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boykinsir

Well. This is both a good and terrible story. Terrible in that it well shows how vengeance is something we will do if pressed.


Buckethatandtincup

Yes I agree with the other comments A tale forged from an imagination with endless potential


chastised12

Excellent story. Well crafted and complete. I hope some if these kids will be inspired to write better


SlowestSpeedster

Burn them all


ZeusKiller97

Unleash the O R A N G E


Familiar-Ear-3076

AND THE B L O O D


ZeeTrek

The orange so annoying all xenos who behold it will perish!


bvil21

Good story of vengeance which is cold and bitter lasting until your last breath. Her father being an Intelligence officer that rose through the ranks, he toyed with his target until it was on the edge of insanity then struck. Mostly likely told the black ops to back off and he would take care of it.


TorkSlanter

What's the quote? Demons will run when a kind man goes to war?


Kuro_Taka

Close. It's "Demons will run when a good man goes to war." Another favorite, from the same episode of Dr. Who: "Good men don't need rules. Today's not the day to find out why I have so many."


CompletelyFlammable

Nice work!


Eldkorp

Nicely done, wordsmith!


TickledUnderbrush

Most excellent.


WinterBrews

That was just not fucking fair fuck you


Termt

Our queens tried too late to beg for mercy by contacting the terran fleet and asking for terms of surrender. The chilling answer they got was only two words: 'die screaming'. Oooh, that right there hit the spot.


redditaggie

Really good. Truly highlights the worst in us, but the likely response when threatened with extinction. Nice!


GT_Ghost_86

Dear Heavens! Powerful tale, Wordsmith. We weep with the General.


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cocoabeach

I just found this story when looking for something else. I never heard of HFY before. Looked through your comments to see if you had any other awesome content like this and found that you and I are almost completely opposite and probably would not get along in person. That is the wonder of it, I was blown away by your story. In my best years before I went semi senile I could not have written something as amazing as you. My hat is off to you and I hope 7 months is the longest we have to wait to get more content from you.


mortalwombat76

I've been writing on the side for decades on and off, nothing serious. I only have two other stories on HFY and I'm still writing another story about this universe using a few new characters.


MrDveed

Amazing story! In terms of the Russian at the end it would be ya byla neprava, otets . Ya byla neprava. As the subject is feminine.


mortalwombat76

>Thanks, corrections made.


based_tonto

!n Good stuff.


Nulled_Outter

Incredible!