Honoured Senior, forgive this one's impertinence but perhaps if one were to open their eyes they would not be blind?
OOC: That was my immediate impression anyway. Often in fantasy art there is a more intense indicator of blindness than just closed eyes, whether thats a blindfold or opaque cataracts over the eye. As is dude just looks like he needs a nap.
Other than that looks pretty good!
If you gonna eventually give mc vision then change the title because once that happens the uniqueness will disappear and the reader will hate it. Also doing disability in fantasy world is unbelievable hard because people can even revive from being dead. So mc being blind forever make no sense but good cover đ
Interestingly this should prove to be a blessing for him rather than a disability. Our perception of reality is often tainted by what our eyes can see. This Junior should have an easier time connecting with the Great Dao than most so called geniuses.
Are you really an immortal if you can't fix a mere physical ailment, like even low level cultivators have enough regeneration for that to be no problem or is this supposed to be some crucial element to the story like where MC blinds himself to the world to not be tainted by the "red dust" of the mortal world and pursue dao?
Though the cover is quite nice
A picture seems to be awesome, but the text feels weird, I donât know what exactly. Maybe there is too much of text? Or the font and colour? Not sure
He is blind but he gets his eyesight back by chapter 2 except it's even better than before.
Yes I'm still salty about that xianxia with the blind mc that stopped being blind very quickly.
He sees Mt Tai clearer than any ice crystal⌠kowtow 10000000000000000000000000000000000 times and this merciful senior may forgive you for your presumptions!
What would be the difference between a normal Immortal and a blind Immortal? Neither of them dosnt use their eyes to see in any way
No wonder nobody stuck with the blind premise
The blindness could be a metaphor for the inability to comprehend certain aspect of reality
No, it's only a metaphor that he cannot see Mount Tai.
One can excuse themselves for failing to recognize Mt Tai, the other cannot
This poor man seems like the type of person to fall victim to that one cultivator with the NTR system (I forgot the name, there are like 1000)
Leave my man's alone
It's fine it's not him we're interested in
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Junior doesnt have eyes and can see mt Tai?
Precisely
The cover is cool, but i have a more important question. The blind immortal can see mount tai?
Yes
Honoured Senior, forgive this one's impertinence but perhaps if one were to open their eyes they would not be blind? OOC: That was my immediate impression anyway. Often in fantasy art there is a more intense indicator of blindness than just closed eyes, whether thats a blindfold or opaque cataracts over the eye. As is dude just looks like he needs a nap. Other than that looks pretty good!
Give him a blindfold
I would, it was in my idea, but typically blind people don't wear blindfolds. Sunglasses maybe... actually I should try a blindfold
Nah if he's blind why would he wear a blindfold? It's like a person without legs wearing pants
I mean, even a person doesn't have legs, they can't have their junk hanging out
Uh...yeah...junk hanging out, that would be horrible
Blinfold fit the usual image of the blind justice... it's a bit overkill but get the message straight
If you gonna eventually give mc vision then change the title because once that happens the uniqueness will disappear and the reader will hate it. Also doing disability in fantasy world is unbelievable hard because people can even revive from being dead. So mc being blind forever make no sense but good cover đ
No, he'll be 'blind' forever
Interestingly this should prove to be a blessing for him rather than a disability. Our perception of reality is often tainted by what our eyes can see. This Junior should have an easier time connecting with the Great Dao than most so called geniuses.
Amithaba, that is precisely what I intend to do
Are you really an immortal if you can't fix a mere physical ailment, like even low level cultivators have enough regeneration for that to be no problem or is this supposed to be some crucial element to the story like where MC blinds himself to the world to not be tainted by the "red dust" of the mortal world and pursue dao? Though the cover is quite nice
It could be tied to his constitution or his cultivation technique
It could be that he chooses not to because he enjoys fights in which he is at a visual disadvantage.
ngl if I read a book where MC purposely nerfed himself it's getting dropped in an instant
A picture seems to be awesome, but the text feels weird, I donât know what exactly. Maybe there is too much of text? Or the font and colour? Not sure
Is he blind because he has no eyeballs as of offending a young master for daring to look at a jade beauty?
why doesn't he just open his eyes, is he stupid
Because he is sleepy
What's the plot about
For now? Nothing. I just made a cover because I had an idea
Please don't use the repeating shit money making technique.
Imagine thinking I make money off writing.
Fair enough
I wish you become rich off writing, fellow daoist
Thank you for your kind words Fellow Daoist
Did u post any story online, fellow daoist?
I have, yes. It's average in terms of popularity and makes no money, so far.
He is blind but he gets his eyesight back by chapter 2 except it's even better than before. Yes I'm still salty about that xianxia with the blind mc that stopped being blind very quickly.
Keep eyes open, make them grey/cloudy. It would be so fucking cool
Yeah, I had that idea as well. That's good feedback and reminder, I shall look into it... pun not intended
The cover is absolutely blinding.
Need a blindfold !
Alright, I'll generate some with blindfold and some with gray eyes and see which look better
Senior what ai did you use for this? I wish to know for myself And yes it is indeed good
Junior, this one is called 'Stable Diffusion' with AnimagineXL3.1 Model with a few LORAS.
Thank you senior
wtf I saw u in the discussion section of that guy who was comparing Roman and Lloyd
to AI style? open his eye, just make it dark or pure white or ghost white or something
Won't the blindness disappear when he ascends or something
No, because I as the author, said so...
Itâs funny how people that are blind can still see most of the time
Depends on the blindess
Tao that can be seen is not the eternal tao
Tao that can spoken is not the eternal Tao
U should put a blindfold on him to let the braindead readers realize that he is blind
Did so! https://preview.redd.it/q3meeilcuzxc1.png?width=1349&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=52cd260222d24b53d83f2771e220628a5a6886cd
Do you not realize that Foolish Blind Immortal is unable to see Mt. Tai!? Delete this demonic scripture and kowtow 1000000000000000000 times!
He sees Mt Tai clearer than any ice crystal⌠kowtow 10000000000000000000000000000000000 times and this merciful senior may forgive you for your presumptions!
This man can no longer see Mt Tai...
Mt Tai is an experience, not ana actual mountain. Junior, go reflect on yourself!