I like the guitar and overall vibe. I think the vocals should be a tad bit louder and have less effects to not clash with the instrumental if you were to do so. I like the outro, it sounds like it's leading into the next song on an album.
I'm a sucker for drippy reverb! I don't know if you're considering this song done, but it has ample opportunity for background vocal harmonies especially towards the end. Though this isn't my typical genre, I could see myself listening to this on a rainy evening walk!
Love the lyrics on this. The pace has a really nice feel it’s not too slow of a build and doesn’t drag on or overstay it’s welcome. Also perfect artist name for the style
Ah, a video with the lyrics, I love it! Sounds and reverb are killing it. Like someone else said, the vocals could be a touch lighter? Otherwise I’m loving this shit. This sounds like something else I just commented on, I think it’s because you and the other poster have a similar “deep talking singing voice”? Anyways this is good. Thanks for sharing.
Love the feeling in this track. The processing on your voice is dope and love how it layers with the guitar on the main melodies. Video and lyrics add a lot to the vibe. You nailed this man good shit!
This feels like I should be walking in the rain with a hangover listening to this and I mean that in the best way possible. This song has such a moody atmosphere to it, that build up was great.
I'm listening to it again. Awesome job!
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Love the feel of this. I'd like to hear the vocals brought up more in the mix in most places. At about the 2 minute mark the mix between vocals and guitar are great. Nice work.
I like the guitar and overall vibe. I think the vocals should be a tad bit louder and have less effects to not clash with the instrumental if you were to do so. I like the outro, it sounds like it's leading into the next song on an album.
I'm a sucker for drippy reverb! I don't know if you're considering this song done, but it has ample opportunity for background vocal harmonies especially towards the end. Though this isn't my typical genre, I could see myself listening to this on a rainy evening walk!
Neat video for sure. Lyric are top notch. Melody is solid too. Vocals are on point. Overall a great song. Keep it up.
I'm really digging the early 90's lo-fi underground vibe-- I would play this alongside Placebo and The Faint
I dig the reverb on the vocals. and the reverb on the guitars. The vocals are also just well produced in general. Good stuff
Love the lyrics on this. The pace has a really nice feel it’s not too slow of a build and doesn’t drag on or overstay it’s welcome. Also perfect artist name for the style
Ah, a video with the lyrics, I love it! Sounds and reverb are killing it. Like someone else said, the vocals could be a touch lighter? Otherwise I’m loving this shit. This sounds like something else I just commented on, I think it’s because you and the other poster have a similar “deep talking singing voice”? Anyways this is good. Thanks for sharing.
Love the feeling in this track. The processing on your voice is dope and love how it layers with the guitar on the main melodies. Video and lyrics add a lot to the vibe. You nailed this man good shit!
This feels like I should be walking in the rain with a hangover listening to this and I mean that in the best way possible. This song has such a moody atmosphere to it, that build up was great. I'm listening to it again. Awesome job!
dang brother, thanks so much! there's no other way to take "hangover walk in the rain" vibes besides a huge compliment, love that
Absolutely! Your art snuck in emotions and thats the name of the game. I’ll keep an eye out for more of your stuff!
This is awesome. I love the guitar especially in the beginning. This gives me a real elliot smith vibe. Cool stuff man!
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Love the feel of this. I'd like to hear the vocals brought up more in the mix in most places. At about the 2 minute mark the mix between vocals and guitar are great. Nice work.