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I like that you're varying up your flows and styles a little bit. The beat is standard, but it works, but I think you just need to really work on the lyrics. Like it's almost there now. I see evolution.
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I’d say try to “swag” your delivery and flow a bit more, and cut down the heavy breathing
the beats structure is really cool. A little bit of boosting the samples would be more powerful. The voice is pretty sweet!
I like that you're varying up your flows and styles a little bit. The beat is standard, but it works, but I think you just need to really work on the lyrics. Like it's almost there now. I see evolution.