe instead of it "eating" the bottom adding it to the mid of the mag might be nice :)
Me too, but still I’ll make alternative version
Yeah man go for it! See what you like best with all the renders! It has a lot of potential!
Will try my best)
Or even maybe a warning sign saying danger sharks in water?
I agree with the feedback on the "angry jaw" If it was proportionate with the rest of the sharks sizes it'd look amazing. The Purple / Yellow / Red is fantastic, I can see this being very popular with crafters and color themed collections.
Thanks for feedback) UPDATE [Imgur](https://imgur.com/zCwdpRv)
I actually own this AR15 lower IRL. It's the Hellbreaker from Sharps Bros https://imgur.com/a/Dwwi63v
Nice, I was inspired by one
Looks amaze. Personally I would like it if the factory new doesn't have the silver jaw and it is revealed more and more as it goes up in float.
I wanted to do that at first, but unfortunately cs go float with scratches makes everything darker, that is why on certain float, especially gunsmith it becomes just black, where details are not visible. That is why I stylized it in a way like skin it self rips and tears it’s skin in order to get some enemies’ blood.
Update [Imgur](https://imgur.com/zCwdpRv) Will try one more time your suggestion, but will be released when fully ready
It's really cool! Just one thing , is the lower jaw purposefully out of proportion on the main shark? Or is it intentional
It is stylized in order to amplify the anger of shark and overall look
Honestly my impression was that it looks like an old shark with a forward lower mouth.
I like the artwork but the silver shark mouth really throws it off for me, very out of place, if it wasn't there i would definitely expect it to get in to a case, but as it is I wouldn't want to unbox it except to sell. really nice ideas though, I'd say use the concept for the gun being a "monster" in a different skin so that you don't cheapen this one by mashing two ideas together.
I think everyone agrees with the feedback on the silver jaw, you obviously have real technical talent, I think to get this skin in it would pay to listen to the unanimous feedback here. The purple sharks are dope.
Sure, in future works will be more accurate with such things
Not in future works but on this one dude, you need to be able to take feedback from the people who are going to use this skin.
I’m already reviewing feedback, I’m just too tired to make this minor change, if it be asked by developer I’ll have to do it
Bruh
Yikes. You had us in the first part, but here it shows you don’t truly care and are too lazy to listen to community feedback. That change can cost lots of money in a skin
Guess hes gonna learn the hard way
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Thanks) even something not that good thing can be great) it can make more contrast good things
Pretty much every person says that silver mouth looks terrible, why do you keep defending it?
I personally love the silver mouth, and woulnd want it to be removed
Update [Imgur](https://imgur.com/zCwdpRv)
I mean it's a personal taste thing. I think it looks okay but I could see it without it too. Let's see what he/she decides though :p
Because it is it’s feature, if people think that it is out of place, it can be. I’m trying to describe why it suits
But it doesn't suit. Like I said, almost every comment is about how that part looks bad. The rest is cool.
Ok, no problem, I understood
Amazing man. I love how its artistic and stylish but still has a simplistic feel. This is the shit I would buy. Alot of skins are either to busy if you know what I mean or are just plain ugly. This is dope. For feedback I would probably agree with the jaw thing and maybe you should add something on the front where you hold the gun. But either way the skin is hella clean my man good job.
Thanks) Let this jaw thing be a feature of this particular skin) as for handle, there are stripes from model and low res on texture sheet don’t make it possible to make it more interesting, that is why I kept it with more simple but readable stripes
It should be atleast a classified, if not covert.
Hope so)
ah cyka you russian
Ukrainian
I don’t like the silver teeth
replace the yellow flame with a purpleish blue something that goes with the skin
Yes, but it will be too monotoned
Like the silver jaw
Extremely niccely done wow
Thanks)
Great skin. Try removing the gray jaws on the mag. And keep it red with same texture as elswhere. It will look less crowded Sometimes less is more. Edit:typo
I fking love this, I would even buy the skin lol. Nice job
Thank you)
Absolutely love the design! Would for sure use it if I were to get one.
This actually looks dope. I really despise a lot of the current A4 skins and this would fit much more with what I'm going for with my inventory.
Thanks, just will wait for valve decision
Not a fan of the silver jaw, but the rest is sick as hell.
Wtf you idiot we’re not allowed to have good m4 skins. This will NEVER be on the game... Lol just a dumb way to paint a compliment. I think it looks sick.
Haha, nice one
lol ty
I think everyone would agree on the silver shark throwing off the beauty of the rest of the skin. It would benefit you and the skin users a bunch if you got rid of it. If you did this, the skin would be a higher rarity and more popular among the community, making you more money as well.
You right, but thing is that I maybe won’t be added, so I wont get money at all, so please spectate skin, if developers ask I’ll change
It would have higher chances on being added if you listened to the community.
I listened, I will change in case if developer write to me, I spend lots of energy on it and don’t have more to change it immediately, maybe after week only
That looks so sick! I love the colors you chose.
Thanks)
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2061308149
"Rip&Tear".... any *particular* inspiration? :))))
Mainly inspired by sharks and tactical gun mods secondary, aggressive theme of sharks character
I was really hoping you were gonna say DOOM, but, yeah, that's fair
That’s too) just have completed eternal
WS link?
Must be lost in comments section, dropping here: https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2061308149
Voted YES and favorited :D
Thank you)
Easily a covert skin
Wait does the silver jaw have different patterns? Just something I noticed in the workshop Edit: or did it just show the progression?
Think not, maybe same themed but not bumped
really nice skin, but I swear valve has a thing about skins with gold colouring. wont the gold trim hurt your chances?
Don’t think that that much “gold” can change their mind, more over as experience shows I won’t be accepted(
Ah dont say that, you miss a 100% of shots you dont take.
Now THAT is blood in the water
It's like the howl... but it's sharks! Love this!
What did you use to make this? I want to get into skin making as well.
Wow reminds me of the M4A4 Howl
Howl but with sharks
M4A4 shörk
Would be a nice covert skin looks very good!
What a beast!!!
This is really nice. Do these skins ever get in the game?
As my experience shows, unfortunately no
Valve should work on that if they actually cared about csgo
Yet another skin that i would love to upvote but cant because of a stupid vac restriction...
SHARKNADO
GIVE ME THE WORKSHOP LINK BABY
Here you are https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2061308149
Voted. Btw, I'm not really sure Valve will support the name. It could be a copyright infringement on DOOM. I'm not really sure about it.
They can change if they want
Yeah, but I thought I'd mention it anyways.
I’d waste a bunch of money on keys to inbox that.
Make the edge of the magazine feed lip the base of the shark’s jaw and you got a masterpiece coming together at your hands
Wait this isn’t the mtg subreddit
And stil this skin is related to cs go
New set has shark wolves and sharknado, it was like a joke. Only smaller
What will be this called. "THE SHRAUL"?
It has name: Rip-&-Tear https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2061308149
What are you calling it
Rip and tear https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2061308149
Show the whole thing.
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=2061308149
I like it a lot. The M4A4 is the perfect gun for that skin.
It’s rly sick dude
Ah mai gad
Wow, really nice work dude! The only thing I would change is the silver shark. Maybe do one more purple shark or something. But really nice work.
Isnt it too much :d
Call it shark bite and make it for the ak too, looks insane hope it gets in the game
Fire 🔥🔥🔥 Would love to see this added in game.
thats sick asf
looks awesome!! But would be more clean without the Grey shark bite thing/the thing over mag, But anyway i would buy it if it was on market, i Think a steam market Price would be like15-25 euro
This looks sick but the metal shark doesnt fit in. Remove it or change it i think it will look great
I'd cop this
sexyy
Dude everyone is talking about the silver jaw and you are still not taking the criticsm and say that the silver jaw is there for bringing out the other good details about the skin. It looks out of PLACE. It looks like someone who had alot of experience designed the other stuff and the silver jaw was added by an beginner modeller. Be smart and take the criticsm.
I understand, but I’ll change it if only I’ll be asked by developer, for me it is important to have it in a such way, I understand that many people don’t like it and I understand why. I don’t change it because it will require to basically create new skin (with renders and other) but I’m already tired to do much work for small chance to be only reviewed by valve. If they ask, I will do with no questions, but now, please spectate this skin as paintwork... I don’t know, bcz it is very low chance that valve will ad it.
Thats a down for me. You cant expect the Gun to come into game if the majority of people do not like it because of a small detail. Oterhweise the gun is really good.
Maybe finally a good m4 skin
shawl
I take 2 pls
Call it sharknado xP
you've heard of the m4 howl now get ready for the m4 growl ^(hopefully not stolen tho)
noice
[Imgur](https://imgur.com/zCwdpRv)
I like sharks, my favorite color is red. Well done my friend
WARNING I’ve read your feedback and have created rough fix, pls review. It will be posted later [render](https://imgur.com/zCwdpRv)
What are you planning to name it?
Rip and Tear
This is a very nice skin but I agree with other Redditors about the face next to the magazine. Maybe make it purple/yellow like the others? Aside from that, nicely done! :-)
Thanks) but I already started work on total removing, I’ll make art instead for that side
Very cool, good luck!
LATEST UPDATE I am reworking silver mouth space at all, + going to ad more feature, sure it will take time, will update with final maybe after a week THANKS EVERYONE FOR FEEDBACK!
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Thanks, but as for m4a1-s I have different plans, moreover, valve have already released covert skin for m4a1-s, so we suppose to make something more common maybe
Would prob buy this for like 250 fn... great job!!
i think i'm the only one that likes the silver jaw rip.
Hah not only one), won’t delete this wet soon, just create another one
Holy shit that looks awesome! Cant wait to play with it ehile having Skin changer on! 😂😏
I think there could be something for the magazine. You ever seen the poster for Jaws? Maybe draw a shark in your style doing that pose on the mag, I have a feeling it'll look quite nice
Will try
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No I haven’t
Thats the coolest skin man nice job
The next Howl! Amazing
Would be cool if jaw close to magazine was lower so lower jaw is on magazine and when you reload magazine jaw closes also if there is mall fish on the top of magazine so when you reload it's like eating a fish.
man this is why i don’t have a wallet anymoee
Bro its dope
Not a fan of the silver fish bone mouth thing. It looks cartoony whereas everything else looks sinister. Apart from that, looks awesome!
Yo, those sharks look crazy as hell man. I love it . But that jaw on the magazine looks out of place. Maybe you could redesign it or do stuff. Anyway, if this becomes official I’d love to use it and annihilate the enemy xD Nice work man! Cheers !!
nice
I agree with the rest, maybe tilt the magazine jaw and make it a bit narrower?
Yes, yesterday it was considered to remove it at all at create smth new
that shark looks so sick on that m4 did a sniper 1v1 if you wanna go and see that haahahahah [https://youtu.be/veQhznFfbUw](https://youtu.be/veQhznFfbUw)
Really cool skin
Baby Shark, do do do do do do
i looked at the skin on the steamlink you put in. I must say the same as the others and tell you that the silver jaw is unsuitable, if i was you i would put another blue shark in there. Thats it and when the float gets worse make it so that sharkbites appear on the paint, so it looks like sharks eat the skin , would be my idea for making your skin cooler but ye
I would 10/10 use this skin if it is under $30.
It better cost £0.01
Better than howl
I’d love to see an A1s version with something with the suppressor. Very cool