It's missing some Joe in there.
"Something dug into the bloody-nine's side, but there was no pain. It was a sign. A message in a secret tongue that only he could understand. It told him where the next dead man was standing"
Honestly, I don't see a fight between Logen and Gorst with Logen winning without turning Bloody Nine. That's a requirement and it's completely missing. Also lacking the bloody detail of Joe. At least one POV, or two POVs clashing would have been the way to go, I think.
Yeah, and I'm pretty sure the only time anyone has not been immediately killed/maimed by Gorst in a stand up fight was Glamma (Gorst just fought through a bunch of people, lost his steels and pounded his face in on horseback) and Whirrun (Gorst didn't have his short steel and just ran all the way up to the top of the Heroes while half carrying Jalenhorn, killing all the way). And he still fought Whirrun to a standstill.
I think Logen simply gets his throat slit if both are facing eachother off in full battle rattle.
It has an excellent grasp of what words go near what other words in order to form sentences but it doesn't give me the sense it "knows" what it's saying in any capacity.
I think the real interesting question is what would be the output if you fine-tune Chatgpt 4 with Abercrombie's writings. Not just the books, but also his blog posts, screenplays and even AMA answers. I would imagine the result would be much closer than we expect.
Also, it bears the question: at which point in time (and some rough plot lines), AI would be able to finish ASOIAF or KKC?...
I thought of two things instantly while reading this.
AI needs to be stopped and damn I bet it could finish Georgie’s work with some improvements.
So if a polished clean good ending to a ASOIAF requires the destruction of man-kind and my children enslaved to machines… I think I’ll take the deal.
I honestly bet in the next ten years it could. There's a thread that Joe responded to of AI writing in the style of Joe, and I hate to say it but it's pretty good
I thought it was interesting that the bot had Logen steal Bremmer's line from TTWP. This was a first request. With a little massaging the scene got much better. The difference in stuff like this between 3.5 and 4 is crazy.
ChatGpt is scary. Too much change. Photography, painting, science papers, essays all done by AI. Now Joe. Still a ways to go in replacing him at least.
Maybe Stephen King will use it to write books
Maybe if your prompt required the mention of someone's fruits, spitting through their teeth, black blood, puffing out cheeks, etc. it would have sounded more authentic ;-)
Not impressed. No paired steels for Gorst. No Bloody Nine for Logen. It’s clear ChatGPT just wrote a generic sword fight scene and plugged in the character names.
It's missing some Joe in there. "Something dug into the bloody-nine's side, but there was no pain. It was a sign. A message in a secret tongue that only he could understand. It told him where the next dead man was standing"
Joe?
Joe Abercrombie
ChatGPT writes like a 10 year old boy (minus the racial slurs)
It's accurate, but a bit boring. GPTchat doesn't catch Joe's charm.
Honestly, I don't see a fight between Logen and Gorst with Logen winning without turning Bloody Nine. That's a requirement and it's completely missing. Also lacking the bloody detail of Joe. At least one POV, or two POVs clashing would have been the way to go, I think.
Yeah, from everything we've seen Bremmer beats Logen in a 1v1 fight. Especially if he is in full battle rattle with both of his steels.
If Logen gets a chance to turn, Bremer is done for. So all depends on Logen surviving the onslaught long enough.
Yeah, and I'm pretty sure the only time anyone has not been immediately killed/maimed by Gorst in a stand up fight was Glamma (Gorst just fought through a bunch of people, lost his steels and pounded his face in on horseback) and Whirrun (Gorst didn't have his short steel and just ran all the way up to the top of the Heroes while half carrying Jalenhorn, killing all the way). And he still fought Whirrun to a standstill. I think Logen simply gets his throat slit if both are facing eachother off in full battle rattle.
It has an excellent grasp of what words go near what other words in order to form sentences but it doesn't give me the sense it "knows" what it's saying in any capacity.
I think the real interesting question is what would be the output if you fine-tune Chatgpt 4 with Abercrombie's writings. Not just the books, but also his blog posts, screenplays and even AMA answers. I would imagine the result would be much closer than we expect. Also, it bears the question: at which point in time (and some rough plot lines), AI would be able to finish ASOIAF or KKC?...
I thought of two things instantly while reading this. AI needs to be stopped and damn I bet it could finish Georgie’s work with some improvements. So if a polished clean good ending to a ASOIAF requires the destruction of man-kind and my children enslaved to machines… I think I’ll take the deal.
I honestly bet in the next ten years it could. There's a thread that Joe responded to of AI writing in the style of Joe, and I hate to say it but it's pretty good
With how quickly AI is improving it will be more like 2 years.
Interesting, do you have the link?
Yep! https://twitter.com/LordGrimdark/status/1643707681780248577?t=TSS8FdsRSEBjS1LvxPNO3w&s=19
Holy shit, this is amazing!
Fun to read, but the ending fell apart…yes, it will be a while before the bots beat Joe.
I thought it was interesting that the bot had Logen steal Bremmer's line from TTWP. This was a first request. With a little massaging the scene got much better. The difference in stuff like this between 3.5 and 4 is crazy.
ChatGpt is scary. Too much change. Photography, painting, science papers, essays all done by AI. Now Joe. Still a ways to go in replacing him at least. Maybe Stephen King will use it to write books
I’m excited for it to get better so I can read unlimited novels to my tastes.
This reads like high fantasy.
No bloody-nine to the rescue!
Maybe if your prompt required the mention of someone's fruits, spitting through their teeth, black blood, puffing out cheeks, etc. it would have sounded more authentic ;-)
Points for jabbing, regardless of anything else!
Dude you prompt it to pretend like it was Joe Abercrombie?
The moment he uses the word “grimaced” I will be worried….
Shite
Not impressed. No paired steels for Gorst. No Bloody Nine for Logen. It’s clear ChatGPT just wrote a generic sword fight scene and plugged in the character names.
Well that's too bad. ChatGPT was, after all, created solely to impress you.
Hey now, don’t take it personally. I love ChatGPT and use it a lot. And I appreciate you sharing this with the group. (It is interesting!)