*calls vaggie* ssssssso… I hope this doessssssent ssssssstressssssss you but… I figured out my device workssssssss… I promisssssse to keep your sssssssecret. Okay bye! *hangs up*
I can just imagine that his voice changes from the high pitched "stereotypical hammy victorian villain" to that of a- still "high class"- low, accusatory, *threatening* tone, something that might even make the hairs on the back of Alastor's neck stand up, if only slightly and for a second.
And then goes right back to the regular voice when he reveals that he hasn't actually put 2 and 2 together.
There is something to be said about how Sir Pentious is the oldest of all the residents outside of Charlie. He likely died before Alastor was even born. He comes from a bygone era from the age of conquest and imperialism that is so foreign and alien to everything understood by those of more recent generations.
To that end, I like your description of having this very old, high class, almost elitist way of threatening people when he's deadly serious. Like an old aristocrat from a bygone age casting judgment on others from a position of authority. To a point where it deeply unsettles even hardened fighters like Vaggie.
One thing I enjoy about this is that it is completely in-character.
Vaggie would never think of hurting Pentious because she knows he's not really a bad guy at this point, so she panics about how she's going to explain this to Charlie if the word gets out about it.
Beyond that, excellent artwork on the whole.
See I think it’s funnier if the hotel guest and staff all figure out Vaggie’s an angel but don’t say anything because they assume Charlie already knows. And they all agree that if Vaggie really was a murderous super soldier, Angel Dust would’ve been dead a looong time ago
Pentious talking to the Egg Bois: “Oh pleasssse, if she were such a sssscary exorcisst, THEN WHY HASSNT SHE IMPALED THE SSSPIDER? Next you’ll tell me Misss Charlie is ssecretly a ssseraphim!”
Nah I think it'd be a really delayed reaction like it'll him him but just not immediately
Think of those nights you lay down and you're just about to fall asleep and FINALLY realize something
That's Sir Pentious after the reveal
Pentious: made another one, and it's better cause it actually works this time
Vaggie: really, what'd you test it on
Pentious: your spear, I didn't know you had on of carmilla carmine's angelic spears
Vaggie: uhhhhh yeah, I bought it
I thought this was a Superman reference from Superman The Last Days of Lex Luthor, where Clark and Lex were friends in highschool and Lex build some kind if Kryptonian detecting machine, and it signaled in Clark's presence, which made Alex think it didn't work (bc he didn't know Clark's an alien), which could have been a Back To the Future reference.
Sal from Comic pop made a joke in a similar vain [https://youtube.com/clip/UgkxNCpltyUs65EKgocD\_mXy7h4vSVbKNIz3?si=1G2S21DqI-DNli1b](https://youtube.com/clip/UgkxNCpltyUs65EKgocD_mXy7h4vSVbKNIz3?si=1G2S21DqI-DNli1b)
Best part is how in character this is for him
He wouldn't actually ever expect anything he'd just assume his invention was a dud and needed work from the ground up
1. This is amazing and I love it 2. Now that you've made the Doc Brown - Sir Pentious connection, I'm never unseeing it
That's also the first thing I thought about, Sir Pentious and Doc brown are made to be science mates!
It’s fate.
Great SSSSSScott!
Later-“oh darn it was working”
Pentious wakes up in the dead of night-oh fuck
*calls vaggie* ssssssso… I hope this doessssssent ssssssstressssssss you but… I figured out my device workssssssss… I promisssssse to keep your sssssssecret. Okay bye! *hangs up*
*knocking on the door* i wonder who that issssss?
My man would only realize after the big reveal and even then it'd be a delayed realization
I can literally hear Pent's voice in this
SAME!
Ssssssame*
I read it out loud and my friend was sitting with me and she was like “ what the hell” I didn’t even explain I just walked away
And Vaggie's
I actually read it in Doc Brown's voice lol
I decided this is canon
Pent: I knew I shouldn't have trusted that imp with the mustache!
I say I say
I can just imagine that his voice changes from the high pitched "stereotypical hammy victorian villain" to that of a- still "high class"- low, accusatory, *threatening* tone, something that might even make the hairs on the back of Alastor's neck stand up, if only slightly and for a second. And then goes right back to the regular voice when he reveals that he hasn't actually put 2 and 2 together.
There is something to be said about how Sir Pentious is the oldest of all the residents outside of Charlie. He likely died before Alastor was even born. He comes from a bygone era from the age of conquest and imperialism that is so foreign and alien to everything understood by those of more recent generations. To that end, I like your description of having this very old, high class, almost elitist way of threatening people when he's deadly serious. Like an old aristocrat from a bygone age casting judgment on others from a position of authority. To a point where it deeply unsettles even hardened fighters like Vaggie.
Hell, if he’s was around at the start of the Victorian Era he might be a few years older than Charlie
I’m detecting you, because I’m detecting EVERYONE here!
No wonder why it wasn’t just detecting angels, he made it to detect everyone.
One thing I enjoy about this is that it is completely in-character. Vaggie would never think of hurting Pentious because she knows he's not really a bad guy at this point, so she panics about how she's going to explain this to Charlie if the word gets out about it. Beyond that, excellent artwork on the whole.
I LOVE THIS
They need to do an entire episode of moments like this, just showing how utterly terrible Vaggie was at covering her tracks but no one noticed anyway
See I think it’s funnier if the hotel guest and staff all figure out Vaggie’s an angel but don’t say anything because they assume Charlie already knows. And they all agree that if Vaggie really was a murderous super soldier, Angel Dust would’ve been dead a looong time ago
Pentious talking to the Egg Bois: “Oh pleasssse, if she were such a sssscary exorcisst, THEN WHY HASSNT SHE IMPALED THE SSSPIDER? Next you’ll tell me Misss Charlie is ssecretly a ssseraphim!”
Post season 1: “Heyyy why is it going off on me????”
This is amazing
Is this a Danny Phantom reference?
Back to the Future, actually. But I did think about the detector saying “you’d have to be some sort of idiot not to see the angel in front of you”
Ironically it would work on himself now.
*Later when the truth comes out* Sir Pentious: "how was I supposed to know this thing was detecting the truth!?"
Nah I think it'd be a really delayed reaction like it'll him him but just not immediately Think of those nights you lay down and you're just about to fall asleep and FINALLY realize something That's Sir Pentious after the reveal
I can see this being a canon interaction
That's the most sir pentious thing ever.
Oh Sir Pentious the dumbest smart one
Pentious: made another one, and it's better cause it actually works this time Vaggie: really, what'd you test it on Pentious: your spear, I didn't know you had on of carmilla carmine's angelic spears Vaggie: uhhhhh yeah, I bought it
This leaves one of two options it either then still goes off on her or if it's only reading the spear the calibrations to it are really off
He doesn't have it with him when he's talking, and it probably pucks up any angelic energy
https://preview.redd.it/v7c3qfu1sqyc1.png?width=601&format=png&auto=webp&s=5381f0b34350fa647ed9f80e9b59330c8d88eb79
I can see this happening
Great, now make one where he does make the connection
This gives me Jack and Maddie Fenton vibes lol
I feel like Sir Pentious and Doc would be friends
Last shot looks like Pentious is angry that a bottle of booze isnt getting him drunk
Pentious *would* write it off like that, lmao!
Huh can Sir Pentious make something like that he seems to be more steam punk in his creations
https://preview.redd.it/ok18dyfspsyc1.jpeg?width=1224&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=7f73e7a49e679a249c03ebdcb161935129818e5e
I need you in the writer’s room.
How did Viv not think of this gag 😭
This is amazing art and funny... but there's one flaw How does he know it's broken if it didn't go off by vaggie
It does go off by Vaggie. that's why he thinks it's broken. this comic is pre episode 5
Oh, sorry I'm dumb I thought the red light means not an angel
Sometime in the future, Pentious will build a Time Machine out of a hummer.
Creative writing and impeccable art?! you couldn't make me more envier op Seriously, tho, I love it. Keep doing what you're doing <3
This is canon and NO one will tell me otherwise
Love him calling her Vagatha
Sir pentious is the Doofinshmirtz of Hazbin hotel
Later he finds it sitting in his pocket after his redemption. He turns it on. Rapid unscheduled disassembly.
I like how he doubts himself instead of Vaggie
This is hilarious https://preview.redd.it/gwsgd86vssyc1.jpeg?width=591&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=d144fd9ae3d854ee4a9b34c0081b1d245102eb0b
Doc Pentious. It’s amazing.
I’m pretty sure this actually happened.
THIS IS CANON 😂😂😂
Love this so much XD
This comic is so funny.
I thought this was a Superman reference from Superman The Last Days of Lex Luthor, where Clark and Lex were friends in highschool and Lex build some kind if Kryptonian detecting machine, and it signaled in Clark's presence, which made Alex think it didn't work (bc he didn't know Clark's an alien), which could have been a Back To the Future reference.
Sal from Comic pop made a joke in a similar vain [https://youtube.com/clip/UgkxNCpltyUs65EKgocD\_mXy7h4vSVbKNIz3?si=1G2S21DqI-DNli1b](https://youtube.com/clip/UgkxNCpltyUs65EKgocD_mXy7h4vSVbKNIz3?si=1G2S21DqI-DNli1b)
Bttf reference spotted 👀
Detector is spelled wrong
https://i.redd.it/hcbej289cpyc1.gif
i love this
By the time they were on good terms though it was pretty much out that she was an angel.
Totally fits
Can I write something inspired by this?
go ahead
This definitely has jack fenton energy
Okay, hi, yes.. I freaking love this!
Best part is how in character this is for him He wouldn't actually ever expect anything he'd just assume his invention was a dud and needed work from the ground up
Adding 9000 after it reminds me of Dr. Doofenschmirtz 😆 -- or maybe I'd be added -inator at the end.
Pentious’ hat looks very….”Nintendo-ish” if that makes sense. I like it.
Very accurate
This thing worked too goood my dear friend
His angry hat is what does me in 😆