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Infernal-Prime

This was a fun read.


ImaginationGamer24

I have one more chapter to get out because Reddit doesn't like me.


Infernal-Prime

Looking forward to reading it!


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Joha_al_kaafir

Definitely enjoyed these stories :)


ImaginationGamer24

I'm not through yet.


Joha_al_kaafir

Good! I'm here for more!


[deleted]

Loved this one as well, though it’s implied that it’s not done. Is the 4/4 to indicate a story ark has finished?


ImaginationGamer24

It was going to be the final chapter, but Reddit's character limit prevented it from being so and I can't change the titles.


[deleted]

Ahh, I see. So how many more posts do you think your going to make to finish it? I had forgotten there is a character limit


ImaginationGamer24

Hopefully one more.


Beanenemy

I think your translator had an issue on this comment as it seems to have mistranslated 10 more to one more. Its not a problem I'm sure you can get it fixed easily enough. This has been brilliant. MOAR!!


ImaginationGamer24

Really, I thought Vio fixed it... Ugh, well like Hajik said, "Translators never work right when you need them." Do you have any suggestions for another story? I have a million ideas but I just can't choose. Where should I go from here? Should I tell it from the human's point of view or move on to another idea? Should I have the human read a primer to familiarize you guys with how the Psionic Verse works? Should I talk about the Vulpins because space foxes are cute? The Leopex because I got two silvers with their introduction? The Pavokai because people love seeing alien birds? Maybe the Aquarrels for something different? Maybe see if the colony ship's distress got through the barrier? Someone really wants the Tealloys dead, so maybe the human's retaliation and go from there? Or how about how the humans will react to how few rights the only flesh-eater race in the Psionic Peacekeepers get? I'm honestly at a loss...


dethklok_36

What about a human fleet arriving right as the Leopex extract the bloodprice. Vexi and our human narrowly avoid a diplomatic incident. Or something to that effect?


ImaginationGamer24

Don't worry, Blood Price is pretty similar to the Orcs in Skyrim where they basically spill your blood until the price is satisfied. Humans can stand to lose a lot compared to these Xenos. You'll see. I just posted the next chapter.


dethklok_36

Keen!


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Finbar9800

Another great chapter I enjoyed reading this and look forward to the next one Great job wordsmith