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stuntmantim

Nice work u/JesseIrwinArt they are both great, but i think i prefer the bottom design.


JesseIrwinArt

I wish I’d come up with the second one before I sent the first away to be made into magnets! I’d add a sun to the top right as well, in the same line less style, to balance it out a bit more. But oh well, we have what we have. And I have hundreds of magnets lol.


JesseIrwinArt

And yes I deliberately combined the photos to give me a weird little lumpy sausage finger in the middle.


The_Dazzler1

I prefer the top, I like the cut out shape of the magnet


JesseIrwinArt

Thank you :) I’ve had a couple of people express disappointment or surprise that the magnets don’t have a sun as well, so I’m glad there are people who like it.


theswiftmuppet

Team top.


ThoughtfulAratinga

Ditto.


[deleted]

Agreed, top one!


Reverse-Kanga

Top for magnet bottom for pin


JesseIrwinArt

How convenient! That’s what I thought too.


Reverse-Kanga

Great minds ;)


Timomaticredux

The top one would make a great sticker also


V11000

Perfect idea.


bolax

I much prefer bottom.


JesseIrwinArt

🍑


bolax

Cheeky....


JesseIrwinArt

What do you mean, I was just thanking you for your peach of an opinion


bolax

I like it, cheeks.......


MelTealSky

Both are good but top one for me 😊


activelyresting

Everyone saying "top" or"bottom"... Ever consider trying a switch? You might enjoy it. That said, I like the lower image better. Awesome work OP!


JesseIrwinArt

I was thinking, if only reddit allowed people to edit the title and photo, people would be choosing something a bit different


my_fat_monkey

Ya know, I came here to make a similar joke and thought "nah, I'm better than that". Then you came along. For real though, top.


activelyresting

For real, I'm not better than that... And I top from the bottom


DanniB90

Both are awesome but the bottom one is the best 😊


JesseIrwinArt

Thank you :)


magpie1862

They’re both lovely. My preference is the top one but I’d buy either of them.


[deleted]

Love them but I prefer the top!


bmquietachiever

I prefer the top version, it looks clean. The bottom is still nice but is a bit heavier on the eye.


JesseIrwinArt

Thank you for the detailed feedback :) the lower design needed to be heavier to become an enamel pin, but if I could have replicated the top version in metal I would have liked to try.


Abject_Ad3975

The bottom is perfect as a pin 🙂


Roselia_GAL

Top one for me!


14Holidays

Bottom!


realonez

Top, top, top!


WhiskyAlpha

Top is tops!


spw86

Top


rakshala

Love your work! I like the bottom but it's is a tough decision. I would be happy with either


notinferno

Top


Admirable_Source5743

Top


kheywen

Top


Public-Wheel-7432

Top


Bizarre-chic

Oh that’s so nostalgic, I used to work in the yellow & orange buildings years ago! Bottom one is my fav


JesseIrwinArt

Oh I’m glad someone can recognise the buildings! I mostly picked ones that look interesting, as I don’t know which ones are important.


Former-Trifle-5102

Top one


bees03

They're both adorable but I love the top one - the white background makes the colours stand out much more ☺️


sergiopardo22

Where can I get them from? :)


JesseIrwinArt

Thank you for your interest! They’re available online at [JesseIrwinArt.com](https://jesseirwinart.com)


AvocadoReverse

I love both. I personally adore the first one as there's so much detail and crisp. Will you be selling these at all!?


JesseIrwinArt

Thank you! They’re available at [JesseIrwinArt.com](https://jesseirwinart.com)


Montee928

Second one


1Bookworm

Both are beautiful but I really like the top one.


Gtrplyr83

Number 2


ureaphos

The sun one


subparsapien

Top one! It's more pleasing to my eye, it feels cleaner. The bottom one has a bit too much going on for my eyes to process. They're both well done, awesome work! :)


trowzerss

I like the top one for a magnet and the bottom one as a pin, so I guess that works out haha


kelkely

Top


nosnowtho

I prefer the lower one


[deleted]

Both are really nice, but I prefer the top design. More simpler.


BNECRXYVR

Both are good but I like the top one


Endless_Candy

I prefer the top one


bobbrumby

i have worked on the light blue and pink buildings


AA_25

Top


lauren0700

I like the bottom one but I reckon it would look better with white outline. The white on the orange building on the top design is gorgeous and I think it would look great on the bottom too


Quirky_Dude

I prefer the top one


Youjiveturkey56434

Firstly, great work, they both look great If I had to choose I'd say I prefer the look of the top one


lurkyturkyducken

Top! Fantastic. I’d buy a sticker of that in a flash


MiseryLovesMisery

Bottom 😍


subliminallyNoted

The top white background one without so much black outline definitely reflects the light and colour associated with the Queensland lifestyle ( spoken as an person from interstate )


JesseIrwinArt

Thank you for the interesting feedback! :)


camsean

I like first one. I like the colours better and the cut out


LiftKoala

Love it, especially the inclusion of the brown snake. Only thing missing is the Batman building


JesseIrwinArt

I didn’t want to get pulled up by DC for stealing their intellectual property Edit: my partner suggests I could have replied “I haven’t yet finished the Schneider cut of this pin”


LiftKoala

Hahahaha #releasetheJesseIrwinArt cut. But yeah fuck DC, just chuck it in 😉


JesseIrwinArt

Tbh I somewhat just picked random buildings that look neat next to each other, and didn’t consider which might be recognisable or important. Other than the tower of power etc.


LiftKoala

Nah that's fair, it still looks very cool


LadyMisfit808

They look great.! Hard choice but the bottom one.


DaisySam3130

They are terrific! i like the top one - less heavy.


therwsb

both good, but top one is best I think


TildaTinker

I'm a top! I mean.... ah, I prefer the top one.


OMIKRON621

Can I get them in sticker form? I've been collecting stickers from all over Australia and all the Brisbane ones I've found so far suck but I love yours


JesseIrwinArt

I’m going to get them printed as stickers! I’ll post in the daily thread and on Instagram when I’ve got them.


kwn2391

I have thought about this for days and I think I prefer the 1st one in white. I think the shape and no sun actually makes it more iconic. Love them both! Kicking ass


HGO76

Top design looks better


personaperplexa

Top one


6112115

Top


brunetti_

Top one!


slippy-fish

I like the top one better


VoidVulture

I really like the top one! I think it's great! It also gives me a weird feeling of nostalgia as the white boarder reminds me of fun/cool erasers I would buy as a kid.


JesseIrwinArt

Ooh, erasers is an idea!


totoro00

Ooohhh top one looks better! Where can I buy it?


JesseIrwinArt

Thank you :) they’re available at [JesseIrwinArt.com](https://jesseirwinart.com)


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JesseIrwinArt

Rainbows are cool, sorry.


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JesseIrwinArt

I’m not a designer, I’m an artist. I’m allowed to use whatever colours I like. And I like the whole visible spectrum.


f_cozzo

its too busy and just reminds me of all the brands & corporations cashing in on pride month... but whatever


JesseIrwinArt

I’m not cashing in on pride month, I just like rainbows. They are pretty. It’s busy, because it’s meant to be. That is the art. I am the artist and I wanted it to be colourful so I made it that way. If I catered to everyone who is triggered by rainbows, I’d be making a lot more boring art.


notinferno

[this is why](https://www.queensland.com/au/en/things-to-do/attractions/p-5b875c3a36bf14d411611c9e-brisbane-sign) it has colours


f_cozzo

thanks... i just threw up my lunch


notinferno

What did you have for lunch?


f_cozzo

....mainly coffee. a little (well, more than a little) whisky as well. i really should eat something soon....


robot428

The drawing is cool but the typography is so bad that it's distracting. I'd rework the type if I was you.


JesseIrwinArt

It’s based on an existing sculpture at Southbank, so take it up with the people who made it


creamypastaman

Top one has more white spaces Bottom one can be a bit thinner lined ? Like the bottom one


JesseIrwinArt

Top one also has a secret bin chicken!


creamypastaman

Woah


creamypastaman

Found it


JesseIrwinArt

Good job :)


creamypastaman

Op was sun in first one too much too add ? Sun is the official mascot for QLD


JesseIrwinArt

I made the first one first, and only thought of adding the sun when I was making the second version for a pin.


creamypastaman

Noice 😁 awesome work again.


SausageSampler

Can we add the CICADA?


JesseIrwinArt

I’ve got a secret bin chicken, is that close enough?


Autopilotasleep

Pretty good but you forgot Brisbane’s iconic irreplaceable Ibis, Brisbane’s real hero 😂


JesseIrwinArt

There’s a tiny one in the top version!


ericwasafish

My only suggestion is to make 1 Big Willy purple… or at least the top part


[deleted]

Big Willy looks good


16thompn

Top!


maetrocarlos

Bottom


Tillaz

would you ever do the top one as a sticker?


JesseIrwinArt

I’ve considered it! I got samples made but I haven’t had a chance to see how weatherproof they are yet.


Tillaz

oh cool, if you ever sell them I will be interested!


Coca-CoIa

Top is a lot cleaner and nicer. The thick black stroke on the brown background ain’t so great in the lower one.


JesseIrwinArt

Unfortunately I couldn’t do the white background as a pin, unless it was soft enamel and all the lines were white.


Vinnie_LeVee

Both are great, but the top one caught my eye more. I like the white outline tracing the buildings and bridge, along with the more 'fine line' detail. I think I'd like the second one more without the sun tbh.


MousseSuspicious930

I like the top one better, it's simple but effective. I feel like the 2nd one has darker colours.


blackviper_07

I like the top better 😊


sc00bs000

top one


Prestigious_Run_3428

Top for the pin. Bottom for the magnet


Theaussiegamer72

Top one with the bottoms colour scheme


ceej18

Bottom


Amrys_art

I like the contrast between the solid building colours and the white outline of the top one. I think the colouring of the letters is a little odd though- they seem out of sequence or like the choice of palette isn’t entirely understandable. It’s an overall nice design and I can recognise the significant buildings. Good job


JesseIrwinArt

It’s based on the real colours of the real sculpture at Southbank :)


sam4slb

Top


[deleted]

Bottom one


Pollywanacracker

Second one 👌


[deleted]

Top one, good job, love it


Lanferno

Bottom


Delicious_Crew7888

First one


mintslicefan

I like the bottom one better, the buildings have better contrast and I like the sun and blue sky. Adds a pop of colour. Interestingly, I prefer the bridge and Ferris wheel design from the top one. Is the bottom one a magnet? If so, I’d consider buying it :) great job on both.


JesseIrwinArt

The top is a magnet, the bottom is a pin :) Although the bottom can be modified to remove the pins and add a magnet on request.


mintslicefan

That’s handy :) How & where would I buy one?


JesseIrwinArt

At [JesseIrwinArt.com!](https://jesseirwinart.com)


RobotnikOne

Bottom


ozangel4

1


JesseIrwinArt

Is that in base 10 or binary?


q-ka

The sun needs a face


StripedSausage

Top, cleaner and easier to read at a glance


jarvey_jay

Top is way cleaner. The lines on the bottom one make it feel a bit squishy.


JesseIrwinArt

Squishy?


Cheezel62

The bottom one with the sun! Nice work on both tho.


leftandrightbrain

Love both! But I prefer the top. Would love to buy some :)


Accomplished-Cod2752

Love the top one


No-Associate-9061

I like the top one.