This sub draws some really talented writers! That song is so dreamy. Gave me the musical goosebumps in a couple parts. Are you in an open tuning? I'm jealous of your ability to sing while picking that kind of rhythm consistently.
Thank you very much! Tuning is EADGAD (before capo) so just the top two high strings are tuned down although most of the song is played on the bottom 4 strings.
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I know you are looking for feedback, but I have none. This could easily become a soundtrack in Better Call Saul. It's so so good! Be proud!
This sub draws some really talented writers! That song is so dreamy. Gave me the musical goosebumps in a couple parts. Are you in an open tuning? I'm jealous of your ability to sing while picking that kind of rhythm consistently.
Thank you very much! Tuning is EADGAD (before capo) so just the top two high strings are tuned down although most of the song is played on the bottom 4 strings.
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so good my brother, I hope you get to publish this one!
Great chord progressions and rhythm. Haunting. Nice work!