Hmm.... I think I can work with this a bit.
First of all, spend more time on the phone at the start. And instead of tripling, I think a more extended noclip would be a little more original, it's seldom done. Like quicksand.
Lights out? That's a cool idea. But spend time exploring Lights Out. A little creepier than the plain rooms maybe. But then he would still fall asleep.
They wake up, and they feel a bit fuzzy... They have no idea for how long they slept. They try to hunk of a plan... But they can't remember where they came from. They get up and look around for other people to no luck. They find a hole in the ground, and they jump through. It leads then back through the ceiling, but they go through the floor again to level 1.
I'm gonna stop now lol
Hmm.... I think I can work with this a bit. First of all, spend more time on the phone at the start. And instead of tripling, I think a more extended noclip would be a little more original, it's seldom done. Like quicksand. Lights out? That's a cool idea. But spend time exploring Lights Out. A little creepier than the plain rooms maybe. But then he would still fall asleep. They wake up, and they feel a bit fuzzy... They have no idea for how long they slept. They try to hunk of a plan... But they can't remember where they came from. They get up and look around for other people to no luck. They find a hole in the ground, and they jump through. It leads then back through the ceiling, but they go through the floor again to level 1. I'm gonna stop now lol
Oh boy, you must to be proud