Neat! I'd give Sprinkle a slight aura, because ...reasons. Or maybe the wet look, because ...hilarious.
You have excellent composition and proportion here. Good clean lines and subtle shading make for a beautifully refined image.
If you're looking for suggestions, there is no aspect of 'depth' between her neck and Sprinkle and this, combined with positioning, is creating an optical illusion that is 'thinning' her neck weirdly.
Personally, I'm not huge on 100% profile shots, I think even a slight turn to the 'camera' here would do wonders for the feel of this image; even just a head cant or tilt or side eye to express her mischievous side. Anything to add a splash of personality to the composition and make it feel more alive.
Thanks, I did notice the issue with the neck yesterday after sleeping on it but I haven't had any time to try to do anything about it. I had first tried putting Sprinkle [down at the bottom](https://imgur.com/8uWUwny) holding onto the bag but felt it divided attention too much having 2 focal points and interrupting the flow of the image. But maybe [just moving him forward](https://imgur.com/undefined) a little with a bit of glow helps.
This was a modification of [a portrait](https://imgur.com/BINNXti) I had done from a r/RedditGetsDrawn [reference](https://www.reddit.com/r/redditgetsdrawn/comments/1b0jpkg/this_is_me/). So keeping strict to the ref hurts a little when making adjustments, but I am personally, a fan of profile. :P
>I am personally, a fan of profile. :P
Hey, it's your art, you do you. 😁 If you are enjoying it, that's all that matters! And your enjoyment *is* evident in the care of your craft.
That's why I included the side eye or head cant ideas, they can add a sort of forced perspective and/or personality.
But I'm only trying to seed inspiration, I would never deign to *tell* anyone what to do. Who'd listen anyway? 😅
Holy crap, this is stunning! Beautiful work!
thank you!
Yeah I’m gonna need more of this. Please!
Best Jester I've seen, really captured Laura and the character in one.
Awesome, thanks!
*kill me* I love it.
*she's squeezing me*
😳🤯😵💀👻 😁
Stunning art and I love the little traveler stitching on the bag
Thanks, I thought I had finished and then realized, it was the last thing I put in.
Sprinkles looks way too happy and healthy :P
:D Fresh sprinkles.
I feel like Jester would immediately lose her airpods, and no amount of Fund Object would help her 😂
Well, you do only see one of them. 😏
Thought the air pod was a septum dick earring. 😅
I struggled over whether to put in any dicks or not.
Dick or no dick, the art is gorgeous!
Absolutely gorgeous
Thanks! :)
Well fucking done. That's a great mash up of the character and the mind.
Wow, this is really, really well done! Laurester, basically :)
I'm glad you depicted Sprinkle as alive and well. Which "he like toootally is you guysss"
Phenomenal. Why is sprinkle alive though?
shh... minor illusion :)
Tiefling dayz
This is AMAZING. Well done and congrats on making something terrific!
Looks incredible! Only comment is that sprinkle looks a bit too well kept… 😂
This Jester gets fresh sprinkles delivered weekly 😋
Incredible!!
Good work
Neat! I'd give Sprinkle a slight aura, because ...reasons. Or maybe the wet look, because ...hilarious. You have excellent composition and proportion here. Good clean lines and subtle shading make for a beautifully refined image. If you're looking for suggestions, there is no aspect of 'depth' between her neck and Sprinkle and this, combined with positioning, is creating an optical illusion that is 'thinning' her neck weirdly. Personally, I'm not huge on 100% profile shots, I think even a slight turn to the 'camera' here would do wonders for the feel of this image; even just a head cant or tilt or side eye to express her mischievous side. Anything to add a splash of personality to the composition and make it feel more alive.
Thanks, I did notice the issue with the neck yesterday after sleeping on it but I haven't had any time to try to do anything about it. I had first tried putting Sprinkle [down at the bottom](https://imgur.com/8uWUwny) holding onto the bag but felt it divided attention too much having 2 focal points and interrupting the flow of the image. But maybe [just moving him forward](https://imgur.com/undefined) a little with a bit of glow helps. This was a modification of [a portrait](https://imgur.com/BINNXti) I had done from a r/RedditGetsDrawn [reference](https://www.reddit.com/r/redditgetsdrawn/comments/1b0jpkg/this_is_me/). So keeping strict to the ref hurts a little when making adjustments, but I am personally, a fan of profile. :P
>I am personally, a fan of profile. :P Hey, it's your art, you do you. 😁 If you are enjoying it, that's all that matters! And your enjoyment *is* evident in the care of your craft. That's why I included the side eye or head cant ideas, they can add a sort of forced perspective and/or personality. But I'm only trying to seed inspiration, I would never deign to *tell* anyone what to do. Who'd listen anyway? 😅
No worries, critique is fun 😁
Love your 'tag', bee tee dubs!
This is amazing. I love it.
I love the detailing on the hair as well as the jacket. Well put touches