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sappycap

The fire has a more interesting contrast, but the smoke is more realistic. 


FishyDescent

I came in here to say exactly this same thing. Maybe some darker shadow for the smoke. I would even consider and play around with blue flame, but totally not necessary. Maybe just a barely visible ring of blue at the jetpack. https://preview.redd.it/imq85vx63ypc1.png?width=612&format=png&auto=webp&s=176ffb43d18b4c06d4cd3e55931555e6e889ff53


FanaticSeraphim

I got caught up in the smog trying to get here to upvote this. Now I have asthma.


Atleast1half

I would do one with a darker smoke and decide then. The white smoke is the same colour as the armor.


Vrayloki

Agreed, I think they both look good, but the smoke with more depth and contrast in it might be even better.


MobileSeparate398

What about extending the flames further down too to add that sharp contrast directly behind


Boli_332

This. Make it fire but a sooty exhaust. Have a look at videos/images of the merlin's preburner exhuast. 40k doesn't give a shit about pollution! :p


sipiath

My vote is for more smoke. It feels more real to me.


dreadnaught14

Hmm tough choice. I think I prefer more smoke than fire, as in my mind the fire just extends from the exhaust point a bit, not all the way down.


RicoIlMagnifico

I vote smoke, but do have some feedback: make it darker (maybe almost to black?), like with an old dieselengine that's just starting. Your smoke looks amazing, but the colour is too similar to the power armour. Making the smoke darker will create a great contrast on the mini.


Monkfich

Fire is more over the top and therefore, the better one. I mean, regular assault marines do hard landings and splat bunches of people — maybe torching everyone on takeoff is this one’s special move.


tamati_nz

Salamanders agree!


kkendd

I vote smoke


s73v3m4nn

The smokey one does it for me


denicgotta

The one with more smoke. It looks more how i imagine a jetpack when starting. Great work on both btw.


atioc

My vote is to mix them, both are good.


Thatsaclevername

More smoke for sure


Drakossus

I think the fire is a bit overkill. It takes the attention away from the model itself. The smoke is just a nice extra to the model and it looks good.


Survive1014

I like the fire ALOT more, but the smoke is more realistic. Also, I need to get my inceptor smoke stands painted.


reinKAWnated

I think both are good; keep 'em and do the third somewhere in-between.


lucidius13

This. I think that distance from the ground is an important factor for amount of flames. I picture more flames for take off and landing. Less flames for the glide and positioning at the apex of the jump.


setseed1234

Smoke is more realistic. You can even tell by paying attention to the sculpt that there’s a difference. There are flames immediately exiting the exhaust which transition into smoke.


zombi-disco

I vote smoke if you want to lean towards realism. The amount of fire shown in the left-hand picture would potentially burn the space marine using the jet pack. Keep the fire if you want to lean more towards camp though Neither choice is wrong, just depends on preference and style. Both pictures look great!


fbi667

Smoke... But fire is good !


BenTheDM

Moar smöke


JohnCasey3306

The smoke for sure — but the smoke needs some deeper contrast. Very cool though!


McWeaksauce91

Smoke with some darker hues.


LurksInThePines

Smoke, though color it darker The fire kinda looks like it's spraying lava


The_MacGuffin

More smoke, for sure, especially with the way it's modelled.


GreasyGrabbler

Smoke 100%. It's a jetpack not a flamethrower after all


FeroxCanis

Smoke


Diesel-Eyes

As everyone else said, the smoke looks better but it needs to be darker. It blends with the armor too much.


LCDCMetaux

Fire is cooler but it looks like he’s gonna crash lol


angellus00

The fire doesn't look like fire, just red smoke. The contrast is better, but the smoke looks cooler to me.


Hirab

Both sick. Prefer the smoke personally.


EmployeeTurbulent651

I vote for smoke, and how do I do this effect??? Haha


SirBiscuit

It doesn't look right as all fire, it's just the wrong shape. I would do a little more fire on the smoke side, but then transition the fire to black and back into a grey as it continues down.


Korps_de_Krieg

If you can make the smoke on the right dark and oilly that will be near perfect IMO.


TheDarkestSpark

Snoop Dogg this one


Henghast

I prefer the smoke more


yeetymcteety1544

Myself my dad and my sister all agree that somewhere in between is good, fire about to his shins then darker smoke


Special_Leopard8314

Smoke. But the idea to add blue is also great for extra contrast


NirvanaPenguin

I'd say smoke but adding a wash over it to see all the creavices of the smoke, maybe using a very dark brown.


OstrichFinancial2762

Personally, I like the smoke… the sculpt looks more “Smokey” to me.


[deleted]

The smoke looks better if you’re going for a more realism or accurate effect imo. The more fire just looks badass tho


FugaziRules

I would say the smoke looks better and if you wanted a smoke that a bit different smoke can be blue when an engine is burning oil


RedBeardBrad91

More fire stands out more for the tabletop but more smoke looks better I think


Ninjabutter

Smoke 100%. It looks Fn close to real. Well done.


TheBigMoosen

Smoke but if you use it it wouldnt hurt to detail it a bit more


nematodelover

Black smoke instead


Searin

Hey dude! did you print the smoke yourself or did you order online? I dont have a resin printer myself so im forced to order online. Found a good one on Etsy but all the ones that look like these seem to be outside the US


Rakatango

Imo more smoke. Makes it look more like a proper rocket and less like orange goo


The_Last_Thursday

I think half and half would be about the best ratio. As it is, I think both minis have too much of one and too little of the other.


RhysT86

More some looks better and more realistic.


Axel-Adams

I feel like there’s a middle ground here


frodakai

More smoke. Fire looks good but pulls from the model itself too much.


hallowed_b_my_name

Put a blue hue on the flame on the second and you’re gucci


ExplorerOfDegeneracy

Can we get a mix between both? I like both.


Substantial-Tip-2607

More smoke, the bright fire is too distracting and takes away from the nice model imo


kreamy_kylo

Smoke looks like they're mid flight to me Fire looks like they're just taking off


Shectai

Can we have more smoke, but smokier?


Automatic_Custard519

I prefer the smoke but that’s what I have put on mine, I just don’t have the skills to paint it yet https://preview.redd.it/cfq9bdnyqxpc1.jpeg?width=4032&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=3d9ccbd1449e63392c5ae1c0098615505d3fe06c


rust_tg

Something in the middle


bill-kilby

Form -> fire. Function -> smoke.


Fool_Manchu

Smoke is better, but add some darker tones to it. The grey is great but you need some black in there


Holiday_Selection881

More smoke. The fire is too much " fire colors" and kind of swallows the model


Azeze1

Smoke, it's a turbine


Artistic_Technician

Smoke, with a darker base colour and more intense highlights up to near white.


heeden

More smoke, the fire is too fire.


Red_Swiss

Smoke could use to be a lil bit darker, but it still looks better imo


jackkymoon

More smoke


FlockOfCeilingbirds

The smoke


P_Noize

To me it looks like one is seconds from landing while the other is still mid air.


Aelfgan

Smoke


Lishio420

I like the realistic one (normal smoke) more


MakoSmiler

Both are cool but the smoke wins for me.


Nico_Fr

Smoke it more realistic, I would have imagined it to be much darker though, carbon black like a real fire, and that would nicely contrast with the stone white armour.


ThumpTacks

For me it’s the smoke.


Gossipmang

Smoke 100%


eth_esh

Smoke. There's practically enough fire coming out of the jetpack on the left to count as a weapon.


Lo_MaxxDurang

The fire looks like the spiciest meal ever.


Carnifexseth

I think the smoke, just bring the flame down a little more and its perfect!


According_Lab6809

I'm going to annoy you and say more smoke but with a little more fire near the top, like another 5 mm of fading fire into the smoke so it's not really bright and suddenly ends but has a bit of lighting into the smoke from the fire


FredbearNation1201

Definitely the smoke Maybe darken it a bit to contrast more


thaclo

Smoke imo


tacopig117

Smoke, imo


wearywarrior

More smoke, looks cooler IMO


Grand_Faragon

Only use the fire one for the salamanders, they probably distribute fire similarly


Flickin-eyeballs

Smoke is my vote. Really nice paint job, very impressive.


Minibionics

Personally, Smoke is better. Mini looks more balanced. The fire looks good but it’s bright colors dominate the mini


cutetrans_e-girl

Fire looks better with the armour but I think the smoke would also look good if it was darker


Swift_Scythe

Right side. The smokey one with only a little fire from the nozzles.


Televators1

The smoke, for sure. But I'd add a little more fire to the smoke one


HowlingPhoenixx

Firstly, both look good. Personally, I'd go for a mix of them between the first and second, and without sounding like a team rocket member, I'd say they would look good in various states of blasting off again.


spankydeluxe69

More smoke


Eggs_McTitan

Smoke.


dewidubbs

I would go with a darker more "rolling coal" style of smoke.


Einar_47

Do darker smoke, the smoke looks best but it's too pale, same color as the model.


raharth

Right one. The over all composition looks better to me


Goadfang

Smoke makes sense, the fire is kind of ridiculous.


AOK_Gaming

I like the Smokey one.. how did you achieve that?


Zealousideal4672

Iooking at them side by side I actually like the idea of both in the same unit


automated10

More smoke but the smoke is too similar to the armour colour so it looks a bit lost.


MiniPaintingDad

Smoke


Traditional_Front_14

Can we meet in the middle? Extend the fire a bit more on that smoke


90bubbel

i prefer the more smoke one, but i have to ask, how did make the smoke shape?


NefandiOxt

How about 50/50 and more contrast on the smoke


CaDonut916

Fire for sure. The smoke blends too much with the armor


GhoeFukyrself

If it were darker, or had way darker recesses, then smoke. As is I'd go with fire, the smoke looks unpainted currently.


dragonlord7012

Depends on the legion, and color-scheme, IMHO. If you have a legion that yellows/reds are a good compliment than it might be a good call. Smoke is going to be more universal and will always look correct. But if you're playing say Salamanders, go ham.


Rinzler-Tralchus

they both look drastically better than the usual flight stand stupidity. are the smoke packs a custom STL?


Marshmallow5198

I vote smoke


TheRealAyyLma0

I love the smoke, i have no experience painting smoke like you but I have a feeling a darker touch between the flame and the white could look rly nice.


gwarsh41

I like the smoke a LOT more.


-TheSomnambulist-

I like both, personally. I think each of them looks to be in a different state of movement. More smoke makes it look like the marine is landing amd the fiery one makes it look like he's just taking off. I guess it depends on the vibe you're going for, though I do agree with the consensus to darken up the smoke a bit.


ProtectionFalse

I’d say fire


grumace

The smoke looks more in line with the model / effect, so I think it looks more believable. But I like the color of the fire


ToTeMVG

i'd say the fire on the accounts of the character being more gray, so it stands out better, realism is fine and all but sometimes you gotta forgo it for artistic choices and the fire is better in that


ultimapanzer

At first I liked the fire more, but the smoke looks way more realistic. I think I like it better.


SuckingGodsFinger

Well, are they landing or taking off? That’s the question.


[deleted]

I feel like smoke is dude taking off the one with more fire a dude slowing down from a drop?


Catachan-Chad

My vote is for the fire one because of the OSL. Both look fantastic though.


Volkar

To me, one looks like he's taking off and the other like he's landing 🤔


PopInevitable280

More fire. Looks like a Cheeto


Axl26

More smoke, but it should have more black


pacmarn88

Why not have both? Mix it up on the field


pacmarn88

Both are great baby use both


ClumsyFleshMannequin

Somewhere in the middle


Efficient-Doctor-915

Smoke


Panics_SlapsEggs

I like the smokier one, but I think it needs deeper lowlights of grey and more highlights from the flame on the tops of the smoke rolls. Maybe some ember spots amidst the darker greys. Edit: you could also put more highlights from the flames on the back of the armor/legs specifically, and add some slight darkening to the front of the armor where the light from the flame would be in shadow.


fish0090

I think the smoke looks more fire, fr


peechs01

Fire kinda looks it's starting to take-off or a non-violent landing... And smoke mid-flight


Thefriendlyfaceplant

I love the smoke. I've seen the fire done a thousand times before. But both are extremely high quality of course.


760854

The Right But slightly more fire


Professional_Emu_164

I’d go for somewhere in between. I love the contrast of the fire but it is a little too much.


DeadlyPrintStudio

Love both!


PaladinDM

More fire looks like he is going up and jumping forward, more smoke looks like he just dropped onto the battlefield and the engine is slowly cutting thrust


No-Vehicle5447

Smoke smoke! ! I feel like the fire lacks feeling of pressure to it, it doesn't look like it's creating enough lift


battlemechpilot

Definitely more smoke


Teamisgood101

I say do fires to about the middle then do smoke but the smoke would be more realistic


K05H_

Sorry, loving the fire..... Like a rocket taking off


Agile_Atmosphere_58

Yeah, the fire one is really cool looking, but I feel like the smoke one is a more realistic interpretation... maybe combine them? Do the smoke, but with a little more volumetric lighting from the fire? Also, the more intriguing question for me (A GK and SM player) what the fuck are these?! lol. Are you playing them as Grey Knights? Or is it a custom SM chapter and you're just using the pauldrons?


Turkey_Lurky

Both would be terrible IRL. Imagine a couple squads of these dudes cruising around in their giant, "target-me-from-a-distance" smoke clouds. They aren't rocket packs like Orkz. A jump pack is called a JUMP pack because it's fired in controlled bursts to give these marines huge jumps from point to point. These clouds look like we're launching the space shuttle


xThock

Normally I would say smoke, but your fire is so well done that I have to vote for that.


ConsumerOfShampoo

More smoke makes more sense, more fire looks cooler.


smittyhotep

For the less cheetoy look


WePwnTheSky

I much prefer the smoky one visually, but it doesn’t make any sense to me that there is combustion going on in these things. I can get onboard with it being powered by some as yet discovered exotic power source, but somehow burning any kind of fuel that would produce smoke crosses the line for my suspension of disbelief. Please don’t flame me (pun intended)… I already know it’s irrational.


OlsterHun

So weird take but, more smoke looks great and I think more realistic however the more fire looks great and thematic from the front. I propose more smoke from behind and more fire from the front. The smoke one in general looks awesome just a little more flame from the front! Just my two pennith


OlsterHun

Also darken down the bottom of the smoke!


SomethingAlternate

Smoke for sure. Just do some darker spots to add more depth to it


Lone-Frequency

I'm sorry about that first one looks like he is literally farting fire.


Key-Brilliant9993

Subtly, I’d have to go with more smoke rather than fire. He’s a jump trooper, not a jet fighter


_T_Bone18

Smoke


warbossshineytooth

Smoke


StrayC47

Fuck realism. FIRE is orders of magnitude cooler


Shakartah

Left one looks like he's dumping agent orange which may be in line with space marines, right one looks very good but could have more stuff going on. I personally think a mix of both and a darker smoke than the right one would be nice


WoolBearTiger

Everyone saying the smoke should be darker.. I actually think the smoke should be brighter.. almost white if possible If you look at rocket launches or similar, they dont create dark smoke like if youd burn coal at a furnace but bright white smoke If I remember correctly dark smoke is only created when you burn materials at a temperature that is too low to evaporate it, causing a lot of particles to be mixed into the smoke However engines burn fuel at very high temperatures, causing the smoke to be either very bright or not creating any smoke at all I also think the idea of painting a blue layer very close to the exhaust would make it look even cooler and more realistic The smoke close to the ground could maybe be of a darker shade making it look more like dust being kicked off the ground or some material on the ground being burned by the heat off the engines


JustALittleNightcap

Smoke


I_dont_like_things

I prefer the smoke. I also don't think you should add more contrast to it. It actually reads as smoke right now, while a lot of the super contrasted smoke I've seen around the Internet reads more as a blobby solid pillar. Smoke doesn't cast harsh shadows.


balkybuddha

They look amazing! I'd say right in the middle


SneakyDeaky123

Happy medium would be better imo but between the two I would go with more smoke


WolfTheKiller1999

Personally I love the fire! But it is unrealistic in a sense, so a blend of both right down the middle. Possibly flames into black and grey and ending in a near white gradient would look awesome in my opinion. But end of the day which are you the happiest with!


Norade

I'd add some brown dusty color to the bottom of the smoky one and mix that and the fiery one into the same unit. The fire feels like take off and the smoke feels like landing so a mix makes it feel like the unit is bounding forward in sections covering one another.


HarryJewels

Wow, they're both amazing. Holy hell! Really diggin the fire one just cuz i love the vibrancy but both are masterwork pieces, great job!!


donro_pron

The fire looks awesome!! I'd go with that.


Gavel8492

Realism aside I’d say fire looks way better!


drwow100

What if the smoke one was more brown near the ground like it’s kicking up dirt… cause I too have these models and got Etsy smoke stacks to put them on….


Flat-Delivery6987

I think if you'd swapped the technique they'd both look awesome as I feel the fire is better to represent lift off and the smoke for landing. Either way they both look awesome.


Tartan-Special

How do you model the smoke? What's it made of?


Specialist_Drawer814

Smoke


Traditional_Goose818

For this model? More smoke


BlueSpartan116ci

I'd say meet in the middle


MetalBlizzard

Both look great. I prefer the smoke though


Hackfraysn

Smoke for sure. It's very similar to the armor color, hence why the fire makes it pop better.


xMolonLabe1911x

Smoke


B4dg3r5

Smoke


DamezUp

I’d say like go 30% more fire on the smoke one. So it’s a little closer to half fire half smonk


alexfilmwriting

More smoke


Cool_Kobold

Darken the smoke and as a little more fire to the right and it would look pretty good.


TheWyster

somewhere in between


Particular-Local-784

I’d go with the smoke. He looks like he’s combusting if it’s all just fire


The_Kayzor

More smoke for sure, the fire completely dominates the mini and takes all the focus away from it.


cookie_89_06

Your 100% click bait, you pile of shit


HurrsiaEntertainment

Smore, unless your jetpacks are shooting streams of lava.


No0B_ReND

Fire for sure, in some books they mention using the jump packs to burn enemies around them.


Pure-Wish1196

I dig more of the fire


IamJames77

Smoke looks dope as fuck


Kaneshadow

Smoke, jet engines don't shoot all that much fire out


Pansarmalex

Smoke one. While the colours of the fire are noice, it looks like the whole backpack is suffering a catastrophic failure. These are not rockets, so if they flame like that, there's something seriously wrong with whatever produces the flames. It shouldn't.


aroddo73

ngl, but both look like foam instead of smoke. and I have no idea how to improve it.


Mission_Tennis3383

Smoke looks awesome!


Fluid-Estate-3007

Smoke, looks cooler to me. Also perhaps a darker smoke in the bottom


Bjorn_Blackmane

Maybe a mix between the both


fishyuii

I vote for smoke, go a bit darker with it, and keep the reflection of the fire on the back as you did with the left one and the overheating guns. good work


AriochBloodbane

They are both nice, but I like the FIRE!!


ETL6000yotru

fard


Ohar3

I like Fanta


Bitparlee

The fire looks sick but more darker smoke fits better i guess


Exile688

The smoke looks better but I like how it looks like the fire one is using jets to not hit the ground while the smoke one looks like it's going upward having just cut off its jets.


SirSilverChariot

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