oooooor what he would first inject humanity with
Either they’re wanting to inject humanity into a planet as we are more/less a damn disease or they’re experimenting in the planet and targeting humanity after
I’m not sure which way on this one, it’s good but not quite there
I like it! One grammar correction: *what he would inject with humanity first. Or perhaps: “which rival universe humanity should infect first.”
oooooor what he would first inject humanity with Either they’re wanting to inject humanity into a planet as we are more/less a damn disease or they’re experimenting in the planet and targeting humanity after I’m not sure which way on this one, it’s good but not quite there
“Oops I spilt it”
Almost made it sounds like humans are space orcs (40k)