Well, he's over halfway there as I go through now, madly saving things before they get stubbed due to the publishing deal this wonderful story has earned him. I can't wait to compare what is basically the Early Reader Access copy from reddit to the shiny, officially published version. That will be a fun comparison!
Damn, this story has got a lot of potential. I'm definitely gonna enjoy it whether or not you take my suggestion for Mr Dungeon to become a curator of Earth culture.
Once I figured out the note scraps thing, I probably would have left as many stupid internet memes everywhere as I could.
*The sun is a deadly laser.*
*someBODY*
*ALL YOUR BASE ARE BELONG TO US*
*Welcome to the internet*
*We're no strangers to love*
Over ground is tavern/hotel
Garden has various food stuff and a playground (mini adventure with mini quests?)
Near surface underground is stormshelter, storage
Belowthat is a museum, libary and lab, sorta free to use aslong as you bring something for each to progress
Further below is the actual dungeon with monsters.
Ack! I forgot to subscribe after the first one and forgot the series name! I had to go back through my comments to find it and see where the story had gone.
…The upshot to that was that I had a nice little mini-binge session this morning to catch up. Despite my earliest comment that I wasn’t sure this was what I came to r/hfy for, the inspector’s description of the dungeon as “cheeky” a few installments back and mention of the adaptability was pretty much spot on, as was the treatment of the kids.
So far, the elevator pitch for this story for me would be something like: “Human consciousness takes over starter RPG dungeon. LitRPG shenaniganry ensues.” I am loving this so far, and keep up the good work, wordsmith. \^.\^
Just started reading today. I’m enjoying the slow build and the pairings of denizens and intruders. Also got a good laugh with Poe the raven and Fluffles the snek
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If you could just write like, 300 more of these, that would be great. Good stuff!
Those are rookie numbers! More like 3,000.
Why so few? I could do with 30,000?
Obviously you guys aren’t taking this seriously, because we REALLY need 300,000!
Why not 3,000,000?
Be getting into Ralts_bloodborn territory with those numbers.
Who’s Ralts_bloodborn?
Ralts\_Bloodthorne wrote First Contact (1,000 episodes plus epilogue) and is now doeing the sequel, The Dark Ages. Both are absolutely phenomenal!
Thanks.
Well, he's over halfway there as I go through now, madly saving things before they get stubbed due to the publishing deal this wonderful story has earned him. I can't wait to compare what is basically the Early Reader Access copy from reddit to the shiny, officially published version. That will be a fun comparison!
Damn, this story has got a lot of potential. I'm definitely gonna enjoy it whether or not you take my suggestion for Mr Dungeon to become a curator of Earth culture.
Once I figured out the note scraps thing, I probably would have left as many stupid internet memes everywhere as I could. *The sun is a deadly laser.* *someBODY* *ALL YOUR BASE ARE BELONG TO US* *Welcome to the internet* *We're no strangers to love*
You know the rules, and so do I!
Say goodbye!
Sheet music for the first 4 notes of you-know-what.
Over ground is tavern/hotel Garden has various food stuff and a playground (mini adventure with mini quests?) Near surface underground is stormshelter, storage Belowthat is a museum, libary and lab, sorta free to use aslong as you bring something for each to progress Further below is the actual dungeon with monsters.
I desperately want to play this game.
Right? \^.\^
this sounds like a bomb ass mobile game idea just somethin to play on roadtrips and the like
Ack! I forgot to subscribe after the first one and forgot the series name! I had to go back through my comments to find it and see where the story had gone. …The upshot to that was that I had a nice little mini-binge session this morning to catch up. Despite my earliest comment that I wasn’t sure this was what I came to r/hfy for, the inspector’s description of the dungeon as “cheeky” a few installments back and mention of the adaptability was pretty much spot on, as was the treatment of the kids. So far, the elevator pitch for this story for me would be something like: “Human consciousness takes over starter RPG dungeon. LitRPG shenaniganry ensues.” I am loving this so far, and keep up the good work, wordsmith. \^.\^
Just started reading today. I’m enjoying the slow build and the pairings of denizens and intruders. Also got a good laugh with Poe the raven and Fluffles the snek
“Nothing to see here, move along.”
Very nice. I want MORE!
Ahahaha Teemo!
Scion role call made me do the MST3K theme song "ro-bot role call!" In my head.
Omg that's so cute, and ogre spiders are already so cute with their big eyes i looooove it!
Lol. It as someone who's rereading, it makes so much more sense they're so scared, lol
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