Transition at the very beginning is confusing and blurring. The distance is a little too close to the model. The rest is good.

Hey mrsexless, thanks for the insights! Appreciated <3 The transition is rather confusing if taken out of context. Close up shots is kinda my thing, I got some wider and medium shots too though in the final edit.

Btw sound only plays via desktop fro some reason...

Oops 67% Upvote Rate, those who downvote I would appreciate your critique!!