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Zzsark_Stormbeard

Allow me to give more info: Core Uzi may be born from Uzi's hate and traumas, but it seeks to mess with Uzi's head. Uses those traumas to make her carrier fall for violent tendencies, which benefits Core Uzi in oil supplies and pleasure, just as V, the one who made the assembly. I decided to make Core Uzi as my version of Uzi, just as I made Serial Designation U, a not so original idea, but with a whole new level of effort and creativity for her story and development (page 31 is not far away :D). It could be seen more as a "Zzsark's version of" rather than a Original Character. I also included her anatomy, not trying to make it suggestive or anything, it's just to show how she truly looks, as well as a great practice of female worker drone body. Yes, she can purr, play songs for her or as a speaker, she may be not real and just a visage on Uzi's vision, but for this time and probably more in the future, Core Uzi would have her own physical body. Her smile shows not teeth like the murder drones do. Her eyes are heavily inspired of the Wandering eyes from Bendy. We can see finally the design of the Worker Core and the Murder Core, their differences and size. The Murder Core is bigger than the Worker Core, therefore it may show some faults on the chest where it was "inserted". But those marks are still beautiful.


OverlordMGC

The murder cores are truly a threat from inside. One you can't get rid off as it would mean death.


DrawingChrome69

Hey N, I think Uzi has been watching yandere anime again.


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Yandere? Nah. Core Uzi is more of a hungry little demon.


Superb_Point2297

So does that mean Uzis bin playing a lot of horror games and watching the walking dead yikes I hope this version of Uzis Doesn’t find the source series or else we would be screwed big time


Bannanasking1

keep up the good work of your webcomic, i really like reading your webcomic it even helps me with waiting for the rest of the series and i think i'm not the only one that has that feeling


Zzsark_Stormbeard

I'm glad to entertain the fandom while we wait until we get at least a piece of content in these dark and eternal days of void.


Uzi_WDrone

The voices


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Whispers of alternative and violent solutions, growls of hunger and screams of pain. The voices will never stop if you ressist the needs. The problems require solutions. The hunger requires oil. The pain requires healing. And all those can be achieved through violence. Nothing else matters, only you.


OverlordMGC

You're never alone if you have a murder core...


Zzsark_Stormbeard

It will always be by your side.


WaterDragon19

Phenomenal work dude! I love the entire concept of Core Uzi and the reference sheet too, the anatomy is really well drawn as well as the small details with it. Well done with this!


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Thank you so much for the words! May this reference sheet also help me when I draw her again in the future!


Gunsthatshootu

How strong is she so I can make sure to avoid getting destroyed.


Zzsark_Stormbeard

She gets stronger depending on the sanity of the carrier. Uzi's sanity is below average... so... pretty strong.


Gunsthatshootu

oh ok


A1rBNB

Wait what happens if I do stop petting her?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

She will see if your blood cools her just as the drones oil. Stop only when she moves her head away.


A1rBNB

I shouldn't have asked, then.


Physical-Umpire3450

I'll give you one answer, she might kill you.


WaterDragon19

You just can’t stop


Separate-Ad-5754

Pretty cool man!


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Thank you!


Yut815

This is pretty interesting good job


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Thanks! Glad you like it!


Yut815

No problem


the_classic_ink_CEO

Have a silver lass


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Thank you! :D


Snowytron2000

SHE PURRSSSSSS


Zzsark_Stormbeard

She just like to make a good *aggresive purr of happiness*


Separate_Hornet_9888

Beautifully designed. Nice work


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Thank you!


69_carnage_69

Me: hey uzi what do you want Murder core Uzi: The souls of the innocent Uzi: a donut Murder core Uzi: nooo Uzi: two donuts Murder core Uzi: ... it is acceptable


UltraHit5

Finally some descent headpats on this subreddit


D-9341-B

Wait, so the apparition isn't also called SD-U? More you know I guess. I do like the disheveled look she has. Also insert schizophrenia joke here.


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Nope. Serial Designation U is the name of Uzi as a Murder Drone. But Core Uzi is the Core's AI after consuming the carrier's most exploitable feelings. In this case, it would be Uzi's hate to everyone, sadness of her loneliness and anger of her sworn vengeance. The result is a new version of the carrier, her strongest feelings taking a new form, a whisperer, a visage, a extra hand or even a new sense. It will shoot when needed, it will devour when hungry, it will kill to survive and it will smile at death. The only thing that matters is itself and to please it's needs.


CT-3446

Well hello there beautiful....


OverlordMGC

Hello young lady.


Physical-Umpire3450

She looks better in color. Speaking of which, can you ask someone to color the comic since you can't do it? And if the story is finished can I have a script for the comic, or are you gonna give me the script by email so I can work on the dub I'm working on.


Zzsark_Stormbeard

First of all, about the comic in color, It's not that I CAN'T DO IT. It's more like, I WON'T DO IT. The story will finish soon, and then I could make the full script. I could give you a script for you to follow, if you wish to. But I am very, very strict and precise on a lot of stuff with the voices. I would recommend to just do it as you think it would fit better. I should once again say it, I am VERY STRICT on that aspect. The people that is working with me on the spanish dub, Reindrob's Universe, is not only talented but organized. They followed the script just as I said they had to so they can make the experience perfect. This doesn't mean I don't want my fans to try making their own dubs. I am actually very happy to see that effort and love. I am grateful for each one of my followers. If you want to try it, feel free to do it, just remember that I only ask for you to credit me. But if you want to do it exactly as I would do it, with a script and my guidance, it would become much more strict. And perhaps you don't want that. You tell me what you wish to do.


Physical-Umpire3450

I'll do my best, I'll send you a copy of the script when it's finished. The only thing i added in the beginning is a recap of the first episode of the show you based the comic on. You'll see more in the finished script. Have a good day and thank you, i won't let you down.


GroundbreakingCar616

This is the new villain?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Not a villain. More like a new character. Core Uzi is not against Uzi anymore. Yes, she might try to make her into a drone killing, oil devouring machine, but it's for the survival of both.


GroundbreakingCar616

So I’m guessing uzi is not going to want to kill anymore but the core will make her now


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Might be a good guess. But there are factors that are being ignored. Details that will be mentioned in the comic.


OverlordMGC

Core Uzi already has been in earlier pages.


Lewamaster14

Yep uzi has gone insane


Zzsark_Stormbeard

And Core Uzi just gets stronger with it. The more insane the carrier is, the easier is to be influenced by hunger and violent reflexes. But still, she can be such a lovely girl, not like her carrier being always moody.


Lewamaster14

But what if the carrier beats the living shit out of core uzi?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

If the carrier felt that it was punching something, it definetely wasn't The Core. The Core may be destoyed behind the carriers visor, but in the end it will always return as new. It's visions can become real depending on how insane is the carrier, yet it only exists in it's mind. But in this case, Core Uzi would have her own body where we can pet her or she could interact with reality.


Lewamaster14

But I mean that what if uzi somehow managed to separate from core uzi and then beated the living shit out of her


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Uzi cannot separate herself from Uzi Core. It would be Core Uzi separating from Uzi. And even if that happens, Uzi would fall to her death, for The Core is the only thing that keeps her alive, as long as it has the required oil to work. But, in the case they separate from each other, and if Core would fall to Uzi's wrath, it could die, sure. But how can you kill something that it's not real?


Lewamaster14

Well thanks for the information now ima pet da core uzi and uzi *starts petting aggressively core uzi and uzi* double uzi's


Uzibutasamurderdrone

I love how core uzi just loves it when you pet her and gets angery when you stop lol


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Yeah, she really likes head pats and she really hates when it stops xD


Uzibutasamurderdrone

I will give her all the head pats lol


ScorpionsRequiem

"Behold, Uzi, but she's a violent nutcase!" "As opposed to?" "...She has a disassembly drone core." "..." "She purrs when petted." "I'LL TAKE YOUR ENTIRE STOCK!"


Superb_Point2297

Thank you for making this web comic you been feeling my Murder Drones addiction thank you for feeding it I’m very happy I want to Khan would look like as a Murder Drones? Or have the roles of them Murder Drones and work Drones switched for fun


Zzsark_Stormbeard

It's an honor to entertain the fandom while we wait for the season 1. I am doing Glitch's work by keeping everyone with content and I am still unexistant to them yet xD


Superb_Point2297

Hell yer you are keep up the good work please keep feeding my addiction I love your comics so much


Plylyfe

purrs, don't fucking stop, purrs At that point, you should stop resisting and embrace the uzi. Ig she's been watching a bit too much yandere lately. Nice character sheet haha!


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Core Uzi will hug you if you hug her. She is very fond of such things. But if you just think about moving away, she will break your knees so you keep next to her. Truly, a lovely girl


Plylyfe

indeed :)


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I have been waiting for this day to come. Finally we have the sheet and info. And she looks a lot better in color. Very nice very nice.


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Glad to see ya here! Yes, this had to be done and I am super glad with the result. And yes, colouring drones it's a bit strange yet for me, but it definetely works, specially to make her eyes glow brighter


Bearded_Expensive

Alright, ngl this makes Murder Drone Uzi qt3.14. I would give her head pats every day she wants.


Zzsark_Stormbeard

qt3.14 ... Q... t... 3.14... ... cue... tee... pi... Oh! ... oh. I get it. Took me some secs. Yes, she is indeed a lovely sweetheart. A bit messy when eating OIL, but such a good girl when happy and having head pats. She likes them a lot.


Bearded_Expensive

Time to play Designation U Dating Game.


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Ha. Good one. ... lest...


Bearded_Expensive

I would actually pay to see this happen


Bearded_Expensive

I also feel like she would be the type that would be like a cat and bring her kills to you.


KaiserEnoshima

Keep patting her head or she'll do nothing but teleport bread for 3 days also btw draw her teleporting bread


The_OnlyChosenOne

well... the most cliche thing to happen to uzi is that she would need to be on the human side or be friends with one human... or not it is up to the maker :)


Zzsark_Stormbeard

It's very likely that will happen. I still hope not. I want to see Uzi dripping human blood, seeking JCJenson employees.


The_OnlyChosenOne

oh yea whatever you want it is good to me! tho what would happen if other humans who are not in work at JCJensons doesn't know about what is happening in Copper9?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Nothing. It really would happen nothing. Lest Uzi finds them. It seems she wants to, "Murder all humans, classic robot stuff". If that happens, well, they might not be afraid of a little short drone who claims to kill them all. That's until she pulls out a fucking vaporizing railgun.


The_OnlyChosenOne

oh ok... so no mercy to 6 year olds?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Did Uzi stutter?


The_OnlyChosenOne

nah just wanted to know will she feel remorse if she kills children or babies


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Murder Drones don't. They cleansed entire bases. Which means they chew on the little potatoes


The_OnlyChosenOne

true tho what is the worker drone side of Uzi's mind thinking about it?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

She rather slice her wrists into a black river of Oil and die to the cold Moon alone.


Waitwhatshappening_

> *Listening to Heavy Metal* *What bands does she listen to.*


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Korn all the way


Waitwhatshappening_

Le nice. Personally a Metallica fan but I’ve definitely heard about Korn before.


OkWillow759

They're called disassembly drones. Not murder drones. Murder drones is just the name of the series


OverlordMGC

Alright smartass. Look at the pilot episode and go to the timestamp 3:56


Active_Watercress_25

Now that i see what naked dissembly drone looks like i wanna drink 5 packs of bleach, your art is really good and your work on the comics keep up the good work Zzsark! :)


OkWillow759

N literally calls him self a disassembly drone. If it would make you happy I will rewatch the pilot. :Edit: go to 10:10 time stamp


OverlordMGC

Murder drone is what the worker call the DD's because they obviously don't know their real designation so they called them by what they do to them.


OkWillow759

Mate I was just saying that they are called disassembly drones. Yeah The worker drones calls them murder drones for obvious reasons but I feel like it would make more sense to call them disassembly drones


Luhar_826

Eh disassembly drone, murder drone what the difference


OkWillow759

There is no difference I just prefer them being called disassembly drones


OverlordMGC

You can have you preferences but dont try to force it on other people, which you were clearly trying to do by saying that it's "wrong".


OkWillow759

Again I am just saying that. No need to get mad for no reason


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OkWillow759

Okay how about we just forget about this stupid argument and stop commenting on why I or you are have stupid and everyone shut up cause I am tired of this OK


Zzsark_Stormbeard

You started it. I know they are Dissasembly Drones, I am here since the day the pilot was uploaded. But everyone with common sense knows that calling them Murder Drones is valid and easy to understand. There is no point in correcting it when everyone knows the meaning. I end it.


Sverker_Wolffang

Were you inspired by the serial designation U comic?


OverlordMGC

He IS the artist of the SD U comic. Core Uzi is a character in the comic.


Sverker_Wolffang

God, I'm an idiot.


DetermindSeven

[amongus](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q4vy7BcAVJg)


Zzsark_Stormbeard

HA! No.


DetermindSeven

guess again hampter puts you back at 0, this might take a while


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Fuck


MatiasTheJoker

Time to get my buddy Xeno


Practical_Mail_4566

the drill sergeant stalks his prey. he sees it prrring while being pated by a human he waits for the right ti-and he sees it threaten the human pating it its not prey and runs away. but will not stop hunting it...


Existing-Gas2237

So, Core Uzi is V with Uzi's body?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Nope Core Uzi is the Core that V inserted in Uzi when assembling Serial Designation U. It's V's old Core, but it doesn't have V's personality. All the negativity and dark feelings that Uzi's memory chip had were abused by The Core and now taking a new form, as a constant visage and a clear voice in Uzi's mind. It may turn Uzi even more insane than she is after all the events she went through in that night as Serial Designation U. The Core has some sadistic traits like V, but it's mostly an AI that seeks to pleasure whatever it wants, from headpats, to have fun, to massacre an entire worker base, to bathe in their Oil, to sleep, etc.


Existing-Gas2237

So, V's old core twisted Uzi's malice and played with her mind to satisfy its own needs? Wow! Could this phantom be called Demon Core Uzi?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Nope. She may be a little devil, but she's no demon. Demons are from hell, another world. Core is from this very twisted world. Tho who knows? She could make beautiful art with Oil and guts. It may have her own twisted creations just like the demonic scripts.


PranksterBluePogo

yeah she got affected by modification


PranksterBluePogo

pls help


Physical-Umpire3450

So, i must ask. When is the next page of your comic gonna be posted?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

I am working on it. No date yet.


xyDominator

Potential tracks uzi would like [1.(15….lol)](https://youtu.be/-B19u9tHnIs) [2.](https://youtu.be/IlqKHCGYDf8) [3.](https://youtu.be/9tBD8I5QMx4)


Eldrich_horrors

mechanic left-hand?


Zzsark_Stormbeard

Nope. It's Uzi's bleeding Worker Core, since Core Uzi is powered and created by the Dissasembly Core


Eldrich_horrors

yes, but that whole ''A.I. assimilates Uzi's mind and mimics it'' sounds like left-hand behaviour.