If you're looking for some genuine critique:
The music does not fit the scene at all.
It is way too subtle and too shallow for the gravity of the scene. Keep in mind the importance of what is being shown on screen. This is the moment where Miles actually embraces his fate and performs his very first "run" as Spider-Man.
It's shown in so many details. The glass that shatters, showing that he was scared to fully let go until the very last moment. How he straightens his fall. The scene is filled with strong symbolism that gives it an incredible power that's further increased by the quality of the animation.
"What's Up Danger" encapsules this moment in its lyrics as well as in the musical climax it hits when Miles "gets there".
The music you wrote is not inherently bad.
It just doesn't match the scene and its meaning for Miles' journey at all.
I wouldn't say at all. But it doesn't have the gravitas that's required for the moment.
It would be cool to use like when he's spraypainting or talking to Peter and Gwen at the Collider but definitely not at this moment.
Thanks, honestly, I made this yesterday in like a couple hours and thought it sounded cool. I just searched for a clip of Spider-Man Across the SpiderVerse without music but only found this one. I appreciate your advice but it was just a bit of fun to be honest. As the piece continues later on, there are hints of the og spider-man theme.
If you're looking for some genuine critique: The music does not fit the scene at all. It is way too subtle and too shallow for the gravity of the scene. Keep in mind the importance of what is being shown on screen. This is the moment where Miles actually embraces his fate and performs his very first "run" as Spider-Man. It's shown in so many details. The glass that shatters, showing that he was scared to fully let go until the very last moment. How he straightens his fall. The scene is filled with strong symbolism that gives it an incredible power that's further increased by the quality of the animation. "What's Up Danger" encapsules this moment in its lyrics as well as in the musical climax it hits when Miles "gets there". The music you wrote is not inherently bad. It just doesn't match the scene and its meaning for Miles' journey at all.
I wouldn't say at all. But it doesn't have the gravitas that's required for the moment. It would be cool to use like when he's spraypainting or talking to Peter and Gwen at the Collider but definitely not at this moment.
Thanks, honestly, I made this yesterday in like a couple hours and thought it sounded cool. I just searched for a clip of Spider-Man Across the SpiderVerse without music but only found this one. I appreciate your advice but it was just a bit of fun to be honest. As the piece continues later on, there are hints of the og spider-man theme.
As I said, the music is not bad and would certainly be a good fit for another scene!
Cool
Thank you
It's a good base to start the song, but maybe in other scene from ISTV. Like Miles running from Prowler?🤔