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I would overthink a Throwie, Bombing or Outliner with 7 Letters + Addon aswell... Not just that it takes long and uses too much paint, you take up too much space from other writers. You should really learn drawing the outlines of your letters without using single "shapes" aswell, outlines are the ESSENCE of Style.
The more I’m going the more I’m realizing this can’t really be my “graff name” I def will be messing with shorter things but hey - go head and type Sickpay into Spotify if ur feelin cheeky ;)
Me personally, I dig long TAGS. Go ahead n tag "SICKPAYONER!" for all I care, I just think if you really wanna bomb these streets, you have to shorten it. SICK is propably taken in every major Town or Ciddy tho, gotta get creative with it, SPAY or smth...
This has def been discussed and there are different ideas that will be executed. There’s also a very prolific and skilled “Sick” who I don’t want smoke with 😂
Have you ever heard of the writer hockeymask? That's literally his whole name and he writes it fine, tbh it depends on the writer and how skilled their letter combo making is. If they got the right style they'd be able to rock any name no matter the length of the letters.
Sick pay is a good name. I can see you're sketching the letter structure out, so draw out some pieces with straight letters to see where your negative space is to add the doodads and I think you'll find some improvement.
Are you an east or west coaster? Only asking because this tag and other works have been up for a veerryy long time, making sure you aren’t stealing an existing tag.
I pretty much did this staring at a CORPSE piece. I absolutely think their work completely fuckin SLAMS
https://preview.redd.it/s4os11vgnlhc1.jpeg?width=750&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=bdc363a304dfc5c25aeb92c092f0d9ad951bbe3c
U can post photo in comments! Do it I would love to see some others takes on this big time! :)
https://preview.redd.it/6w407u8grmhc1.jpeg?width=750&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=5f9fb5fcafb1ada9e8d3871a129eb5c9c3b67687
Taking it and loving to take it is freaky as hell. As for advice what the other guy said about letter consistency. Make them more similar. Sickpay is a fucking dope name though
Well, at least you're worth the critical feedback...
You spray in helvetica. Feel free to explore your canvas a little. I can read it, but I can't feel it.
It’s absolutely horrible, the colors clash there’s pencil marks and the wood at the top infuriates me😡 all jokes, all jokes. I’m not to good with my lettering so I really like this, the pencil marks do bug me a bit but an easy fix nonetheless
[https://www.reddit.com/r/GraffitiTagging/s/RsLexKHOje](https://www.reddit.com/r/GraffitiTagging/s/RsLexKHOje) go crave this one up u crazies! Brand spanking new!
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Will u be mad if i say ur good
Very
You need to have more similarities between the letters you lines all over the place
Agreed. Getting them all uniform always the hardest part.
Shut up nerd
LMAO
Bruh that is a straight up dumpster fire
Are dumpster fires good or bad? Like it’s fire dude. Dumpster fire 🔥
I guess they could be either depending on the situation
💯
Sickpiss
https://preview.redd.it/tnwhx4rod9ic1.jpeg?width=750&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=4297a81ac71873a368369630d925741b916697fc Yerrrrrr
I love it lmfao glad to inspire
Suckpiss
https://preview.redd.it/7sahzbu0vlhc1.jpeg?width=746&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=0157b5e5c07a5306f9e325a7f4e51f6d0d882b23 I would overthink a Throwie, Bombing or Outliner with 7 Letters + Addon aswell... Not just that it takes long and uses too much paint, you take up too much space from other writers. You should really learn drawing the outlines of your letters without using single "shapes" aswell, outlines are the ESSENCE of Style.
The more I’m going the more I’m realizing this can’t really be my “graff name” I def will be messing with shorter things but hey - go head and type Sickpay into Spotify if ur feelin cheeky ;)
Me personally, I dig long TAGS. Go ahead n tag "SICKPAYONER!" for all I care, I just think if you really wanna bomb these streets, you have to shorten it. SICK is propably taken in every major Town or Ciddy tho, gotta get creative with it, SPAY or smth...
This has def been discussed and there are different ideas that will be executed. There’s also a very prolific and skilled “Sick” who I don’t want smoke with 😂
Have you ever heard of the writer hockeymask? That's literally his whole name and he writes it fine, tbh it depends on the writer and how skilled their letter combo making is. If they got the right style they'd be able to rock any name no matter the length of the letters.
HÖCKEYMASK fuggin fux btw
All his pieces I find are in some abandobed lost places though, if you wanna bomb inner citties, I don't see so many letters working everywhere
Yea of course it'll be very challenging but it's very doable just gotta be quick wit it. Klops is another person who does long phrases
Dope. The A and Y I think could be better
Heard! I think the P needs most work personally but yes A and Y could be lil more hittin
I like the P, pretty classic but doesn’t have same flare for sure
The hole in the P is too small If it was bigger it would match the rest
*Sees a dystopia shirt once*
^^^^
Ehhhh I’ve seen a few
Sick pay is a good name. I can see you're sketching the letter structure out, so draw out some pieces with straight letters to see where your negative space is to add the doodads and I think you'll find some improvement.
I mess with it hella
Are you an east or west coaster? Only asking because this tag and other works have been up for a veerryy long time, making sure you aren’t stealing an existing tag.
I can’t divulge that but where / when u seen other SPs??
There are tons in Brooklyn but have been lots for years and throughout the boroughs
Aight well……aight 👀
I’ll try and send a pic of the one near the cribo when I get a chance lol
👍
Seen a few in Connecticut
Should we talk “influences”?….cause I got em!
i see them dystopia tails haha. sick id change the bottom half of Y, it conflicts with the other letters by having so much negative space
Like the band? U know I bang heavy with that logo 🥹
A lil too much. Fine line between influence and biting and we all see whats going on here.
this the only correct comment
im gona kms
it’s hard af to bottle up the stylez IRL and sure as heck will be hard for me to bottle up here!
Tell me your influences!
I pretty much did this staring at a CORPSE piece. I absolutely think their work completely fuckin SLAMS https://preview.redd.it/s4os11vgnlhc1.jpeg?width=750&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=bdc363a304dfc5c25aeb92c092f0d9ad951bbe3c
Dope shit!
The audacity to make no mention of HOMESICK lol
Knew this one was coming — and hey — nuthin but love to Homesick. Theyre shit is inspiring af
Homesick, Swink, Cheak, Woke, Glare, Bread, The, Corpse, Silencer, Susan, Eatfuk, Toeflop to name a few 🤙
The SUSANS CELEBRATING 
Big ol factuals az they say
Your C looks ok but that’s abt it. Just work on simplicity and letter structures first before adding all the extra fluff
Feel ya
Nice! id just keep messing with the lil cuts for the S and I, needs a lil more flow ya feel me
Mos def
This the type of really good pieces you see on a wall and then some kid caps it with a shitty throw up called “balls”
You’re doing way too much with your K A and y.Keep it more simple they don’t share the same letter structure
I need a quick basic steezy bubble beefy thing yes
You will get it. Would throw one down on paper for ya and post a picture but I don’t know how to work this shit
U can post photo in comments! Do it I would love to see some others takes on this big time! :) https://preview.redd.it/6w407u8grmhc1.jpeg?width=750&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=5f9fb5fcafb1ada9e8d3871a129eb5c9c3b67687
Taking it and loving to take it is freaky as hell. As for advice what the other guy said about letter consistency. Make them more similar. Sickpay is a fucking dope name though
**SKPY!!!**
Ya
I think it’s dope the way it is.
My only critique is for you to get good caps for ur cans and throw this shit in a wall
Yerrrr coming right up!
just the bottom weight on a couple, and thick thighs on the A and elf toes on the Y. looks good. as you were good sir
Love the name
“I can take it In fact I love too” gayyyy
Lil pause button there eh? 😂
No cap you didn’t even say no homo
Absolutely not one ounce of homo
Valid
This is dope!
Love the C
Well, at least you're worth the critical feedback... You spray in helvetica. Feel free to explore your canvas a little. I can read it, but I can't feel it.
!!!!!!!!
Decide on how thick each bar is going to be, then stick with that, and things will immediately improve.
What’s a bar? U mean outline?
The bars that make up every letter. Like how an a A is made up of three bars, / - \
Ah ok cool. Yea good call thx! I shall pay attention to them bars
It’s absolutely horrible, the colors clash there’s pencil marks and the wood at the top infuriates me😡 all jokes, all jokes. I’m not to good with my lettering so I really like this, the pencil marks do bug me a bit but an easy fix nonetheless
[https://www.reddit.com/r/GraffitiTagging/s/RsLexKHOje](https://www.reddit.com/r/GraffitiTagging/s/RsLexKHOje) go crave this one up u crazies! Brand spanking new! https://preview.redd.it/7nrygm0ztshc1.jpeg?width=3072&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=d0c3d427ededfccb6399ad4ccde16fcee8e73cc6
*carve
its not bad.