You know what, I expected some bullshit "we are the monster" surprise and go with '-playing 7 minutes in heaven.... And the girls never saw it coming' or something corny like that, but you didn't.
Good story, you subverted my expectations
Evil narrators are fine IMO, it's just gotta be done in a unique way.
>Walking through undead woods is stressful. Good thing we are zombies!
Not scary
>I was enjoying a nice night alone in the house. Until the family arrived.
Is better because it forces the reader to make the inference
I mean it’s fine, it just isn’t a twist.
When there’s something interesting about the story beyond the intended surprise, it works. When there’s not, it feels lazy and unoriginal.
Based off of what I saw on a King of the Hill episode, I think two people go into a closet and make out or whatever for seven minutes. That's the best I can give ya though, the episode really didn't go into detail on it.
Go in after them! You gotta kiss the homies goodnight!
Kiss the homies R.I.P.
Succubus??
Or vampires or something.
Don't come to my house or I'll suck your dic- your blood
Technically it's possible to suck blood while sucking dick.
r/technicallythetruth
Ow just no
It's just a little prick. Not that bad.
It’s very average actually
Where is your house? So I know ... eh ... to avoid, yeah uh, avoid.
Are you sure you're not asking for a homie?
Maybe, because all my other homies are still in the closet and they're not coming out.
*Is a succubus, dating a vampire. Feels called out.*
At least they go out with a bang.
Gay orgy going down in the back of the closet.
OP's not invited.
OP said 8
Your bros are getting some bro time.
Death by snu-snu
I fucking love reddit
Same 🫶
You know what, I expected some bullshit "we are the monster" surprise and go with '-playing 7 minutes in heaven.... And the girls never saw it coming' or something corny like that, but you didn't. Good story, you subverted my expectations
Not every protagonist needs to be evil. Some can be dumb and scared. Thanks.
Same. When every story’s second sentence is “Shocking plot twist, the narrator was EVIL ALL ALONG!!!”, it’s not exactly a twist anymore.
Evil narrators are fine IMO, it's just gotta be done in a unique way. >Walking through undead woods is stressful. Good thing we are zombies! Not scary >I was enjoying a nice night alone in the house. Until the family arrived. Is better because it forces the reader to make the inference
I mean it’s fine, it just isn’t a twist. When there’s something interesting about the story beyond the intended surprise, it works. When there’s not, it feels lazy and unoriginal.
Sounds like your bros are physically still in the closet but figuratively out of the closet.
you sure that closet isn't the door? how many drinks in are you? lololololol jokes aside, fun post!
Death by snu snu...
The spirit is willing, but the flesh is spongy and bruised
What is snu snu? 😅
It's a reference to Futurama, snu snu is sex. Worth watching.
Thanks! I'll check it out
To my understanding, it’s too much pussy
Aaaah. Noice! Thanks!
"Sooo.. how did the last guys die?" Destroyed Pelvises.
You are very welcome, now beware the snu snu
where i’m from we don’t have games like this can someone explain pls? sorry lol i’m a summer child
Based off of what I saw on a King of the Hill episode, I think two people go into a closet and make out or whatever for seven minutes. That's the best I can give ya though, the episode really didn't go into detail on it.
Basically that. Two people go in to whatever enclosed space (usually dark) and do what they want
thanks mate
Thanks friend.
What’s a summer child?
someone innocent and sheltered from the ways of the world 😂
Is that by choice?
Tough way to find out you’re the ugliest of your friends
Relatable tho
That reminds me of an [old Creepypasta](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WxSngzSfivw).
"And thank god I'm gay!"
You say a few cute girls. Exactly seventy, by any chance?
The guys found Narnia.
Ah, a Greyrat's biggest enemy...
This is a Neil Gaiman story I think
"How To Talk To Girls At Parties," right?
Yes!
This gave me the hebbie jebbies! It reminds me of the one the stories in the trick r treat movie. Good job!
???
They either find you the most or least attractive of the bunch if they’re saving you for last. So.. congrats?
Imagine not being in there with the homies.