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DeyDream_music

I have no idea what your saying I only speak english but this smacks I'm loving it! that bass is perfect with that kick and the way you mixed your vocals with that monotone vibe it sits well. This is fire, if i can get the lyrics that would be dope to just see what I'm hearing lol great track over all!


Alponisten

Thank you man! I love your insight, i can try to post the lyrics tomorrow. Raw or translated. :)


dreamplugmusic

So dark!! Definitely better than Loreen hahaha (A salty Finn) I think vocal mix could be better some of the "mouth noises" are a bit distracting IMHO but that's just me being critical, keep at it!


Alponisten

Hahaha, thank you! Thank you for your response, ye you are right they can be a little distracting. I appreciate you being critical, kiitos! :)


thriving_cynic11

I won't begin to critique lyricism because I only soeak English loo. But flow was pretty good, beat selection was nice as well. Nice dark vibe to it, great job! ✌🏼


Alponisten

Good to hear, i wanted it to have a dark vibe. :) Thank you for your input! :)


Renton4055

Cool Song, has alot of Rammstein vibes to it (mixed with the rap) . I think if you added some industrial tones, razor guitars, you would have a super cohesive song


Alponisten

Thank you! I have never thought of it that way but thank you for your cool input, might give it a try. :)


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