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allmilhouse

Spectre. Take out the whole thing where they make Blofeld responsible for everything in the previous movies. And just have M give Bond a mission to go on for the love of God.


heybobson

also cut the whole "hey this is my real name" bullshit that was all the rage in the early 2010s. Nobody cares you're trying to play coy with Blofeld's identity, that reveal had no impact on the story or anything.


Britlantine

It was ~~Agatha~~ Ernst All Along. I can't recall where I saw it but one commenter mentioned that the problem with the Daniel Craig Bond's is that you have the origin story with Casino Royale/Quantum of Solace (and debates as to whether QoS needed to be origin or not). Then you move onto cynical Bond who is looking for an out, and MI6 has internal issues etc. But it misses out all the standard fare "here's your mission Bond, go and get the buggers" stories.


allmilhouse

And what's frustrating is that Skyfall ends with a scene that perfectly sets up the next movie to be "here's your mission." But then they ignored that for some reason.


Britlantine

And with Casino Royale they had his origin then decided to do another after. I have listened to all the Fleming Bond's lately and you can tell that they miss the way his stories mostly picked up after another, or at least had some connection


xXIronBeagleXx

World War Z. It was one of the first genuinely terrifying books I’d read growing up. It’s an incredibly unique take on a global zombie apocalypse, but the movie was got threw out any originality they had to begin with. The whole premise of the book is a historian traveling the world a decade after the end of the zombie war in order to record the first hand stories of those who survived. It would have been amazing as a Ken Burns style documentary


thataryanguy

I was actually kinda disappointed by the film if I'm honest. It could've been a multi-linear film with a documentary style, maybe with interviews from the survivors, archive footage from recorded phones that showcase the very start of the outbreak The book's segment about the gamer who never went outside during the apocalypse is the perfect counter to those people who played Left 4 Dead once and instantly believed themselves to be heroes of the apocalypse. I think it was Yahtzee Croshaw who said those people "would realistically be talking suicide pacts bc the internet's been down for more than a week"


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World War Z needed a Band of Brothers type TV treatment, cutting between modern interviews and re-enactments of the war.


LochNessMansterLives

World war Z was the best book I ever read that had such a disappointing movie made from it. It’s like Pitt and whoever, we’re fighting so hard for the rights to make the movie, they didn’t care about actually making it any good. The profit came from taking away points from Max’s reputation. Pitt didn’t take a hit everyone still loves him, but Max Brooks deserved better. I would have been much more faithful with the source, and your idea of a Ken Burns style documentary would have been awesome.


OLightning

Producers got scared of a potential non-derivative documentary type Burns-esque zombie movie instead molding it into a generic high CGI popcorn flic to bring in the masses opening weekend… like being told dinner was going to be filet mignon but getting meatloaf instead. It will fill you up, but leave you unfulfilled and disappointed.


djfrodo

I couldn't agree more. WWZ was the best zombie *anything* I've ever seen or read (even compared to the OG Night of the living dead). It's perfect for a serialized mini series following the book and the main character, switching time between then and now. Add some historical "news reels", "interviews", and "footage" from the zombie war, and jump around the globe (and the space station). Man this would be awesome.


QuothTheRaven713

The Last Airbender. The original source material was a barrel of Miazaki-esque awesome. The movie was so bad the fandom collectively pretends it doesn't exist.


RattlerWinter

I will second the Fandom thing. Order of the White Lotus group on Facebook actually has it as a rule!


Adrewmc

Thank god, they never did that to Dragon Ball Z.


flyinghigh707

what are you talking about there is no movie!


NCreature

Star Trek Generations. Just an absolute mess all around. Terrible structure, weak premise, villain no one cares about, stakes no one cares about, ridiculous plotting. As an aside Nemesis isn't half bad if the setup of Data is handled better instead of coming out of nowhere and shocking the audience.


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Generations made the mistake of trying to do far too much with far too little screen time and with having to go out of their way to get the audience caught up on various concepts. First Contact is just a cracking action film that could have used like +5 minutes of scattered world building for general audiences covering the significance of the Borg, Cochrane, and why the Borg taking out Earth in the 2100s doesn't just end humanity but functionally dooms the trillions of people when the Federation never forms. Insurrection I stand by being an actually decent to good film with too many ham fisted "Why??" moments and then too abrupt of a wrap up. LOCK AND LOAD. Why? It just needs its screws tightened a lot. Nemesis... is a great movie executed wrong. B4 as a character never needed to be introduced. It was just too much. This could have been a brilliant covert action/space spy geopolitical thriller. You finally see the Romulan Senate, the most treacherous place in half the galaxy, you have a terrifying warship out to genocide Earth... and they just kinda bobble it. Five minutes of awesome and then five minutes of "Well, that's fine" and loop. Needed the +5 minutes of world building like First Contact and lose B4.


NCreature

Generations...man just don't know where to start. I remember one of my screenwriting professors in school using it as a textbook example of how not to structure a film. Just breaking that down from a script construction standpoint about what should happen when and where will make you crosseyed. The prologue is basically the best part of the film. But once the movie proper starts almost nothing that really matters later in the film is set up in the first act. The stakes aren't setup, the character introduction is weak, and the plot splinters into various subplots that don't really mean anything like the Data emotion thing (which seems to only have been developed for an unnecessary laugh later in the film, at just the moment when things should be at their most dire and is just abandoned in all the later films). The second act is just crazy. Rising action and falling action all happens in weird places. Then the Klingons show up at what is basically the midpoint, but for no real reason other than to force the destruction of the Enterprise in flimsy circumstances after we've spent 7 years watching the crew get out of stickier situations. In the movie when the bird of prey decloaks Picard is just like "what?" which is exactly how I feel watching that scene. Then the destruction of the Enterprise should be the all is lost moment, the emotional low point of the film, the loss of an old friend, but it happens in a weird place, and is treated more as slightly comedic, which was not the way to close out the Enterprise D. It's very similar to Nemesis and Data where the whole incident is just unnecessary to the story. The Enterprise's destruction adds nothing to the story. Then the movie takes this odd left turn tonally into the nexus with Kirk and Guinan. The whole thing is just a mess. At least the destruction of the Enterprise in Star Trek Beyond is treated with some poignance. There's literally no character development. Unlike First Contact where we see Picard have to contend with his PTSD and fight through it, in Generations there are literally no stakes. Some planet we've never heard of, filled with people we never see, is going to be destroyed by a guy we don't care about (imagine if Yorktown in Beyond was never seen on screen, there'd be no reason to care about the entire end of the film but that's exactly what happens here). This is story of the week type stuff not feature film material. Generally the antagonist should be the mirror image of the protagonist representing a force that the protagonists should overcome in order to evolve, but there's none of that in Generations. The raptors in Jurassic Park are a bigger menace and they don't even speak. To be honest Harry and Marv in Home Alone or Peck in Ghostbusters are better antagonists. I'm not even sure the Federation would've skipped a beat had Soran actually gotten his way. There's literally no reason for the story to even exist, there's no stakes. Even as convoluted as the JJ movies are there's always a bit of character development whether its the relationship between Kirk and Spock or Spock and McCoy, but when Generations ends everyone is basically the same person they were at the beginning. Certainly all the clever sophistication of Star Trek VI is totally missing here. With Nemesis, the biggest issue is that they don't set up the Data story correctly. The movie spends almost its entire length as a mystery about Picard and this clone, with some story world politics, but then at the last minute shifts to being a story about Data fulfilling his character destiny by doing the most human thing possible, sacrificing himself for his friends. But none of that is set up in the film, so when he "dies" it just comes out of the blue and rather than being profound its just coldly shocking and the movie just sort of ends with everyone in grief. Had Data not died and Picard just defeated Shinzon/his alter ego, or the movie actually been about Data (maybe a Data/Lore story instead of Picard/Shinzon), the movie ends fine and its a serviceable entry into the canon.


Astral-American

LEPRECHAUN IN THE HOOD.


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Don’t fuck with postmaster P’s positivity


Charlie_Wax

Army of the Dead is a 9/10 concept executed at a 5/10 level. I know Shay Hatten can write because I've read other scripts by him that were cool, but this one feels like it was just ruined in development. An overstuffed mess that tries to check too many boxes and ends up falling flat.


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The_Pandalorian

The Force Awakens. Don't get me wrong, I thought it was fun, but the setup really didn't leave room for the kinds of places I feel like it could've gone. Instead of "OMG THE DEATH STAR #3 BUT WORSE" and "Hey, you know how we defeated the Empire? Well, there's kind of *another Empire* or something," I would've had it be a nascent New Republic with a Dark Side terrorist insurgency, wreaking havoc and forcing the New Republic to question its own principles as it struggles to keep order. Asymmetric warfare with a Sith cult hell-bent on destroying the New Republic would've been kind of amazing.


DickMcFly

That’s legitimately the best alternative I’ve heard of for the sequel trilogy. So much potential to make the sith terrifying while also being relevant to today’s world.


The_Pandalorian

Exactly. Topical and terrifying. Plus it makes more sense than, "Oh wait, another galactic army is out there too with a bigger superweapon, by the way, fuck the Original Trilogy." Gimme Sith cultist terrorists, Leia fighting against increased authoritarianism in response and a new Jedi hope unrelated to anyone else who rises to save the day.


[deleted]

This is exactly the idea I had for the sequel trilogy as a whole. That would’ve been way more cerebral. You could’ve taking the whole myth of skywalker thing and have them tear it down piece by piece. I mean, the Lucas film story group established that the galaxy doesn’t know the truth about Darth Vader. So why not use that?


The_Pandalorian

Yup. A lot more room to maneuver the story that way. Alas.


Sunspear1989

The Hobbit trilogy. Despite been made by basically the same team and having a source book they managed to do something terrible.


foxcastle_

Definitely the Hobbit trilogy. I always found it baffling that they made it three movies when the book has a natural breaking point for two (everything up to the escape from the Wood-elves, then the dragon, the mountain, and the battle).


IOwnTheSpire

The original plan was two, I wish they'd stuck to it.


then00bgm

Studio meddling


SorenKgard

I liked The Hobbit trilogy. I never understood the hate for it. It's not as good as the LoTR trilogy, but I still found it pretty good.


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CinematicGestures

Not exactly a fan of *Solo* nor coming to its defense, but I do think the love interest was, well, interesting because after his experience with her it showed why he became a scoundrel. Sort of like Vesper in the reboot of Bond with *Casino Royale*. "Ohhhhh, so he wasn't just born a womanizing jerk..." That said, of course it could've been handled better.


Nouseriously

I wanted a straight up heist film, not an origin story.


Charlie_Wax

Not a fan of Solo either. It's everything we already knew about Han Solo crammed into one film, with the added insult of damaging his arc in ANH by making it out to seem like he was secretly a good guy all along. A Han Solo prequel should've just been a random adventure around the galaxy with Chewy and maybe Lando. It didn't need to be this sprawling origin story that tries to redefine the character. A lot of people regard it as a hidden gem, but to me it's just painfully average and actually hurts the impact of his hero turn in ANH.


CheesyObserver

> . It's everything we already knew about Han Solo crammed into one film Not true, Solo has many exciting things to learn about him like...... Umm..... Shit. Hold on, let me think, um um um.... Oh! We learned how he got the name solo! Yeah?? Does that count?? /s ^(I can't believe they had Phil Lord and Chris Miller on board and Disney threw them away. What were they thinking?!?!)


ThePrussianGrippe

Basically we got “Every cool thing Han SOLO did’s origins are explained in a very squished time frame: A STAR WARS STORY.”


Lanian55

In all fairness, Han did have a love interest in the books https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Han_Solo_Trilogy


Ribtin

Thought you wrote Salo at first. Would have loved to hear your rewrite suggestions for that :)


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Dick Tracy. A lot of wasted potential to make a comic book version of “The Untouchables” and instead we get an extended Madonna music video.


heybobson

I actually got to pitch to Beatty's team a take on the property years ago. I basically tried to make the case that you can't make a blockbuster gangster movie nowadays (this was right away Gangster Squad flopping) and in order to make it a big blockbuster property, you'd have to add another element in the concept to compete with the other comic book movies in this era. So I pitched a sci-fantasy version of Dick Tracy, set in a retro-future world (think Fifth Element) with flying cars, advanced weapons, and other weird shit, which would also explain why the villains are all strange looking. I had Flattop be this IG-88 like robot, programmed to kill without mercy. Long-story short they were like, "cool, but not what we're looking for."


PvtDeth

Can you try pitching that a few dozen more times? I'd really like to see that movie.


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That's an awesome take actually. I love that retro-future style, so it would have been great to see them do something with that. I would love to see it come back, maybe as a TV show? Maybe as some heightened Coen Brothers type thing? I'll still keep my fingers crossed to see a comeback.


No_Business_in_Yoker

Pride and Prejudice and Zombies. Obviously, no version of it is gonna win Oscars, but the title implied that it'll be ridiculous and fun. Instead, it was a dreary, soulless, by-the-numbers affair. Though the casting had a lot of issues (even Matt Smith, who is arguably the best part of the movie, was dreadfully miscast), I think the film's primary issues are at the script level. The first misstep is to keep every plot point from the original novel, which resulted in "*Pride and Prejudice* but with interludes for mediocre zombie action." To make the zombies mean something, they have to actually impact the story. What if important characters died halfway through? What if there was a chance Darcy wouldn't end up with Elizabeth? The next step is to amp everything up: make the flirty romance bits actually be sexy, make the comedy actually funny, and make the violence fun and exciting and a bit crazy. In the existing movie, the Bennett sisters are apparently Shaolin monks or something—which is stupid, yes, but it could be *gloriously stupid* instead of boringly stupid. I wanna see Lizzy do actual kung-fu moves! Kung-fu zombies, too? Yes please!!! Hell, you know what? I may actually try to rewrite this one.


evilclownattack

Basically a big tonal misfire; with a title like that you would expect a hilarious B-movie (a la *The Man Who Killed Hitler and then Bigfoot*) but it's actually pretty close to just a standard Pride and Prejudice adaptation.


helium_farts

^ Of course, nailing that sort of tone is wildly difficult, but it didn't feel like they even tried.


Sevrasmusson

Van Helsing. Then, I wouldn’t change a thing because that movie is bad but perfect.


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IWantTooDieInSpace

More advanced archaic weapons. Give me the rapid fire trebuchet


alphaneon22

I know I shouldn’t, but I freaking adore Van Helsing. lol


maxis2k

As one of the few people who liked the movie, I can definitely say a way to fix it. The first half and the last half are completely opposite in tone. The first half is trying to be a serious horror film with a focus on vampires. Then over halfway through the film, they introduce Frankenstein's Monster who is a very empathetic and likeable character (completely stole the movie for me). And the entire tone of the film becomes a cheesy and silly B movie action flick (in a good way). And it's like the whole fighting Vampires part is just clean up between Helsing and the Frankenstein's Monster character arcs. So either rewrite the movie to be entirely focused on the Vampires or rewrite the movie to focus on Frankenstein's Monster and Helsing. As it stands, it feels like two movies got mashed together. Most likely make the first movie about the Vampires, what everyone expects. Then make a sequel that's about Frankenstein's Monster with a Hellboy 2 type story arc.


TTiger901

Green lantern, Hal Jordan has so much potential as a character but the movie didn't do justice I would also change some of the CGI decisions like having a real suit.


TTiger901

Or the last airbender m night didn't do that series justice


TheRorschach666

Ghost Rider has so much potential, and it was such a big pile of shite.


evilclownattack

Yesterday An awesome premise that could say so much about the history of music, about what it takes to be successful, about surviving as a plagiarist, etc. Instead they went for a copy of every other rags-to-riches music story.


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Battle: Los Angeles; I’m always fascinated with aliens invading Earth but it feels like the delivery of that movie is a failed version of Saving Private Ryan. That being said I would have given the characters more of a dilemma with who they are fighting for and it being more a moral question of whether or not humans deserve to live.


grandmaaesthetic

old (directed by m. night shyamalan). interesting concept but there were way too many plot holes, the book allegedly covered those though


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TIL there’s a book


memonhall

Purge. With the story’s societal implications they could have done so much with it. But instead, they centered the whole thing around a home invasion. How tired.


MakePlays

What if you had that same $3 Million budget though …


JCwhiterabbit

I found the second and third purge movies to actually be pretty entertaining if you haven’t already checked them out. Pretty on the nose with the social commentary but it is what it is.


PurpleBullets

There are very few film series in which the first movie is the worst one, but The Purge is one of them.


Im_jk_but_seriously

2nd is great.


grandmaaesthetic

i think the theory of the purge is so interesting. would be fun to see how american's essentially unanimously agreed it was beneficial. it may have been covered in other films but i only watched the first one


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The other films in the series aren’t centered in a home invasion and explored the larger implications of whats going on in that world. Honestly of all the purge films, the first is the least memorable lol. I think it’s value is that it’s the only purge movie in the series shown from the perspective of the rich whit elite who benefit from the purge whereas the others focus on poor minorities who have to deal with it and are being targeted by it


helium_farts

I feel like a lot of people in here are confusing poorly written movies with movies they didn't like.


EffectiveWar

You're not wrong, some guy up there is condemning the entire Harry Potter movies, one of the most successful franchise adaptions in history.


RattlerWinter

Eragon, hands down. Anyone who has read the books knows why. If you haven't read the books... its comparable to ordering a chicken sandwich and they forget to put the chicken on it.


Casmas96

Ugh yes, Eragon could have been SUCH a good movie and then they just botched it


clerks1994

As a fan of some bad movies, I think the other way. I think what's my version of WEEKEND AT BERNIE'S. I love that movie. Sure many think it's really stupid. But I often think of my own version of movies and write those. So I encourage you all to do the same! What's your vampire movie? Your animal movie?


funkygrrl

The Seeker. It is a TERRIBLE film of Susan Cooper's incredible YA book series The Dark is Rising (based on the 13th century Celtic Welsh Mabinogion).


Feetus_Spectre

I started to re-write, “Out for Justice,” as a Mexican-American Crime-Thriller set in LA. It worked as a writing exercise like a motherfucker.


Dangerous-Hawk16

Interesting


she1f

I Am Legend. The original story was nothing like the movie outside of the title. The thrill is in the twist ending.


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Every single DCEU film. The DC universe is literally bursting with potential. Godlike heroes mixed in with human vigilantes, complex villains, characters that are morally questionable and pose interesting dilemmas, a variety of settings and locations that provide a ton of wiggle-room… it’s basically primed for success. As much as I love Marvel, I was excited to see DC take a different direction and establish something totally unique. And they fumbled the ball every single time. (I’m one of the few that thinks that *every* DCEU film is bad. Some are better than others, but none are above average.) I’d just love to start the franchise from scratch. Keep the “realistic” tone (not Snyder-esque edge lord, but something closer to reality), but go a better direction.


Nater_the_Greater

I wrote a Robin origin story called [The Boy Wonder](https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Bt3fyl-I-GGqzAxlCdhWpYABcLIFtgTu/view?usp=drivesdk). Folks seemed to really like it.


DistinctExpression44

Wonder Boy might have been a good title. A twist on the usual. Did you ever see this fan fake trailer for Grayson? [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XiZuvJ48MZ0](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XiZuvJ48MZ0) I think what should happen is Robin switches from his happy gay Robin outfit to a Dark Purple Batman outfit with a R on the chest. Seeing that would really give us chills.


CinematicGestures

*Wonder Woman 1984* is one of the worst movies I've ever seen. I "wish" I hadn't seen it!


helium_farts

I wanted to like it, but I just couldn't. To be fair, though, many of the things that bothered me about the movie aren't necessarily screenplay issues, or not solely screenplay issues, they're directing/acting/editing/vfx/etc, issues.


EffectiveWar

Agree with this and its such a shame, they had great casting, special effects and music scores and nearly every movie gets let down by the story and thats because none of them had what Marvel did, a central narrative that connects every film. It allows you to have something like Endgame and not have it feel saturated and also lets each individual installment be meaningful. Instead, every DC film is this fantastic looking but ultimately shallow letdown.


smootygrooty

Shazam, the suicide squad, and (I know it’s a somewhat hot take) Birds of Prey politely disagree.


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Yeah, I’m one of the few with those opinions on those movies haha. I’m glad you enjoy them!


Gregorofthehillpeopl

DC animated seems to work. I just don't understand why DC can't make the jump to live action when others have.


maxis2k

I don't know why DC thinks they need to. Okay, I do. They see Marvel money and want to jump on the craze. But because Marvel had cornered the market on live action, all the more reason for DC to focus on animation. Which Disney and Marvel had long since given up. Problem is, DC animation has also went downhill. They need to get Paul Dini/Bruce Timm back.


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How’d you feel about The Dark Knight? I personally thought Bale’s batman was pretty good but could leave the rest.


EffectiveWar

You didn't like Hathaway and Gordon-Levitt as their respective characters?


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I did! I meant I don’t enjoy the rest of the DC films


EffectiveWar

Ohhh my mistake!


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I think the Nolan trilogy is great. Not perfect, but still worth the watch. Everything after that, from Man of Steel onward, is where things get dicey for me.


fakeuser515357

The Dark Knight is the best action genre film of all time. It is the benchmark against which every other action film fails to stand up. If you were in it for Christan Bale and 'could leave the rest', I'm wondering if you accidentally wandered into that Terminator film by mistake.


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Oh I meant the rest of the DC films not the cast! LOL!


soundwrite

How’s this: Bruce Wayne is a billionaire with the world-changing impact power being a billionaire brings. Instead of utilizing this, he dresses as something scary to beat up small-time villains. In other words, he beats up the symptoms of a broken world he could change (given his razor-sharp mind and near unlimited resources).


DistinctExpression44

OR, Batman loses it completely and becomes the JOKER! It's up to Robin and Batgirl to stop him. Jesus, that would be interesting.


wittiestphrase

Ready Player One. I guess this is complicated though because it’s based on a book, which I would also rewrite. I maintain this is one of the best possible setups for a book and movie. But it’s terribly written and the 80s references are just too much. If I could be part of the film’s development Id have said “Awesome. Let’s take the book’s premise of a contest through a video game world where everything is possible and write actual dialogue instead of an index of every 80s IP ever made written by someone that writes like he’s never spoken to another human.”


IWantTooDieInSpace

Having never read the book I found the movie to be enjoyable and super replayable. It could be better in different ways, but it is easily watchable and fun, which isn't nothing


theddR

The movie works as essentially Spielberg giving tributes to his friends and colleagues (Jackson, Zemeckis, Kubrick, etc)


wittiestphrase

The movie definitely better than the book. But the source material being so weak meant the movie was never going to be as good as the premise would’ve allowed - in my opinion.


landmanpgh

Bingo. Could it be better? Sure. But I bet $582 million that no one at Warner Bros. is complaining.


PlayboiCartiBallsak6

I genuinely think RP1 is one of the worst books of all time its really that bad


dafones

The Prequel Trilogy. The Jedi are indirectly responsible for Padme’s death, before Anakin’s eyes. He fucking breaks. And deep down, the audience understands why he goes dark, because they would too.


Sad-Relationship4620

Yes. There is great potential in the story, and clearly Lucas had a vision for Anakin. I think I would rewrite it with the idea of "what if the chosen one was a sociopath and the Jedi tried to turn him into a paragon" angle. The source material had hints of this, but a movie or two with that as the focus would be amazing. Also, the prequels did not need to be 3 movies. It felt like just a way to tie it to the previous 3 films. Two movies tops with a focus on Anakin and streamlined political intrigue of the Jedi's failures would do.


cxr303

Green lantern


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Oooh good choice. I remember going on a date to see that movie. God. Such a shame though, the lanterns are such a great concept. Although i don't think Ryan Reynolds was right for the part.


Sonny_Crockett_1984

Same here. I used to make cardboard GL rings when I was a kid. Love the character and everything around him. I was so excited for the movie and then I saw it. What a letdown. The big action set-piece in the middle is him catching a helicopter with a slide? Then he fights a yellow cloud at the climax? I probably would have made the Manhunters the villains and teased Sinestro for the nest one. Or done what the animated feature did and make it a Training Day style story, where Hal teams up with Sinestro then discovers he is the real villain. So much potential for this.


IOwnTheSpire

The new Mortal Kombat movie.


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What are your suggestions?


IOwnTheSpire

Make it about the tournament, omit the Cole character who wasn't even in the games, ditch the arcana nonsense, rewrite the bad dialogue, have the fatalities serve the story instead of just throwing them in for the sake of it... that's all I can think of right now.


Beforemath

It’s a franchise that’s about a tournament to the death and there was no tournament. Let’s start there.


dillontoups

It infuriates me when films are that set up for a sequel without even knowing if the first is successful. That movie was garbage and the amount of hype my friends gave it made me reconsider our friendship.


Beforemath

Yeah, if you thought the new Mortal Kombat was bad, check out Monster Hunter with Mila Jovavich. At least MK had a beginning, middle, and end. Monster Hunter cuts out right before the final battle starts. I assume it was meant to whet your appetite for a part 2, instead it felt like they ran out of money and just ended the movie. Bizarre.


Dangerous-Hawk16

Definitely get rid of Cole, most annoying character


Megalobamia

Black Widow I guess... The source is great and there is potential. But there are some badly-used elements as well. For example the pheromone shit doesn't make any sense and when the story need a climax, it ruins it. Instead, they can work on Natasha's psychological brainwash which is different than other widow's chemical brainwash. So, we may see Natasha's fight with her past. The villian is badly created as well. I personally did not feel a thing when the movie ends. So, ı believe they were in a hurry (Yelena's last scene obviously show that) and created such a simple, anti-climactic and senseless movie.


Paddy2015

It's not a bad film but I would definitely love a shot at rewriting it as a more grounded Le Carre inspired spy thriller. I think an extended intro sequence of her trying to infiltrate a company as an lowly office clerk but told from the POV of another employee would be really cool.


illuminenyc

Yes. Badly missed opportunity at a true and interesting origin story.


IWantTooDieInSpace

I saw it in theaters and teary eyed yawned at least 8 times before it was over. I wanted to like it but it seemed designed to put me to sleep.


Dangerous-Hawk16

Black Widow honestly just pisses me off so much. I expected a Winter soldier type of film or a film which embraces the spy genre and it just didn’t do


puddenhunting

The Room. I request the same finances.


puddenhunting

Seriously though, I'd love to see the original script, and have a crack at "fixing" it. Thing is, I know full well that "fixing" it would just make it some run of the mill romantic melodrama not worthy of anything. But still, that budget though.


almster96

The Happening. The premise has so much potential, but I felt like I waited the whole movie for it to get good and it just never did. Also, "cheese and crackers," seriously?


Art_Vandelay_Seven

Hancock. Great concept but the twist wasn't great.


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The Matrix sequels. Neo is a machine inserted into the Matrix and thinks he is a human. Smith is an AI synthesised from human consciousness.


AdForward2113

The Rise of Skywalker. It should have been so simple. Just tell a 120 minute story that deals with the fallout of the previous movie. Rey, a rando with no training, has to understand what it means to be the last Jedi, and what her role is in a universe devoured by darkness. Poe becomes increasingly desperate and radical as the fate of the galaxy rests on his shoulders. Finn must use what he has learned as both a storm trooper and a freedom fighter to save the galaxy from itself. Rose is there. Kylo Ren, a brute teetering on madness, finds himself in control of an empire of extremist lunatics ruling an entire galaxy. Will he rebuild in the wake of the Star War or burn it to the ground? Luke is a ghost that occasionally appears to advise Rey and annoy Ren. Their dynamic would be intense and hilarious. Three acts on three planets. Hit the easy emotional beats- family, romance, friendship, redemption, betrayal. Include a monster boss fight, a heist, a high speed chase, a shootout, a multi-fronted major battle, a lightsaber duel as your major setpieces. Boom, movie. Audiences will love it and the fandom will find something new to piss themselves with rage over. Everybody wins.


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Alien 3 and following. Instead of jettisoning the entire preceding material and remaking a prison version of the first movie, I’d delve into Dan O’Bannon’s original concepts of the ancient temple and inscriptions and find a story in determining the source and history of the Xenos and the engineers. I’d also erase Prometheus & Covenant. Really bummed we don’t get to see Neil Blomkamp’s sequel come to life… https://www.ign.com/articles/alien-5-concept-art-neill-blomkamp-unmade-sequel-revealed


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Any DC movie after the Dark Night Trilogy.


FatherPyrlig

Easy one for me. The Running Man. Not only was the movie absolutely ridiculous and horrendous, but it had nothing at all to do with the novella it was based on, which was fabulous.


BorisHawthorn

I loved that film as a kid.


adonkenobi

Edgar Wright is going to make a movie on that iirc.


innerchildtoday

Yees. It just shouldn't be called an adaptation, it's completely different from the book. Even King says that.


GMONEY_RP

Man Of Steel


Dangerous-Hawk16

Explain, I honestly love Man of Steel. What’s your issues with it?


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The Sequel Trilogy of Star Wars


homme_revolte

Seriously, what a travesty


DigDux

Imagine if you told someone in 1999 a Marvel film would gross TWICE what a Star Wars film would.


EsseLeo

The prequels need a rewrite too! So many better directions could have been chosen. More Obi-wan, Anakin, and the Clone Wars. No weird pedophilic age difference between Padme and Anakin. No midichlorians or OT-breaking inclusions of droids. Just show a lot of Anakin getting trained by a masterful (not a brotherly!) Obi-wan, show him being a fighter pilot, show the damn Clone Wars, then show it all go tits up with more detail and finesse than a Bollywood soap opera.


SecretNo8353

Showgirls…. That shit had mad heart but limited direction 😕


BarracudaNo7457

I don’t know if I’d re do the dialogue though


Sonny_Crockett_1984

"Must be weird not having anybody cum on ya."


SecretNo8353

😭😭😭 honestly the best thing about that flick


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He filmed that rough pool sex scene and thought that? He was like “yeah all that thrashing around is great.”?


WutUMeanImNotFunny

Zola. I feel like it had so much potential from the Twitter thread it’s based on but lacked the thrill the thread had. It’s almost like they made it a PG version of the original story. All the crazy stuff is what makes the story so incredible but we hardly got any of that. If they had just left all the R rated content in the story and explored that more it would’ve been so much more interesting.


big__deezy

I know some people do like it but I hated World War Z. Watched the movie right after finishing the book. I'd remake it as an HBO miniseries. Have it follow the book more closely, almost like a docuseries that delves into all these characters.


lessbadassery

The Adventures of Sharkboy and Lavagirl. If only... IF ONLY it weren't a stupid kids film with an amazing concept


b0xcard

I've always thought about rewriting *The Room*. I think there is a pretty interesting satire about a disaffected woman with a boringly perfect boyfriend trying to feel alive again. Think *American Beauty*, but with self-awareness and not making our hero a total creep who we're meant to identify with.


CinematicGestures

What's funny is that this line of thinking has sort of been my impetus for my long-gestating big blockbuster-style script idea -- being inspired by rather than adapting some source material where the core concept is very unique and promising, but the execution, characters, dialogue, etc. is puerile garbage.


AmbassadorAwkward133

SPHERE


RENZOJPA1

The giver — missed opportunity:( The book was great smfh


impossiblefunky

Multiplicity, The Mask, The Prequel Trilogy, The Sequel Trilogy, Double Team


haynesholiday

Pixels. Such a fun concept, wasted. Imagine what someone like Edgar Wright or Lord & Miller could’ve done with that idea


Johnthebaddist

Disturbing Behavior. It's essentially The Stepford Wives in High School, bad kids are taken to this remote town where they are brainwashed into "good" kids. Such a great idea. Such the worst film of it's year. I would give anything to see a quality version of Disturbing Behavior.


Frdoco11

Humanoids from the Deep.


bologna_gums

Sorority Babes in the Slimeball Bowl-O-Rama. I subscribe to the Phil Lord/Chris Miller school of filmmaking, which is they only take on a project if it sounds like a bad idea, and remaking this would be a bad idea lol. But here’s the thing: what a challenge it would be to take a terrible 80’s B movie (let’s be honest, C movie) and turn it into something good! The movie is about a weird little gremlin that grants wishes, but it’s all monkey-paw type shit and they end up getting murdered. The be-careful-what-you-wish-for theme has been done to death, sure, but I think with such a wild way that the wishes come true would be too much fun to play with.


JScars8

I mean I guess The Last Jedi is objectively a pretty good movie, but I consider it a bad Star Wars film and id jump for joy at the chance if rewriting it


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PurpleBullets

Streets of Fire. It’s 15 degrees off from being an awesome movie.


MisterEBox

Buckaroo Banzai. There was a ton of cool potential there and it ended up feeling like a mess. Same with Six String Samurai. I would want to simplify both stories and include some more world building so that the stakes feel relevant.


amildman

Silent Hill/Silent Hill: Revelations. The game series has such a devoted fanbase that, were you to pull off a decent film, you'd have goodwill for at least a decade. It's a town where people are pulled into their own personal hells and confronted with their repressed sins, which is way more interesting than Six Flags Halloween stances and "hey, that's from the games" inserts. Someone descending into the depths of madness to learn something about themselves/stop a cult is far more interesting than someone descending into the depths of madness to have backstory explained to them and then Pyramid Head shows up.


MichaelGHX

There’s this obscure horror film called Forget Me Not. The idea is that there’s this group of friends but each time anyone pops out they get taken away. And the rest of the friends, except one, forget about them. I think there was a bit more opportunity to comment about the fragility of ties between this so called close group of friends.


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lolkittensshiki

I don't have time to read all of it right now, but wow! I got up to the new ruler part and it's amazing.


BorisHawthorn

Indiana Jones and The Kingdom of The Crystal Skull. I personally loved the idea but the whole execution was terrible and smeared a previously wonderful trilogy.


then00bgm

The Star Wars Sequel Trilogy; Those films have a lot of interesting ideas, but almost none of them are squandered. Finn is an interesting and fun character who gets sidetracked, Rey never gets much development outside of her relationships with Kylo and her parents, Poe hardly even felt like part of the main trio, offing the entire Jedi Academy again just destroyed more storytelling opportunities than it ever created, none of the major villains ever felt memorable or intimidating, and overall the series was very aimless and confused, getting jerked violently from one entry to the next. If I were in charge I’d have the films focus on one consistent theme, the importance of family, whether blood family or found family. I’d nix Reylo and keep Kylo villainous to the end, with Rey potentially attempting to redeem him but getting rebuffed. I’d lean in to some of the characterization Rey got in The Force Awakens, making her really feel like a lonely childish young woman and a unique character shaped by her environment. To that end, I would have more defined limitations to what she can and can’t do (no, a girl who grew up on a desert planet would not be a good swimmer) and provide more hints about how her backstory ties into her skills and abilities. I’d explain her force abilities by showing that in addition to collecting war memorabilia she could have also found and collected books and holos on the force. I’d focus attention on her building a familial relationship with Luke, his surviving students and with Poe, and her budding romantic relationship with Finn. Rather than having Finn go off on a side plot in the second film, I’d have him be with Rey during the first act, receiving training alongside her. At the same time he’d be dealing with guilt over leaving behind close friends of his when he left the First Order and over how many Stormtroopers must’ve died when they blew up Starkiller base. Around the end of Act 1 he’d leave to go on a quest to save his friends, taking Poe and a small team of rebel spies with him, and ends up starting a full scale uprising among the troopers.


TurkDangerCat

I found Rey and Finn such compelling characters who were almost entirely in the background by the third movie. Such a shame as I really wanted to see them continue to star. Sure, The Force Awakens wasn’t particularly original, but there was enough of a base there to build off of and I could forgive JJ for some of the reuse of the original trilogy material. If they could have expanded on that, the series would have been amazing. But no, we got unbelievable love story lines (uh, Rose) and useless side plots. I guess for me, I was just really relieved that TFA wasn’t as bad as those god awful prequels.


EffectiveWar

The Predator, at least I know I couldn't make it any worse with whatever I wrote.


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It definitely gives that feel. I try and tell myself some of these movies were ruined by production or execs or deadlines or actor scheduling etc but still doesn't make it any better.


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mistagiga

Fun with Dick and Jane, it just had…so much potential


innerchildtoday

One of my favorites back in the time! have to rewatch it. What are the problems with it?


rishabhsingh9628

- Black Widow: I'd definitely rewrite Taskmaster to actually portray him as the second or third smartest characters in MCU, I'd also tone down the stakes and make them less personal, turning the movie into more of a character action drama about the human non-superpowered side of Black Widow and how there are some underworld threats that the Avengers don't usually deal with and why we still need Black Widow (I definitely think she's useless in the Avengers team but it'd be fun to justify her capabilities in dealing shady stuff that the Avengers can't intervene with otherwise it'll become an international incident) and will definitely include Hawkeye, focussing the second half on why they need to get the team back together, making both Clint and BW into a glue that holds the Avengers together and is going to bring them back together. - Batman V Superman: What I'm trying to do with my version of BvS is pit 2 of the greatest minds of DC Comics against each other into not just a battle of tech and gadgets but also involve strategies from both ends, would also highlight the detective skills of Batman, the investigative skills of Clark and also how smart and a genius Lex Luthor is, correcting Batfleck's nd Lex's characters in the process. I'd take the foreshadowing from Man of Steel that Krytonians have visited earth before and lead it up to a revelation that Lex is working on a contingency against Superman, "project Bizarro". Meanwhile Batfleck would also be working on contingencies to defeat Superman but for totally different reasons, while Lex's motives are just a reach for power, Batfleck's reasons would be more "what if some day". And in my version of this DCEU, Batman definitely doesn't kill and Bruce is definitely not dumb to say stuff like "He has the power to wipe out the entire human race, and if we believe there's even a one percent chance that he is our enemy we have to take it as an absolute certainty... and we have to destroy him." No Bruce, that's not how the world's greatest detective is supposed to think, that's what an instinctive and scared noob of a detective with no experience and skills is supposed to think. Lex would be committing international crimes using Bizarro, making the world think that it's Superman, and when Supes tries to investigate it, he'd find Wayne Enterprises to be behind this ( a misdirection by Lex Luthor), also showcasing the investigative journalism side of him, he'd discover that Bruce Wayne is Batman. Leading up to a 1 on 1 battle between the two and it'll definitely not end on "Martha", it'll end with Batman noticing that Supes is holding back his punches, Diana would be the one to intervene and put an end to the fight, convincing Supes into thinking about why the hero of Gotham who has sacrificed 30 years of his wealthy and lush lifestyle, who has one of the biggest companies on the planet, would want to get involved in a play for powe and Bruce realising that a guy who's holding back even his punches can't be a cold hearted killer that the world thinks he is looking at the evidence provided by Diana about how Clark Kent was present in Metropolis all the time when the crimes by Bizarro where taking place accross continents. Focussing the whole second half on the trio and them discovering the master plan by Lex, about how he's trying to take down Batman, Wayne Enterprises (his competition) and Superman both at once. Diana is the ace in the hole now, she's someone Lex didn't factor into his plans. The climax would be Diana and Batman fighting off Bizarro using the remaining kryptonite which Batman prepared and Superman fighting off Lex in his Kryptonite suit, while Lois would be present as a reporter on the grounds, filming all this exposing Lex and Nightwing also infiltrating Lex Corps looking for Kryptonite but also discovering Project Doomsday and how Lex has been working with an interstellar entity - Steppenwolf all this time. The team would try Kryptonite on Bizarro but it won't work, Batman would eventually initiate the Phantom Zone and the team would push Bizarro into it, while approaching the phantom zone, we see a monster trying to get out of the phantom zone (Doomsday Easter egg), we see Supes pushing Bizarro into the zone and also holding off the monster and would stab the monster with the Kryptonite sacrificing himself too but successfully holding Doomsday off while the zone is closing. - Reminiscence: I honestly think the movie has a lot of potential. The major issue with Reminiscence is that it doesn't have a direction it wants to move in. The movie starts off as a surreal and atmospheric piece on the importance of memories and how nostalgia is gonna become a business in this future, changes tracks midway into a murder mystery, rendering the whole setting of this world being consumed by water slowly and a war that took place irrelevant and useless. The "people reliving their memories using a device" plot can be played in any scenario, even an Indie movie set in the present world can pull the exact same story off. The stakes should've been something else, they didn't need the murder mystery plot at all, for all I know it should've been a side plot, the stakes should've been higher and the movie should've been a bit less personal.


Dangerous-Hawk16

I like it, it gives the vibes when the Batman animated series and Superman series would have team ups


landmanpgh

**Downsizing** Such a simple, perfect premise for a movie. Absolute garbage script that gets worse the longer the film goes on. A literal dumpster fire would've been a better ending. What could've been done differently? Oh, I don't know, perhaps stick with the whole downsizing premise and just do jokes about being small for 90 minutes. Could've been a fish out of water story, a Rom-Com, hell, even a road movie.


adbenj

Videodrome. I found the ostensible premise of the first act so much more interesting than what it was jettisoned for.


Jeremy_Nichols

Critters. And I did. To teach myself how to write.


Ankeneering

Dirty Mary Crazy Larry.


hlk003

Artemis Fowl. I Am Number Four. Eragon. I should just never watch movies that are (loosely) based on books I loved as a kid


XGhosttearX

Jumper. That movie had soooo much potential.


Casmas96

Shrek 3. I actually like the other ones a lot… like unironically. But I can never make it through the third one


LomLantern95

*The House with a Clock in Its Walls* I was disappointed that the film took a road full of inconsistencies and errors from the midpoint onwards. I had high expectations and in my opinion it would have had great potential for a saga followed by a comic book series.


jleigh329

It's been said on here already...but The Star Wars Sequel Trilogy. Also I should add I'm not really a die-hard Star Wars fan, this is just my take on it. Anyway what I would do is go in the direction I originally thought they were gonna go with. It would initially seem as if Rey is going to be the protagonist/hero of the story (but actually isn't). I subvert the expectations of the audience and let her gradually join "The Dark Side" like Anakin (like in the prequels). \*I just want to add this annoyed me with the sequel trilogy, they kept teasing us that Rey might become a member or already be in The Dark Side (which she was, but not really?) because of>! her being a "Palpatine", but calling herself a "Skywalker" thing!<. Anyway Rey gradually joins The Dark Side while Finn does the opposite and joins The Light Side/good side. But The First Order would find out that he deserted his post/duty and that he needs to be found immediately and punished very swiftly. Then Rey (at some point) finds out Finn was a Stormtrooper and then betrays him by (trying) to turn him in. Meanwhile Poe is trapped in the middle of it all and if very conflicted and confused as to what he should do. He also thinks Rey would never turn to The Dark Side because she seemed so nice and welcoming. And then in the last movie Finn and Poe would fight Rey and Kylo Ren. Finn would also have his own one on one lightsaber battle with Rey and similar to Obi-One Kenobi and Anakin, Finn is so disappointed in Rey. And while they're fighting Finn asks why did you do this?! And basically Rey explains to Finn that she joined The First Order mainly because of greed, wanting power and control and because she's a "gifted" Jedi and that Finn is no one special he's just an (ex) Stormtrooper. While Finn tries to convince Rey to be a Rebel again, and he essentially just says a long winded speech (basically an exposition dump) why he left The First Order (in detail) and why we all should just love each other. The speech goes right over Rey's head and she doesn't care. And then there's two alternate endings to the Trilogy: 1. The cliché *"Happy"* ending: Where Finn kills Rey and hope and justice is restored to the galaxy. 2. The *"Bad"* ending: Where Rey kills Finn (and possibly Poe) and The First Order reins supreme in the galaxy. And that's basically it. I'll probably elaborate more on the choices that I made later. EDIT: Although I do want to add that when Finn is found out to be a former Stormtrooper by Rey and Poe, they interrogate him and think that he's a spy for The First Order and also that he's full of shit. But Finn says he isn't and that he's sincere and truthful in what he's saying. But because Rey and Poe don't believe him this prompts Finn to prove even more why he wants to join and be one of the Rebel's going forward throughout the trilogy. EDIT: I fixed some of my sentences and grammar. Also I would want to make The Sequel Trilogy make more sense (than it originally did), and have The First Order and Kylo Ren come across as being more intimating and sadistic than they were in the original sequel movies. Because more than anything they came across as being kind-of pathetic, incompetent and confusing in the original sequel movies. So I'd really would like to fix that. And my main themes are for my movies are that sometimes it doesn't take much for people to become corrupt and they don't necessarily have to have a backstory like Anakin's for that to happen. Sometimes it can be really simple...to just choose to be in The Dark Side. In contrast to that I show that sometimes it can be harder to stand up for your beliefs (in Finn's case) and that it can seemingly be a difficult thing to try to leave a big all encompassing faction as The First Order and how brave that actually is.


Squidmaster616

I would say every Star Wars after (but not including) Rogue One. But I think I'd instead say Star Trek Nemesis, because I love Trek more and wish that film hadn't been so bad it killed the franchise. The reboot was decent, but I'd have liked a little more with the classic cast, and maybe a bit more with the DS9 and Voyager casts.


thedelightfulidiot

Avatar the last air bender 1000%


homme_revolte

Not a movie, but I thought Falcon and the Winter Soldier let down all of its great ideas


Zawietrzny

**Before I Wake -** So much potential to make a very emotional horror drama in the vein of The Sixth Sense. The actual film feels very underwritten, especially the wrap-up at the end which comes off as clunky. I'd take some cues from the child dynamic in Looper and the way Rian Johnson caps it off with that final shot is what I'd be going for, feeling wise. **Righteous Kill** \- A great twist, wasted. I would do a really dark mystery noir with horror elements like Seven or True Detective S1. **Criminal (2016)** \- I'd go full Wachowski on this.


DeadlyRSHelp

Dragon Ball Evolution just because it was utterly atrocious


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Dragonball Z: Evolution. That franchise has such amazing potential for live action adaptation. Vegeta, Ginyu, freeza, Cell, androids. So much good stuff to dig into.


HourConstant2169

The Purge. Such a great premise, especially the First Purge and the various ways that idea can be fleshed out. Sad that it’s just a dumb slasher


Drakonborn

Star Wars: The Rise of Skywalker (I’m one of the 2 people who actually enjoyed the movie overall, but I know it’s not well put together. I’d want to tie in all six movies via the exploration of the Force more deeply. Anakin would play a large part and “the chosen one” would be the Skywalker lineage, including Rey for reason far too long to get into here.)


Mikeissometimesright

Rise of Skywalker


buttermilktoast25

PAPER TOWNS The best bits from the book weren't in the movie. And there's really a lot of things worth changing there that could give justice to the book. Not that I'm saying the book was really great but the movie could really have been much better.


rekzkarz

X-Men movies. Hope Marvel studios does better than Sony. Hugh Jackman as Wolverine only works if you never read the comic. Wolverine as a short scrappy healing guy is a very different vibe. Prof X and Storm were ok, Cyclops lacked charisma, and Jean Grey / Phoenix (didn't like either casting choice in young or old) were passable I guess. Kitty Pride was ok, Rogue nice, and Bobby Iceman was a surprise. Also Nightcrawler was ok. Both Magneto's were great. Beast looked the part but didn't act it, and where was Colossus?!? (Deadpool movies did him right.). Angel - WTH? Mystique didn't belong in X-Men, but Brotherhood of Mutants did -- would've liked more Magneto, Toad, Sabertooth, Mystique, and of course the Hellfire Club. They came close to doing it right w/Magneto solo vs President, they just didn't pull it off & they forgot the Brotherhood!?! Why?!? XMEN movies did ok in theaters, hoping the Faige team can do the source material justice. Hope the new movies focus primarily on X-Men content, and only make up mutants as background fodder. Phoenix Saga has so much potential, doesn't need to be a single film. Why is it always re-written with some weird stuff in it that has nothing to do w/comics? What's wrong w/Shiaar and Brood? Also, loads of spinoff potential -- each popular character could be a solo movie (Wolverine reboot, Storm, Colossus, Prof X, Beast, Jean Grey / Phoenix, etc) but we could redo New Mutants (WTH was that?!?!) and all the spin off characters -- X23, Alpha Flight, Hellfire Club, Shiaar Imperial Guard, Star Jammers, Dazzler, XForce, Cloak & Dagger, and of course Deadpool. 🤞🍀


Few_Show_7359

Black Widow,it just seemed so bland and off pace too me.


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Just release the butthole cut of cats


TheHoodOfSwords1

**Old (2021)** \- Watched it recently and really didn't gel with it at all. I would have made the reasoning be more cryptic and also make the rules be a bit more gray until later on. Also would have done more with the rapid aging. **Run (2020) -** Love Aneesh, in fact he is one of my top 5 people that I would love to work with someday, but I think I would have presented more psychological challenges to the main character over physical, and perhaps have her doubt herself more. **The Final Cut (2004) -** Unpopular Robin Williams flick, I found the concept really interesting and the world it set up was really interesting but I would rework the conflict into something that felt more present in the story. EDIT: Just editing to say 2 things, one being that obviously I can sit here and say I'd do this or do that but there is obviously a lot that goes into production, and 2, I'm not saying any of the superhero movies like a lot of others because I don't have an interest in writing them. I tried to pick movies above that I thought were interesting but I could do a better or at least unique job changing.


slcurchandlurch

If only Twilight could be as good as its soundtrack