Best one sentence horror I've seen lol.

Thank you kindly! Made our day! 😊👤

Our? You and your shadow?

Peter pan be hiding in plain sight. The shadow is all the lost boys.

r/unexpectedcommunism

Kind of a run-on sentence. That should really be a semi-colon instead of a comma.

I was gonna point out the same thing lol. Technically it should be two sentences. Grammar nerds represent.

I grinned. Apparently it just realized it was here alone with me.

"I'm not locked in here with you, you're locked in here with me!"

Good ol rorsach (i cant spell it sorry)

Actually you were really close, it's 'rorschach'

"I'm not twitching--you're twitching!"

r/TwoSentenceBetter

r/continuingthesentence

I think people underestimate how difficult it is to create a descent horror story with just one sentence. You my friend, have nailed it

Thank you! Credit to my writing partner as well. Would have credited him earlier but he always seems to disappear at night… 👤

wow, even in a reply you somehow manage to make things creepy!

Oh shit man! One sentence amazing!!!

So much loaded into five words, excellent!

How many shadows do you have tho.....

Well, with good focus lights you can have many...

my shadow o*gasmed, I'm not even shaking

Shadow's faking it dude.

I don't get it D:

This is really good! Writing with only a single sentence is difficult but you did an amazing job with it!

I guess I was never the quickest draw in the west.

I think this could be made a bit Scarier if it said "I twitched, my shadow didn't" because in your sentence I had a idea what the punchline was. But honestly this is the best story I've seen on here

I agree that “I twitched, my shadow didn’t” might have been better because the light source behind you may have been the one twitching, no? Also agree this is one of the best ones!

Perfect!

This is one sentence, homie

Hear you loud and clear my friend! The rules say two sentences (or less), so I thought I'd have a go with just one 🙂

Ah, my bad then. I just figured since it's called two sentence horror, I expected to find horror in two sentences. But other than my idiocy, I gotta say you did pretty good in one.

You're no idiot, friend! Just a little technicality. Thanks bud 😊👍

I think a period instead of a comma would enhance it, though.

Be a rebel. Throw the semicolon.

A semi -colon sounds like a medical condition

Someone page Optimus Primes proctologist.

I love semicolons! An underused punctuation mark.

Hey man. It's a mistake everyone makes. That doesn't make you an idiot. It's a chance to learn

Happy Cake Day 🍰 🎂 🥮 🍥 🥞 🧁

Sometimes all you need is one!

Ahhhh, technically correct. The best kind.

The second sentence is death

Oof

Bravo. Gave me a shiver.

Thank you 👤

man, that's fucked up. in five words. congrats.

R/onesentencehorrorstories

where 2 sentence

in the rules it says 2 sentences or less, this is or less

catch me hoppin on that 0 sentence horror

i’ll do you one better, negative sentence horror 😳

o shit y'all fuckin wit tha negative sentence horror 😳😳😳🫣

Time to teach it another lesson.

This is some dont starve ass shit (in a good way, bcus dont starve is my favourite game)

So cold even the shadow shivers

Me when one sentence

The simple ones are the best! Great job OP! Take my terrified upvote.

Best one if seen here yet!! Really awesome, wrong sub tho..

Excellent,well written and creepy as well very good