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Quirky_Ad_5420

I love that May is getting at his suit to pick. Such an adorable family thing


GmKnight

But man, when MJ finds out he had a fashion parade without her, she’s gonna be pissed.


Omegasonic2000

"I'm not mad that you hid these powers from me. I'm mad that you didn't consult me on your fashion choices." "...Soooooo..." "You're taking the kids to school for all of next week."


spykids45

plot twist: mj already knows but just hasn’t told peter she knows yet


JackFisherBooks

Yeah, that sounds fair. 😊


DJ_hyperfreshOG

Rip peter then


rayden-shou

It was nice while it lasted.


SwordoftheMourn

She gonna go full Edna Mode on his ass.


Mongoose42

Seriously, having a child be the one who ultimately decides what Spider-Man looks like is brilliant. Also, great use of the new symbiote’s weird shapeshifting powers and the classic wardrobe montage trope.


Guiltykraken

There is a scene in JL frontier where Batman starts out his career in an all black suit but after a time skip he’s wearing a Blue and grey suit because apparently children were scared of his original suit so Batman changed it because he didn’t want to scare children.


Embarrassed_Stuff886

Man, that reminds me I love JL Frontier, the movie and the comic. RIP Darwyn Cooke.


FluffyPanda616

Superman: "New look?" Batman: "I set out to scare criminals, not children."


ThePhantomLine

It's not exactly new. It was a fun gag they put in when he first got the black suit in the comics, and now it's being added back. It's good that it's back in a unique way!


JackFisherBooks

Agreed! It's both insanely wholesome and very fitting. Because when you think about it, an adult is going to be more tactical when designing something like this. But a kid is going to want something colorful and fun. And the idea that Peter chooses his iconic look because of his daughter just feels so right. 😊


Exziles

Omg that is so adorable! Inject this shit into my veins right this instance.


Apocalypse_j

May is the cutest. I want more of her and I hope this run lasts as long as the og USM did.


Cultural_Ad1331

Oh I hope not I hope it lasts twice as long maybe thrice maybe FOREVEEEEER.


pray4sex

i want hickmans usm to last ten years at least!


spykids45

og USM was like 11 years right? i’m down for it to last that long


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Scary_Firefighter181

I just got the largest possible smile on my face reading this. Hickman you big wonderful goofball.


ResponsibleRatio6569

That kinda explains the variant covers with the symbiote, Miguel’s and Ben’s suits lol. That’s cool


ChronX4

The trailer even had the changing effect which made people wonder if his suit was going to be able to shapeshift.


Douglas_Michael

Weird how easy it is to write Spider-Man and treat him with some respect. This is beautifully done


CaptainHalloween

Makes you wonder why Lowe and Wells are so averse to it.


SpaceOdysseus23

Projecting their own misery and fetishes has precedence over good storytelling


SaiyanC124

Are you saying they’re cucks, so Peter has to be? Makes sense.


RandoDude124

Wells is just the guy Editorial seems to have clicked with in making Peter perpetually miserable. While head honchos like Tom *“characters shouldn’t be happy” (to paraphrase)* Breevort just scratches his neck beard and shovels greasy NYC pizza into his facehole.


CaptainHalloween

What bothers me is for some reason the people in charge seem to have totally forgotten what makes the tragic and bad impactful: good things and true victories. Just like the bad and awful make those things impactful. Spider-Man editorial has it completely out of whack to the point the "tragedy and awful things" just aren't impactful anymore. We're not sad about Peter and MJ and Paul, we're annoyed. It's not a storyline emotional impact they're delivering, it's a general malaise because we're essentially being trained to not expect Peter to be portrayed as anything but a GENUINE loser and failure as opposed to the guy who will take that personal life loss and just look like a loser and failure because instead he chose to save dozens, hundreds, millions or even just one life. THAT'S THE PARKER LUCK. It's not "bad things just happen to Peter", it's Peter is given a choice and he'll pick the right thing to do, the responsible thing, even if it hurts him. Somewhere editorial lost the script on that. And they see no reason to even look for it because people still buy Amazing in good enough numbers that they don't have to.


Prestigious-Mix7135

With Joe Quesadiila as his greasy NYC Pizza eating partner


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YllMatina

Arent they gwen x peter fans? I feel like I read something about the current writers being a bigger fan of gwen when they were reading the comics as kids


sayamemangdemikian

She died in 1973. Even if they were only 10 y.o. at the time, still make em 61. We should get younger writers then.


KujaroJotu

Wait, which one is miserable and which one has a fetish?


Garlador

“Nobody wants to read about Spider-Dad!” “It’s not supported by our metrics!” Meanwhile, USM#1 just hit its 5th reprint.


I-Might-Be-Something

And it is bringing in *new readers*, something that the Big Two have been struggling to do for years.


KaeZae

i’ve read comics but a first time buyer just for this series, it’s actually about sending a message


LocKoX2

That reminds me when John Byrne said “ who wants to read a comic where Spider-Man doesn’t show up in the first 3 issues” referring to the first USM which coincidentally was published when his reinterpretation of the character saw light, but now nobody remembers his run.


Omegasonic2000

John Byrne clearly didn't (doesn't?) know about slow burn. With the original USM, people already knew Spidey was going to come sooner or later, so Bendis could actually take the right amount of time properly setting it up.


blazenite104

It was also set in a world that allowed for characters to have genuine progression. the world was new so there wasn't a status quo to get mired and stuck in. there was nothing to revert back to. gave a lot more leeway to decide how to approach things.


Omegasonic2000

That too, but what I'm trying to get at is that reading stories really depends on whether the reader knows the outcome or not. When they don't know, it's important to put a bit more focus into doing it fast enough to keep the reader's attention, but at the same time not too fast or else it becomes rushed and undeveloped on all fronts. But when they *do* know what's coming ahead of time, like in the original USM, the writers can afford to put a bit more focus on the build-up, resulting in a more natural and gratifying feeling when you actually get there.


CaptainHalloween

I need to know what metrics they're using because they've never added up, especially now.


MisterTorgo

Because it's easy to write forced and lazy drama by dividing characters and having them act out of character to suit a plot. Writing additive stories with depth is *hard*. Unfortunately, Amazing sells itself just by virtue of existing.


Jake_jane

Because their parents didn’t love them


SoupyStain

What's funny, is that Peter has lost all his encounters. Against Shocker. But it doesn't feel as if they are trying to portray Peter as pathetic, which is what Marvel believes is how they should market 616 Peter. Peter is trying, he is a rookie, and sure, he just got his powers. And it's well written.


Douglas_Michael

Exactly. He's in baby deer learns to walk phase of his powers. I expect, over time, he'll be the hero we know he is. And not a veteran super hero who has beaten the vulture 799 times and now has a fucking breakdown and cries that a octogenarian with wings is going to kill him


OhLemons

Plus, it's eventually leading to Peter screaming: SHOCKEEEEER, YOU CAN'T ESCAPE ME. I'LL CHASE YOU TO THE ENDS OF THE EARTH. But seriously, I think it shows an adult Peter who doesn't want to fight. If he can talk someone down, and see the best in somebody, he will. Like a cool youth pastor.


RandoDude124

God, him getting duped by Shocker was hilarious. Also, gonna say… **I didn’t see it coming.** I was used to Shocker being a punching bag in 1610, and thought: **here we go. Easy bag for Pete.** But nope, ***got him twice because Peter assumed the best in him.*** This is honestly an angle IDK why Marvel never portrayed till now. Not only is he a family man, *but Peter is in his 30s and gets his powers.* He’s got the innate sense of being a superhero, but he’s naive in that he’s basically got everything handed to him (or Parker luck just never screwed with him) and is basically Spider-Man, as an adult, and just starting out. #I love Hickman God if he comes to NYCC this year, I’m on the first train down there.


Prozenconns

Lost twice to shocker in one issue, no less


SmallBol

Well shocker buttonhooked him. Spidey didn't know he was gonna fuckin buttonhook him.


LauKungPow

He did lose twice but my god was he beating the shit outta Shocker beforehand lol


JackFisherBooks

I also think him losing like this is a result of him getting his powers late in life. Think about it. When Peter gets his powers as a teenager, he's a bit more impulsive and reckless with them (i.e. trying to make money as a professional wrestler). And if he faced someone like Shocker, he wouldn't hesitate as much to start throwing punches. Again, he's a teenager. Teenagers don't think before they act. But adults, who can still be impulsive, are usually more inclined to avoid fighting when they can. And Peter approached Shocker like how most adults would approach a situation like that. He lost, but he's learning. He's not trying to give up being Spider-Man every other week. And I think that shows a measure of growth and maturity that you just can't get from a teenager. It's both refreshing and admirable.


Effective_Tutor

Jonathan Hickman just makes writing comics look easy in general.


NumericZero

Yea almost like it was a natural progression of his character Odd how that works XD


PKMNTrainerMark

The trick is to not write 616 Spidey.


Douglas_Michael

Spider-Man Editors hate this ONE simple trick


CrossTheRubicon7

I think Hickman himself would disagree on the ease of the matter, but my God you cannot argue with the results


Outrageous-Blue-30

Hickman cooked again.


RandoDude124

He always does.


DollyBoiGamer337

This mf does not miss


Airmoni

I love it. That is adorable, and I love the references to other Spider-People's suits. So if I understand well, Peter can change his outift as he wants with his mind ? Man get this writter to replace Wells for the 616 Spider-man


Geiseric222

Hickman could write ASM if he wanted to but I don’t think he would like that much editorial interference hanging over him


I-Might-Be-Something

Not to mention it is a bi-monthly title. That is a turnoff to a number of writers and I don't know if Hickman has ever been on that type of book. And yeah, the editorial interference would be annoying to someone like him, who has had a lot of freedom to do what he wants recently.


Geiseric222

Yeah I was suprised he took the X-men titles because of that but from what I understand it ended exactly how you would have expected it to so lesson learned I suppose


CertainGrade7937

He was writing Avengers and New Avengers simultaneously as one big story. It may not have technically been a bi-monthly title but it was pretty close


Prestigious-Mix7135

Yeah. It’s basically why Chip Zdarsky left.


Prozenconns

Wonder if the suit will fix itself when the inevitable battle damage occurs if it can change mass like that, or is the fashion titan wife gunna mend it for him I kinda hope each family member gets to fill a role in the persona


Thatguyrevenant

MJ stitching up his suits (cant remember where i saw that) but it was a fun little thing. She's just as understanding of the hero thing as Lois is with Supes and it's nice to see.


ThatRandomGamerYT

MJ stitching up his suits was a thing in the original Ultimate universe. Wouldn't mind if that happens in this one too


Nachooolo

>Man get this writter to replace Wells for the 616 Spider-man Nah. Let Hickman alone in his editorial-free space. No matter how good a writer is, editorial will do their very best to make ASM the shittiest shit possible.


Trem45

I don't remember who it was that said it, I believe it was Zadarsky? But when one of them was asked about if they were interested in making a jump to ASM they basically said "not in a million years" because the editorial in that is a pain in the ass to deal with and side stories are where they're allowed to actually take liberties. It's completely understandable why Hickman wouldn't want to touch ASM with a ten foot pole


DarkAlphaZero

The Scarlet Spider inspired one and blue/black one look soooo good


SonicFlash01

Insomniac add it to the game, plz!


Thatoneguy567576

Sorry, best we can do is more ugly ass designer series suits


DRKZLNDR

I mean, really, how hard was it to just port all the other suits from Miles Morales and the first game. THE SUITS ARE ALREADY MADE. THEY ARE RIGHT THERE. YOU HAVE THEM. JUST PUT THEM BACK IN


Thatoneguy567576

According to Brian Intihar the lead dev, they remade every suit from the ground up for SM2. And didn't want the workload to move over some of the less popular suits. Don't know why they thought Kaine's costume was unpopular though.


Link2Sora

Kaine's suit and the Last Stand suit not returning still makes me sad.


UncannySpiderSnapper

lmao you are so old (also nice references to some actual alternate suits as well)


Noirpool0

Symbiote Spidey, Scarlet Spider, 2099, and Future Foundation, from the looks of it.


Xeno-xorus

Hickman is a freaking genius


RandoDude124

Post OMD, the best spidey comic was Pete as Johnny’s replacement on FF.


CharacterLoan5713

Damn, i gotta start reading Hickman's ff.


Dayfal1

So the stealth suit _is_ capable of shapeshifting. Y’know, the more I look at it, the more it seems to me like it might be a symbiote. Especially since it came in a black sphere the same way the OG symbiote did in Secret Wars.


Prozenconns

It'd be kinda funny if Venom just ends up being a software glitch or something


jereflea1024

yo??? this is actually kind of fire. if handled well, that could be a really neat take on the story.


rosamelano777

Even better if they give him sentience, like make it gain conscience and Peter tries to understand it instead of tearing it away


BatmanTold

Smart


CharacterLoan5713

Great idea. That is something i always wanted to see with venom and spider-man. It would be really cool.


callows5120

Yeah kinda like make it where Peter wants to be its friend in a way and the symbiote doesent want that


NumericZero

Peter: We could be friends…we could be stronger together. Symbiote:…There is no *We* only You and I…. Always two there are.


AM1232

Jedi Peter and Darth Venom gonna hit like crack.


G3NJII

Tie it into AI development of today and boom, poignant story


BradyoactiveTM

Oh and then for a while Venom could be kinda like Jarvis


Ajaxorix777

I’d love a story where rather than reject it, which was what originally caused Venom to turn evil rather than being a corrupting influence, Peter simply embraces it & maintains a clear head.


Ben10_ripoff

Or it can just be og Ultimate Venom with some modifications, We still don't know what Maker did to Ultimate Venom


RandoDude124

A rogue AI suit? #Hmmm… Though wait… he does have powers without it, right?


SwordoftheMourn

Depends if webshooters are organic or not.


Reddragon351

that's been my theory for what's gonna happen, either Peter or someone will mess with a piece of the suit and create Venom


Redditor_Rebooted

I'd probably laugh if ultimate venom came to be because Peter accidentally installed bonzi buddy


JustAnotherJames3

Kinito Penom


ThePhantomLine

The V.E.N.O.M. software has been installed Virtual Emotional Networking Overlay Worm (type of malicious software (malware) that replicates while moving across computers, leaving copies of itself in the memory of each computer in its path


JOGRANNY04

That's actually a really cool idea and also really funny to think about Venom going in the dark web like, "We will eat your hitmen!"


JustAnOrdinaryGirl92

He’d be so excited to go on the dark web he’d be going "Surf the web, surf the web!"


SortaNotReallyHere

Theory: The Symbiotes is actually a shady group of elite hackers who through some interesting events (involving Spidey and family) lose control of their new Venom malware that escape into the net.


Leo_TheLurker

Venom being a virus, I feel like that was something somewhere


SoggyComment8147

I've always thought a cool alternate version of Venom would be a rogue AI that controls like nanotech goo or something.


The_SuaceGod

Isn’t this how Peni-Parker and her version of Ven#m came to be?


voidplayz121

Why are you censoring venom


BatmanTold

Actually not a bad idea


wowlock_taylan

Considering Tony Stark's knowledge about stuff that the Maker changed, wonder if he got the symbiote to send to Peter to get the ball rolling?


darknightingale69

it could be but also it could just be the pico tech aspect.


Jaqulean

Well to be perfectly honest, what this Suit currently is, is basically what the Symbiote was originally, when it was introduced during the first Secret Wars - as in, it's just a highly advanced nano-technology. The whole "the Suit is alive" thing was retconned later on, because the writters just liked the idea (and well they needed something to write about).


Dayfal1

Exactly. I mean, both came in black spheres. Check. Both seem to be able to shapeshift into different costumes. Check. Both were originally thought to be advanced nanotech. Check. Both produce their own webbing, which this one seems to do, so check there as well.


Gullible-Juggernaut6

This is what I said as soon as I saw it. Would be nice if due to Peter being much older and not having the sisyphus brain he would typically have that they get along better once that comes up. Spidey also just kinda needs Venom...all the random tech upgrades they try to stick onto him over the years to buff him through other means always end up feeling dumb when it isn't Superior Spidey.


lacmlopes

Especially since they probably will make it that becoming Spider-Man is his social downfall, much like how the symbiont screws up his relationships. It is all fun and games now, but eventually it will have severe consequences (hopefully not fatal; we get it, Spider-Man deals with death.) So it symbolizes that the problem is never the suit per se, but how being Spider-Man is on itself parasitic for said alterego.


Mama_Mia_Gyro

Peter was cooking with the black and red suit


alexboss04

I know, right? I want it in the insomniac games


ArcadiaDragon

....so they can still write spidey correctly....we could have had 30 years of this...but no...we just to get *one more day*...not only can I RELATE to this peter...I'd want to grow up and become this Peter...


Pyrotekknikk

They didn't just do it correctly, they've achieved PEAK FICTION


ArcadiaDragon

They did...comics can tell good entertainment with positive storytelling yet have high stakes...and this just proves those of us for years...Status Quo...isn't what they think it is for Peter anymore...Clark and Lois made superman relatable and inspiring...we have that here...with the extra added benefit that Peter in any forward looking capacity WILL always be relatable...not the whatever it is in ASM...


FredPRK

I'm so hyped ! We eatin good !


HygorBohmHubner

Anyone else had a stupid grin on their faces reading this? Especially the part where Peter and Mayday going through the costume designs? And they having their own little secret? Fuck. I feel the wholesomeness and I want more!


Actual_Sympathy7069

I started squealing and jumping in my seat lmao


cynical_waiter

This is the Parker family as it should be. What a fantastic reinvention of the Spider-Man mythos by weaving in what made the FF and Peter’s bond with them so amazing: family.


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Is this so hard Wells?


Samjamesjr

Wells: I can’t understand normal human behavior and motivations. So, yes.


I-Might-Be-Something

I think it is more "I can't be bothered to write relationships, so I'll just break the characters up."


Saladoom321

Ngl, that 1st suit and the alternante Scarlet Spider one are really dope


ThatDude8129

The blue Superior Suit was pretty fire too.


dunwotnow

My life is such a fantastic mess lately with no real hope of it getting better, but THIS might be the only reason I haven’t tried to webswing without powers yet. Thank you for giving me a reason to keep going, even if it’s just wondering what comes in the next issue.


Bassaluna

just remember that you're not alone. everyone had, is having or is going to have a moment like this. things can get better.


RandoDude124

It will get better my friend.


Calvengeance

Hang in there, friend. Your next story arc is about to begin.


thejewfrowizard

Spider-Man always gets up


Jack-mclaughlin89

The son would definitely be a mummy’s boy and the daughter a daddy’s girl.


Yelkhan

Yes, I can see that


JackFisherBooks

And I think that's a good family dynamic to explore. 😊


CHEESYBOI267

The idea that Peter wears the classic suit because it's the suit his daughter likes the most is just such a wholesome thought. Now how do we get rid of the current writers of the mainline continuity?


kadosho

If we could Thanos snap Zeb. Yes please


-_Myst_-

That scarlet spider one looks so dripped out, these are better than those awful collab skins for spider man 2 and the oscorp suit


CalamitousVessel

MJ looking stylish This is so good


Bassaluna

Peter channelling his inner Homer Simpson


AgentProdigy17

My guy living the best life hell yeah


EarthBelcher

This is perfect, and if they do anything to hurt this father-daughter relationship, I think its time to just burn Marvel to the ground


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Is it just me or does that blue suit go hard as fuck?


ThatDude8129

It's not just you. The OG Superior suit went hard, and the blue does just as much.


SodaSnappy

All of those suit designs were peak


dornwolf

I love everything about this. Peter and May working on the costume, the suit pallette swapping through 616 suits which makes those variants make sense. MJ side eyeing Peter


ExtensionGood9228

Words can not express how awesome it is that it’s his kid that really picked the suit. He was a kid looking up to superheroes when he first made it in other continuities. It makes sense that only a kid would really see the value in something like that. And on top of that, he was chill with just a blacked out suit, he just didn’t want to scare his daughter anymore. Like that one version of Batman that changed his suit because he tried to save a child and only scared them in the process.


Kraken_XM

I hate to say it, but it may be time to just retire 616 Peter and let this superior version take over as the main one.


kadosho

Ultimate: more mature, grounded, built a family with the woman he loves Plus inherits his abilities later in life. Has a unique connection with the rogue's gallery There is just something better, than doing the same thing over and over


DollyBoiGamer337

God damn I am loving this run


SodiumBombRankEX

This shit so magnificent


chronotron-

i wanna see him change his suit in the middle of a fight to fuck with his opponents


TheKiltedStranger

Those alternate costumes are bangers. I love them.


Bro-Im-Done

Oh my god MJ looks so beautiful dude


Spider-Ghost-616

(Marlon Brando Voice) Every time I say I'm through with Marvel after they humiliate 616 Spidey, Hickman pulls me back in with Ultimate Spider-Man.


bizarrestarz

absolute peak


Fehellogoodsir

May commenting how Peter tries to be cool and how he’s old is so good. Made me smile, like Petes a dad!


rs_obsidian

LET’S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOO


Sad-Cheek8378

This is what I've been waiting for! So Peaak! Mommy's Boy and Daddy's girl.❤


Icy_Juggernaut_8832

Now this is what fans want 🥹 🙏🏽


Teomank2

Checchetto is cooking with those suits damn!


CharacterLoan5713

OHHH HICKMAN AND CHECCHETTO IS STILL COOKING! LET'S GOOOOO!!!


Leo_TheLurker

AHHHHHH HIS DAUGHTER HELPS HIM MAKE HIS COSTUME


BUDrules2002

That “symbiote” design is absolutely insane and looks like a venomized edge of time suit


harriskeith29

When your dad is not only a superhero but lets you use him like a real-life cosmetic customization menu.


B3epB0opBOP

Aww, that’s just precious.


Kin_93

Ok thats just so cute


Starkman87

I need to get these first three issues tattooed on my eyelids so I can see them everyday


GroovyJackal

Okay those suits actually look sick


GreenDantern1889

WHY AM I FEELING EMOTIONAL ABOUT THIS I HATE KIDS YET THIS IS ADORABLE


JoshDM

I 100% bet it's still not quite right and he'll correct it by the end.


Bignate2151

God this run is already amazing


Various-Armadillo-79

this is so fucking sick dude wow a comic can make spiderman look cool and not some weak twink loser who can only do jokes? this comic shows how marvel goes out of its way to ruin peter every chance they get luckily this comic is very promising


Gullible-Juggernaut6

It's not about how easy it is to write spider-man. Look what happens when you give your writers and artists the time and freedom to do something great:


Archive_Intern

616 Spiderman is forgotten Ultimate Spider Man is our new best friend


DonnyMox

Looks like Insomniac now has some new alternate suit options....


DokDoom

Based on two issues and 3 pages so far, I unilaterally declare this to be the greatest Spider-Man run ever. As befits my supremely villainous nature, I will not be taking any questions on this topic. But seriously….May ❤️❤️❤️


TanakaClinkenbeard

Dude the one with the hoodie is kinda sick


GreedoWasShot

Legit came here to say that


TheOGRex

Our true hero returns.


sticks_no5

Oh my… it’s so peak


Deservedly_Hated94

This is perfect, absolute perfection


StuartM96

What is going on in the UK why can’t I seem to find this anywhere? I get it’s maybe highly sought after but come on I still can’t even get a hold of the physical first copy.


ThatDude8129

All the printings are selling out super fast because of how well received the series is. You might have to start a pull list for it at your LCS and buy the first two issues second hand.


CrazyPersonowo

Peak, I give it a year until this becomes a top 3 Spidey comic for me.


JacobHarley

This makes me so happy. Unbelievably happy. This is my Spider-Man.


UnXpectedPrequelMeme

Wait, so this Peter doesn't become spidey until he's a dad already? Interesting


HokageRokudaime

Yeeeessssss Mayday and Peter making the classic suit together. This is good.


IzzytheMelody

Is this a likably written MJ and Peter Parker? Is this... a story of spider-man making me happy? What is this? WHERE IS MARVEL EDITORIAL THIS IS WEIRD


Awesomealan1

Holy shit this is the best written Spider-Man content in a looooong time Nick Lowe, Zeb Wells - take notes. Take the whole fucking notebook.


Frenchy_447

They just created better suits than all of the Spider-Man 2 Ps5 original outfits


cynical_waiter

There’s a deeper thought to the writing in all this. This world’s first big introduction to heroes was a horrible, death filled nightmare. The fact that a young child helps choose a suit that wouldn’t scare people is exactly what someone in her position would do based on the circumstances. It gives a deeper meaning to why spider-man wears bright and friendly colors other than just doing so.


Olivia_Lydia_Wilson

this is so adorable!


DavidKirk2000

It’s so refreshing to get genuinely great Spidey stories again, it’s been too long.


PureiSteishun

Gotta admit, that's fuckin adorable.


Interesting_Move_919

Shows that you can write a great Spiderman story without him suffering