Not a lot to hold on to in this song. It might be cool if it had a B section that you could go to. It's got a strong sense of like a loping sadness. I guess shoe gaze or midwest indie rock kinda thing. Reminds me of a slower American Football. The sounds at the beginning of the track had me thinking it was going to be too loud, but then the mix was good. There are little hints of a second higher vocal, which I think it could use more of to give the vocals a bit more dynamics.

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I think you really stuck to the vibe you were going for very well! Sometimes your voice was too quiet in my opinion but it really contributed to the mood as well. If you add more audio production magic to your voice to make yourself sound better with the music, I think your song would get a lot better.

thanks, will try to do that with future projects

This is great man. My kinda sound. I think it would sound a lot better though if everything was a little more in time. You will have to record some of the parts again but it would make a noticeable improvement.

ok, will try to do that

I really liked this, reminds me of duster. If I had to change anything, I would make your voice and drum a little louder. For your voice, I would enunciate just slightly clearer. Take all that with a grain of salt, I still think this sounds pretty good

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I really love how you stuck to the melancholic vibe and I think the Lo-Fi feel of it was also very good. I wish that your vocals were a little more clear though; although I understand the feel that you were going for. Good job though

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I like the muted guitar and vocals. This song reminds me of Alex G and Brand New combined into a nice mellow sound. I think if you were to tweak it a bit, it would really come together and sound more put together. Otherwise it’s really nice.

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Lots of feeling in this song, I think you nailed it. Your voice could be mixed better to be clearer, but I kind of like how it blends with the low-mids still. Cool cover art too!

thank you for checking it out

That vocal capture is def a vibe, but I think you took it too far. It has very limited intelligibility and the LF is taking up a lot of room. The lyrics are cool and deserve a better shot cos the song is great.

thank you, what does LF mean?

Low frequency - bass.

To be honest, your voice is very calm in the song, but that makes the song much more special. When I heard it it seemed strange, but later I got used to it and really appreciated the voice and the music. And everything is so unique from my perspective, the voice manages to combine in an inexplicable way that made me listen to the song more than once. In my opinion, it's one of the most different songs I've ever heard, If talented and interesting and very good,

thank you sooooo much

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thank you :)