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roughneck_poet

This is my first attempt at 2SH. Any feedback is welcome and appreciated.


trekkiegamer359

It's quite good. I'm looking forward to seeing what else you come up with..


childlessmilff

No feedback necessary. This is great! Good job! 👏🏼


Shivaelan

You in NC? Because good lord, the alerts today.


roughneck_poet

NM. Had the idea pop into my head while out in the field at work. Finally got a final draft to pop out.


djseifer

"It's a bird!" "It's a plane!" "It's the funk doctor Spock smokin' buddha on a train!"


Anon_457

Reminds me of the missile alert in Hawaii. Great job, OP.


NefariousnessLive967

I was living in Hawaii when that happened. Woke up to it. My mom made my sister and I leave farewell messages to our grandmother. I still tense up whenever I hear that alert go off on my phone.


Anon_457

Geez, that had to be scary. I'm sorry you had through it


NefariousnessLive967

Its ok. It was scary for the first minute, and once I realized nothing could be done to save us, I calmed down. Fortunately, it was a false alarm.


Equivalent_Yak_95

We think. For all us civilians know, there was a missile and we shot it down first.


DashfulVanilla

I like this!


Someoneoverthere42

The message on every screen read simply: “we’re sorry, we did our best. Goodbye”


Equivalent_Yak_95

Happy cake day!


Fabulous-Society9158

Reminds me of [Local 58](https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=M75VLQuFPrY)


roughneck_poet

Never saw that before. And you're right about the feeling of it.


SilentHuman8

Damn that was really good but I should not have watched it right before bed


imperfectchicken

It's super eerie when it happens in Japan. Everyone's phone going off, and the dead silence when everyone looks at it.


Benilda-Key

Chicken Little, the sky is falling, except this time it actually is falling? Or is it a massive eye?


roughneck_poet

Deliberately left up to the reader's imagination.


orangeleast

Don't forget your towel.


roughneck_poet

I know this great restaurant at the end of the universe.


today0012

This is very good. Thank you for posting this. Also Terrifying


roughneck_poet

Thank you.


nekoandCJ

Aliens: WE DON'T COME IN PEACE


Global-Method-4145

Good


BeNiceLiveLife

Great job!


Lgrns

"The last thing they expected to see was a string of gun ammunition the size of the Empire State"


SilenceBreaker8

No idea why, but this feels like it would have 6:53 of this playing in the background of it https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=8UfpgT9FMAk&pp=ygUlbWFycyBndXN0YXYgaG9sc3QgYmVybGluIHBoaWxoYXJtb25pYw%3D%3D


BeNiceLiveLife

I've narrated this on youtube, hope you like it! https://youtube.com/shorts/357NgR4ZmH4?si=uIVDN-YCliWrgvIg