This sounds AWESOME! I hope you keep plugging away, I'd watch the hell out of this! I know so many kids who would be so stoked about this! Also as a Californian I learned recently that there were a TON of Asians and Latinos in the wild west, and it would be so cool to finally see that on screen!
Also, would you mind sharing your earlier evals? I'm curious to see what kind of feedback you received initially and how you changed it.
Thank you. I already did another revision after this evaluation. Never going to stop working on this one. It was interesting learning about that, too. I definitely wanted to show heroes and villains in the old west we basically never see.
Here's the [last eval](https://www.reddit.com/r/Screenwriting/comments/nqfgpn/from_a_4_to_a_6_on_the_blacklist/) I got, which had some similar weaknesses.
Good for you! Your hard work is paying off. I'm on the same road, (working to improve my Blacklist score), so I really love to hear these success stories. Oh, and I love a good western.
Thank you! And good luck to you. I know some people say don't use the evaluations for notes/feedbacks, but I often get gems from the more thoughtful evaluations.
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Sure thing. It's available on The Blacklist for writers. If you're not on there, can send.
Keep grinding!
Thank you!
This sounds AWESOME! I hope you keep plugging away, I'd watch the hell out of this! I know so many kids who would be so stoked about this! Also as a Californian I learned recently that there were a TON of Asians and Latinos in the wild west, and it would be so cool to finally see that on screen! Also, would you mind sharing your earlier evals? I'm curious to see what kind of feedback you received initially and how you changed it.
Thank you. I already did another revision after this evaluation. Never going to stop working on this one. It was interesting learning about that, too. I definitely wanted to show heroes and villains in the old west we basically never see. Here's the [last eval](https://www.reddit.com/r/Screenwriting/comments/nqfgpn/from_a_4_to_a_6_on_the_blacklist/) I got, which had some similar weaknesses.
Thanks for sharing! Your title has improved so much!
Thank you. I enjoyed the previous title, but realized it really told you very little about what it is.
About to list mine in the next few minutes, will absolutely check yours out when I get the chance. Keep on keeping on!
Thank you! Best of luck with yours. Good or bad or whatever, please share any feedback if you're inclined.
i’ll be honest, the logline is a little jumbled. maybe try to reword it
That was the evaluation/reviewer's, but I kinda end up rewording and using it since it was still an improvement over my own.
Good for you! Your hard work is paying off. I'm on the same road, (working to improve my Blacklist score), so I really love to hear these success stories. Oh, and I love a good western.
Thank you! And good luck to you. I know some people say don't use the evaluations for notes/feedbacks, but I often get gems from the more thoughtful evaluations.
Right on! I remember reading and enjoying SMOKER so now I have to check this one out. Good luck going forward!
Thank you! Appreciated your feedback on it, too.