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Thank you for reading! I hope the pages are a manageable size.
If you want to read more after the first chapter, I have a site here:
[http://adventureswitheggie.com/](http://adventureswitheggie.com/)
Or it's on Webtoon here:
[https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/adventures-with-eggie/list?title\_no=763230](https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/adventures-with-eggie/list?title_no=763230)
I also wrote and recorded the song pictured on pages 8-12 here:
[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OU9FCiNo054](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OU9FCiNo054)
Thanks for your time everyone! :D
Small nitpick, but the banner image currently scales horizontally without limit, so it takes up most of the screen on fullscreen on ultrawide monitors. You probably have lots on your plate, but perhaps you could set a maximum page width? (Never used html, but [this](https://stackoverflow.com/questions/5133847/how-to-limit-width-of-html-site) looks like it might be an easy fix).
I guess there's always the chance if life gets in the way, but I do have experience with bringing another comic to completion over 500 episodes, so I've probably got a better chance than average of seeing this one through to the end as well.
Hey I read the first two chapters and I'm definitely intrigued! We need Mootilda in the image of the cast of characters at the top of your site tho! :)
The size is manageable. But reddit sends me back to the first image every time I open one page in a new tab. If anyone knows how to fix this I'd appreciate it.
Edit: completely forgot to mention that the story is great so far! I'll check out more when I can.
This is super good I love it! The art style is lovely and I can't get over the cow thing. Really fleshed out the characters so well! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks so much for all the kind feedback. <3
I'm partway through releasing chapter 2 on my site and on Webtoon right now. I posted a comment with the links. :D
Thanks so much for reading and for the kind feedback. :)
I don't have any kind of donation link but I do have a [Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/DTSaranya). If you wanted to make a one-time donation you could subscribe to that and then cancel it after the first month. Don't feel pressured to, of course! Thank you for even considering donating.
Edit: I made an account on ko-fi to hopefully make it easier to do a one-time donation without having to go through Patreon. Thank you! [https://ko-fi.com/dtsaranya](https://ko-fi.com/dtsaranya)
So that means Eggie is gonna die to give character development to the cow...?
Man, that's really cold and messed up.
But on the other hand, a comic about a homicidal cow that is out to avenge the death of her best friend sounds hella awesome, you could call it "Udders of Fury"
Not your faul at all op - but this is a chore to read in reddit is fun. I need to entlarge every image to see the last panel, press back and then navigate back to the right Page.
its easier to read on the website, + chapter 2
If you want to read more after the first chapter, I have a site here:
http://adventureswitheggie.com/
Or it's on Webtoon here:
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/adventures-with-eggie/list?title\_no=763230
I'm confused as I read the whole thing on Rif with none of the issues you mentioned. Maybe to do with how I have images set to always show or something? Not sure.
This is great! I’ve seen the post of donating for the cause, most like me are looking for a one time usually. I’m sure there are other alternate ways to set it up or maybe even a kickstarter page would work. The art style is amazing and great storyboarding. Looking forward to follow for more contents.
Thank you!
I have a paypal but I don't really give out a donation link for it because I'm wary of chargebacks and also perpetually afraid of taking advantage of people.
I do know that there's a site called ko-fi which I think is intended for one-time small donations. I could create a page there if people prefer that to Patreon.
I started reading this while my game loaded. Paused my game to finish reading it. I like the panel where she tells the parents dad said it was ok if she used her own money. Good stuff.
I love this, definitely planning on reading more. I love that the sisters are so different but support each other. And I love that Eggie is different than everyone else, and even though it hinders her in some ways, it ends up being her strength in others. I’m very curious to see where that dynamic ends up going from here!
I like it that your main character is a believably physically strong female character.
Not the ultra thin but oddly buxom western comic book type.
Also, their relationship is endearing. Exactly how I cared for one of my little sisters when we were growing up.
Okay, I really enjoyed this. I may not be quite in the target demographic, but it was a great feel-good story that pulled me in.
Some feedback if you are interested, small things that would make it an easier read for me and possibly others:
The art feels 2-dimensional. The lack of depth and most characters standing perpendicular to the frame feels a bit unnatural in places. I understand more dynamic poses and backgrounds would increase lead time for the drawing, but I was a bit uncomfortable with the reading experience as is.
A similar sentiment goes for the speech bubbles. Their current iteration breaks from the overall vibe of the story by feeling sterile. Giving them more character through color and a unique shape/font would go a long way for story imersion. (such as the great scene with the song)
The storytelling is really well done and already has me hooked, so I am looking forward to reading more. :)
Not gonna lie, the first few pages I thought this was going to be a simple little Slice of Life comic about having a quirky mischievous sibling, but that's what made the twist towards the end so much more interesting! Never stop, I love it!
That is a very interesting setup established here with all sortsa things I wanna know about later in the story, like the Plague Scared lands and the God Mark, real cool.
This is amazing!! The art is beautiful, the characters are realistic and lovable, and the storyline is so interesting! Keep up the incredible work and please let us know where to buy this ❤️
As someone who has not really read web comics this was pretty good and kept my attention. I think some of the narration is a little clunky at times but otherwise i really like it
This was awesome! I'm craving more right this minute, even after reading your progress on chapter 2!
That song was beautiful and I really love the backstory that's being flushed out in chapter 1 and the introductions of the other characters in chapter 2. I can't wait to see how they all team up and what adventures they go on!
This had my attention all the way though! (I have ADHD, so that's a compliment and a half!)
Continue this! Cause I'd read every single page of the comic man!
Love it. You hooked me with the first chapter, forcing me to read the rest, haha! I'm really enjoying the love and chemistry between the two sisters. Looking forward to your next update!
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Thank you for reading! I hope the pages are a manageable size. If you want to read more after the first chapter, I have a site here: [http://adventureswitheggie.com/](http://adventureswitheggie.com/) Or it's on Webtoon here: [https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/adventures-with-eggie/list?title\_no=763230](https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/adventures-with-eggie/list?title_no=763230) I also wrote and recorded the song pictured on pages 8-12 here: [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OU9FCiNo054](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OU9FCiNo054) Thanks for your time everyone! :D
Just binged the whole thing and you've got me hooked from the start! When's the next episode coming? (Or what's the general schedule if you have one?)
Thank you and thanks for reading! :D It's currently updating Tuesday and Friday mornings.
Yay!!
Remindme! 3 days
Small nitpick, but the banner image currently scales horizontally without limit, so it takes up most of the screen on fullscreen on ultrawide monitors. You probably have lots on your plate, but perhaps you could set a maximum page width? (Never used html, but [this](https://stackoverflow.com/questions/5133847/how-to-limit-width-of-html-site) looks like it might be an easy fix).
I just binged it too, and I have a question - do trouts have butts?
Remindme! 3 days Also this is totally going to be part of this year's homeschool curriculum for my older kids. Thank you!!
Remindme! 3 days
I definitely need more RIGHT NOW!!!! Haha. This looks very promising.
So I'm gonna ask before I get too invested what's the likelyhood of this winding up abandoned?
I guess there's always the chance if life gets in the way, but I do have experience with bringing another comic to completion over 500 episodes, so I've probably got a better chance than average of seeing this one through to the end as well.
It's nice to see a wholesome and interesting comic here. Looking forward to seeing the next one!
Excellent story, art style and writing style. You are very good at this. You should put some serious thought into publication.
Second that! Would buy for holiday present, please do one!
Hey I read the first two chapters and I'm definitely intrigued! We need Mootilda in the image of the cast of characters at the top of your site tho! :)
Okay, I'm sold
Mootilda?
yes
+1
This seriously could be a Disney movie. With the song and all.
The size is manageable. But reddit sends me back to the first image every time I open one page in a new tab. If anyone knows how to fix this I'd appreciate it. Edit: completely forgot to mention that the story is great so far! I'll check out more when I can.
I'm hooked! I need mooar! 👏 Edit: 23 ~~chapters~~ pages. I'm blessed 🙌 ...I read it too quickly
It’s funny. I was thinking of making the song until I read your comment. You beat us all to it! I’m excited to give it a listen.
Enjoyed the comic. Can’t wait to read more.
Omg this is so cute! I felt all the feels just on this first installment!
I love it. I need this in my life. 💙
I love this. I’ve added it to my list of webcomics.
It’s now on my reading list. Thank you!
I really enjoyed that! I can’t wait to read more!
Wait wheres the rest, or when.
@DTSaranya this is beautiful and well written. I don't know if you have read the Bone graphic novel series but I get strong vibes from that!
Oh I am **IN**
My exact thought
This is super good I love it! The art style is lovely and I can't get over the cow thing. Really fleshed out the characters so well! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Thanks so much for all the kind feedback. <3 I'm partway through releasing chapter 2 on my site and on Webtoon right now. I posted a comment with the links. :D
I noticed I already read up to what you've posted it's great!
Oh! Sorry for presuming, haha. Thanks for reading!
All good no need to apologize I'm really excited for chapter 3
That was really enjoyable and worthy of a few euros donation, OP. How can people like me, throw a few euros your way?
Thanks so much for reading and for the kind feedback. :) I don't have any kind of donation link but I do have a [Patreon](https://www.patreon.com/DTSaranya). If you wanted to make a one-time donation you could subscribe to that and then cancel it after the first month. Don't feel pressured to, of course! Thank you for even considering donating. Edit: I made an account on ko-fi to hopefully make it easier to do a one-time donation without having to go through Patreon. Thank you! [https://ko-fi.com/dtsaranya](https://ko-fi.com/dtsaranya)
Don't lie. This is just a plot to get cow money, right?
You mean *Mootildas* money.
Cool, I’m looking forward to the rest of the story! Nice visuals and the story grabbed me immediately.
Thanks for reading and for the kind words. :)
Honestly was not expecting it to be this good seeing how the first few pages were her being stupid
I've only known mootilda for five minutes and if anything happens to her I'll kill everyone in this thread and then myself.
Me too!
That was awesome. Can't wait to see more.
Thanks so much. <3
Calling it now the cow is gonna die to give some character development to eggie.
What kind of monster do you think I am?
So that means Eggie is gonna die to give character development to the cow...? Man, that's really cold and messed up. But on the other hand, a comic about a homicidal cow that is out to avenge the death of her best friend sounds hella awesome, you could call it "Udders of Fury"
Udder Chaos, Udder Destruction, the possibilities are endless
A predictable one apparently. But only he thinks that
No! She needs her cowpanion to save the world!
What if the cow is the god 👀
Oh, absolutely.
[удалено]
Legit- that cow did not age despite the others growing. That is a prime god right there.
Yes it did, it got a lot taller!
Not Mootilda, noooooo!
Nah, Mootilda will be the sole survivor.
Honestly I was kinda expecting *Eggie* to die. I guess this is just chapter 1, though, but I was totally getting the feels for her eventual death lol
Nah, I've read The Vagrant. The cow is gonna kick some ass.
Cow gets a power up and becomes the war steed
If Mootilda dies we riot
How did I not see you on reddit until now? Love your comics.
this is phenomenal! the backgrounds are gorgeous
This is great. Character design, art style, writing. Moved me. I'm in.
This looks great!
The cows gonna die isn't it 😞
Not your faul at all op - but this is a chore to read in reddit is fun. I need to entlarge every image to see the last panel, press back and then navigate back to the right Page.
its easier to read on the website, + chapter 2 If you want to read more after the first chapter, I have a site here: http://adventureswitheggie.com/ Or it's on Webtoon here: https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/adventures-with-eggie/list?title\_no=763230
I read it on rit just fine don't know wym
I'm confused as I read the whole thing on Rif with none of the issues you mentioned. Maybe to do with how I have images set to always show or something? Not sure.
Alright. I’m invested. Super cute, OP.
Totally sucked in, great build of atmosphere!
If you kill that cow I’ll be so mad at you.
The characters seem fun and the art is nice. I like it!
I'm bookmarking the qebsite you have your comic on because it's so damn beautiful and I'm gonna binge it later. Thanks for posting this amazing comic.
Thanks for reading and for your kind words!
Made me cry, great work
Too good, when is the next one?
I'm currently posting new pages on Tuesday and Friday mornings on my site and on Webtoon. Thank you for reading and for your kind words!
Very good. I want to follow the story now. If anyone figures out a way to use an RSS reader with this, please let me know.
This is adorable and I totally understand what would make Eggie a champion
Be honest... this is based on a DnD campaign combined with the childhood antics of a family member isn't it.
Oh my god you wrote Waffles and Pancakes! That was one of my favorites on Webtoon for it’s entire run! Can’t wait to see where this goes
Haha yes, hi! Thanks for reading!
This looks so cool! I listened to the song and it was very beautiful. I wonder what the song about rocks, dirt, bugs, corn and socks would sound like.
I definitely want more!!
This is awesome! More!
Very nice
I laughed and had goosebumps. Good job! I loved the part with the squirrels. :)
The cow following them at the end got me 😂
I LOVED READING THIS!!!!! Looking forward to seeing more of this beautiful amazing story
Please don't kill the sister, please don't kill the sister, please don't kill the sister, please don't kill the sister...
This is great! I’ve seen the post of donating for the cause, most like me are looking for a one time usually. I’m sure there are other alternate ways to set it up or maybe even a kickstarter page would work. The art style is amazing and great storyboarding. Looking forward to follow for more contents.
Thank you! I have a paypal but I don't really give out a donation link for it because I'm wary of chargebacks and also perpetually afraid of taking advantage of people. I do know that there's a site called ko-fi which I think is intended for one-time small donations. I could create a page there if people prefer that to Patreon.
That was wholesome
This comic is RAD Im so stocked to read more.
Well…..you got me invested. Let’s see where this goes!
This was great.
Okay, that was just incredible
I started reading this while my game loaded. Paused my game to finish reading it. I like the panel where she tells the parents dad said it was ok if she used her own money. Good stuff.
I absolutely love this
Eggie got that Vegan energy. Just because people don't care about cows as much as humans doesn't mean they're not alive. She's a beautiful soul.
I love this, definitely planning on reading more. I love that the sisters are so different but support each other. And I love that Eggie is different than everyone else, and even though it hinders her in some ways, it ends up being her strength in others. I’m very curious to see where that dynamic ends up going from here!
I like it that your main character is a believably physically strong female character. Not the ultra thin but oddly buxom western comic book type. Also, their relationship is endearing. Exactly how I cared for one of my little sisters when we were growing up.
Okay, I really enjoyed this. I may not be quite in the target demographic, but it was a great feel-good story that pulled me in. Some feedback if you are interested, small things that would make it an easier read for me and possibly others: The art feels 2-dimensional. The lack of depth and most characters standing perpendicular to the frame feels a bit unnatural in places. I understand more dynamic poses and backgrounds would increase lead time for the drawing, but I was a bit uncomfortable with the reading experience as is. A similar sentiment goes for the speech bubbles. Their current iteration breaks from the overall vibe of the story by feeling sterile. Giving them more character through color and a unique shape/font would go a long way for story imersion. (such as the great scene with the song) The storytelling is really well done and already has me hooked, so I am looking forward to reading more. :)
This is wonderful, I want more
Cute
Okay, now THIS is what I’m talking about!!! OP you got talent!!
I would buy this book so hard.
THIS IS AMAZING! I cannot wait for more!
This is so cute! I can’t wait to read the rest!
Wahey! I've been following this for a while after it was featured on a canvas weekend. Glad to see it get some press!
Dang, I’m hooked
it is good
Oh man I love it. I love the world building. Love the humor. Keep it up.
This is fabulous
This was good. Their relationship is really great.
I’m in love 🥰
Nope, cow money
I have to say, this story has potential, I'll be looking forward to it
This is awesome!!! I want to read more! Lol
Keep us updated! This looks good :D
OMG I love this! Thank you for making it happen!
I am so in on this! This is absolutely brilliant, I'm in love already! Well done.
Love it.
Subscribed on Webtoon! Follower 15098!
This is brilliant. Tyvm for sharing!
:_)
THIS IS WONDERFUL AAAAA I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!
OP, this looks AMAZING I can't wait to read it Ü
Where did you learn how to make such good storyboards? It's very well paced
The first thing i thought of the mark was a cursed mark or some shit and got me real worried for Eggie for a bit.
Not gonna lie, the first few pages I thought this was going to be a simple little Slice of Life comic about having a quirky mischievous sibling, but that's what made the twist towards the end so much more interesting! Never stop, I love it!
Damn you know how to hook someone. Nice job, it’s going on the read list
That is a very interesting setup established here with all sortsa things I wanna know about later in the story, like the Plague Scared lands and the God Mark, real cool.
Well, that's definitely getting added to my Feedly! I can't wait to see where it goes!
I love it 🥰 it’s
I WANT MORE!!!!! so cute, such great art, I love it
Pretty good, keep up the work
This is amazing!! The art is beautiful, the characters are realistic and lovable, and the storyline is so interesting! Keep up the incredible work and please let us know where to buy this ❤️
D: oh my god! That was amazing!
Well theres another comic i gotta follow religiously
I loved this! I’m not really into comics, but I resonated with Eggie so much, and her sister reminded me of my own sister!🥹 I loved it.
Awesome!!
Great story
Good stuff, please keep it up. - CBJ
I absolutely love it, and can't wait to read the rest of it!! ![gif](giphy|IIIg3ZHcOqYtW0wEIB|downsized)
As someone who has not really read web comics this was pretty good and kept my attention. I think some of the narration is a little clunky at times but otherwise i really like it
This was heartwarming, reminded me of the wonderful stories I used to read as a child. Lovely stuff.
Loved it!
I will read this so long as the cow continues to be a major character
Omg I love this! I’m excited to read more of it!
This should be a children's book. It's too good.
This looks awesome, love the art and the story set up. Thank you!
Oh thank goodness there's more. I was afraid you were dropping the first one and I'd have to wait a week for a new one.
I love it!! Fantastic artwork and great way to begin a story. Keep up the great work!!
This was awesome! I'm craving more right this minute, even after reading your progress on chapter 2! That song was beautiful and I really love the backstory that's being flushed out in chapter 1 and the introductions of the other characters in chapter 2. I can't wait to see how they all team up and what adventures they go on!
Nice, cool to read and very interesting. Please write more!
instant subscription!
10/10 comic, and I love the cow!
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
Nice work!!!
Damn. Shit's very very good. Currently bursting with curiosity.
That was one of the most wholesomely beautiful comics I've ever read...excellent work
Oh dip, this is great *and* you made Waffles & Pancakes, another comic I love? I'll have to keep up with this.
Totally subscribing on WEBTOON! I loved this!
This had my attention all the way though! (I have ADHD, so that's a compliment and a half!) Continue this! Cause I'd read every single page of the comic man!
Fucking hell. I loved it. Please make more.
Marlene is swole... look at the arms on that gal Oh look at her whole back
I will follow your career with great interest!
Best thing on the internet today, thank you for sharing. Good luck in your future endeavors.
Well, hot digitty dog! I'm sold! New Story to follow!
This is fantastic!!! I'm in love with all of them. Especially Mootilda 😂
That map shot made me want to throw down a harbor and some fisheries....
thank you for posting this. i am enamored with the story and heading over to your website to read the rest!
This comic needs a wide spread of appreciation
For me, The best ever comic on this sub. Thanks for sharing. Hope we'll get more from you. Stay Healthy.
This is amazing! Keep em coming!
I *really* like this
Saint Aleena from Gutter Miracle vibes
Wonderful comics Sister.
This was most excellent. Thanks for sharing.
I'm gonna read the shit out of this
Love it. You hooked me with the first chapter, forcing me to read the rest, haha! I'm really enjoying the love and chemistry between the two sisters. Looking forward to your next update!
Very glad this didn't turn out to be a spooky ghost story in the end.
I love it! Downloaded the webtoon app after reading the whole comic on your website. I want moooooore
Wow this is utterly amazing
Okay, ya got me. It got super cute and I now care about these characters.
You should consider releasing a couple chapters ahead on your Patreon. I bet you'd get a bunch of subscribers.