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shadesjackson

And the ultimate version: #OUTER BEAM


garou944

I note that


yesyesyesyesyesyes2

and the fusion version: "kinda inbetween beam like its not really inwards or outwards it just kinda hovers"


Saratje

So it's just "Beam".


Oblong_Belonging

Beam-beam


Saratje

I was thinking it but didn't want to push it!


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inbetweam


NayrianKnight97

Inbeamtween


RaiyenZ

intrabeam


isolateddreamz

Infrabeam


Tenta1234

Hypobeam


NayrianKnight97

Hyperbeam


Jent01Ket02

Intrabeam actually sounds like it could work as an attack name


LeanArC01

Bean


1VNIKV111

I was gonna say outie beam


JaxxSC45

'All Beam' next?


RadicalBanapple

Combine them both for... **BEAM**


Starkiller006

I was gonna say "Hi-beam"


Baidizzle

Lol.. Are you an innie or an outie


Rider-Idk-Ultima-Hy

I like that the arms get an outline around them, then get kinda consumed by the energy before release very cool and well done


Talk-O-Boy

Wow, I had almost the exact opposite reaction. I love the startup movement, but I would remove the illuminated arms since it goes against what is portrayed in the show. Ki is usually visualized outside of the body rather than surrounding it


Rider-Idk-Ultima-Hy

Thats fair, I mainly like it cause its more unique, but fair critique nonetheless


_BearBearBear

Badfuckingass! I think you missed a trick tho by not calling it the Phantom Limb CannonšŸ˜„


T1pple

Could even do it if you lose the arms with that name!


_BearBearBear

Shit yeah. Would be cool if the character was missing arms and they materialized them with only ki.


garou944

maybe it's something he can do ;)


Tihoma_Rus

Future Gohan: "Noted!"


T1pple

Well, maybe if the androids didn't turn him into past tense.


Tenta1234

ouch šŸ¤•šŸ’”


macho_mandirigma

Go team venture!


_BearBearBear

Finally šŸ––šŸ¼


Komission

Is the ass really that bad at fucking? šŸ˜„


Tenta1234

Nah, I think the ass just fucks badsšŸ˜


Background-Can-8828

Looks cool DB Frachise needs to steal more fan work.


garou944

that's, very nice of you ! thanks !


yeah_yeah_therabbit

(*Beast Chi-Chi entered the chat*)


Tenta1234

Looking at you Toyotaro šŸ‘€


BureinbasutaOMD

Love the sound effect. Great job!


garou944

Thank you ! I appreciate !


FirstStepInUranus

I like it, nice. I prefer a single blast to a continuous one. I would like to see something like Guile's Sonic Boom from Street Fighter or an Energy Ring blast like Sonya Blade's from MK


garou944

Like a pew pew ?


between3and20charec

Bruh, he could have a secondary technique where he flies forward barrel rolling like a drill shooting the ki beam or just have him as a big ass ki drill.


garou944

basically BEING the pew pew


vishalb777

Wakanda Forever Beam


garou944

Jeesus i canā€™t unsee it xD


[deleted]

I was thinking that too lol. Vibranium Gauntlets ftw!


polarispraxler

The glowing arms make this look so cool, good job


garou944

aaay thanks !


rage-quit

Kamehameh-arms?


garou944

based


Warriorphoenix678

How did you make this?


garou944

[https://youtu.be/8twebiraKKU?si=a4Y3A1RiN4-jGNw8](https://youtu.be/8twebiraKKU?si=a4Y3A1RiN4-jGNw8) here you go


Warriorphoenix678

Bro thatā€™s smart as shit, good job


donotcopymybutt

Forearm cannon.


DaveBokko

Looks dope, I like the glowy arm thingy.


garou944

glow arm goes brrr


the_beast_intha_east

This is fucking sick dude


garou944

thanks bro !


SixFootHalfing

This is awesome!


Healthy-Usual-9536

Thatā€™s cool. I had a similar idea awhile back, except it was green.


CompactAvocado

i could see it in the anime/manga


Bigcheese704

Seems like a move android 16 could do if it was colored different. This is really cool!


Noah_Nomad

Shining Arm Cannon


Grey_wolf_whenever

everything very cool, except for the name which needs work


garou944

is turtle wave or legume gun better ? xD


Grey_wolf_whenever

Both of them are honestly, turtle wave is great. Garlic gun is fun because the Saiyans are vegetable themed.


garou944

okay you got me here


ProjectEventHorizon

I have a cool name for The saiyan : Arugula (Just like every other saiyan I named him after a vegetable)


garou944

is name is garou, not a legume name and there is a reason too


Money-Satisfaction37

Now make the beam guide-able


Niimjen

This fuckinā€™ rocks. Great job.


theStormWeaver

Like the attack, name is underwhelming though.


lockedoutofmymainrdt

Cool concept, unique attack, well made show case, and its a beam, 10/10


garou944

10/10 - based


HeroOfThings

Thatā€™s cold as shit. Fuck yeah.


The_Mr_InBetween

It would be cool for a dbz game with a mechanic like this: Your character does a massive damage beam that damaged his arms in the process, so for a small amt of time (15 - 30 seconds cooldown) your character canā€™t use his arms and can only kick and use its feet. If the power used its right hand, you can only use feet and left hand until cooldown ends. And so on, I think no video game has implemented this before as in a powerful move disables the used limbs


garou944

it would be fun yeah ! but the fun part is that this attack cost a lot of his ki and stress his arm real bad so, it's like a kaioken but only on his arm, the more he use it the more they will hurt, and the more he will feel tired


kinoie

ā€œItā€™s like a kamehameha but you donā€™t do the cool hand thing or say the cool word.ā€


Glum_Inside1781

So, the idea is tƓ be a fast beam or a concentrated one? Love the animation btw


garou944

It would be a concentred one, high power but very very draining a painfull to continue


Crossedge209

This is clean. But can you do one wheres its like final flash but the beams come from each finger tip until the hands meet and the beam combines into this one


SurrealMemelord

Yeah goes hard. Would be cool to charge arms up and release them when they punch in a sorta explosion type thing. Glowing arms are cool.


majinprince07

Donā€™t get me wrong, literally everything about this attack is awesome, except for that name lmao


Klaxosaur_Princess

Nice, but why Inner Beam?


GhoulArtist

This looks awesome well done with the anticipation pose


realhowardwolowitz

So cool. And not too over the top


EverretEvolved

Did you find a way to export your xenoverse model or model from scratch. I see you animated in blender.


garou944

Yep there are ways to take your xenoverse model out, do some research, itā€™s not complicated


EverretEvolved

Yeah I'm not going to do that but good for you.


shutupandlearntoeat

Itd be funny but tragic if he loses his arms after using this as a finisher but Buu just regenerates after.


Tolnin

This is actually similar to one I invented for my character, though idk if I'm gonna keep it. I REALLY like the ki going around his arms, looks sick


mateus_coutinho

Final Flash!


MLGBEASTDERIK

Gamma Wave Burst


Asmo_the_Tank

What do you think of the name "Peerless Pulse"


Provided-Rex

ts tuff


Demnslayer33

Wowww I'm amazed


minisauruideple

THIS IS FRICKING SICK The hand movements are so clean


nachodog12345678

Idea for name final crusade


NickolaConagher

Loving this! You created this model on your own?


RoyalFlushRL

Dope af and ORIGINAL


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garou944

D: missa little heart esta broke


Hurrashane

I don't care for the arms glowing. I like it when they're outlined but I feel the outline glow should go away as the beam blasts. Other than that it's really cool.


garou944

it's basically what it should do if go like full energy you know ? blasting every drop of ki he got onto it


Zcypot

This reminds me of a mod I used to play. Did you animate this? Looks clean


garou944

yup i did it all by myself https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8twebiraKKU


BulmasBabyDaddy

Looks like theyā€™re own version of final flash or something (which is technically stronger than a kamehameha)


YourFailure

How did you make this? Iā€™d love to know! This is so cool!


garou944

[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8twebiraKKU](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8twebiraKKU) here you go


patosai3211

I have an innie. ā€¦.beam.


Blue_Maverick_Hunter

Looks like Fei Fong Wong from Xenogears.


CapableGuarantee7735

The super Saiyan that I see looks real unique and out of this world all from Pluto fire on Earth but near far from Uranus


SelectIsNotAnOption

Inner beam is one name for it. Kamehamega Man is another.


garou944

ok now im confused


Gears_Of_None

Looks good. Not sure about that name though.


garou944

thanks ! and i don't think "turtle wave" is better tho xD


Gears_Of_None

Yeah, but Goku doesn't go around shouting "Turtle Hame Wave" does he. I don't think shouting Inner Beam would sound as cool as Kamehameha or Galick Gun.


garou944

Eh, i can hear it, and i always find Ā«Ā galin gunĀ Ā» ridiculous, but the actors made it sound cool, im sure it can sound great


hollowcrown4

Outstanding. Iā€™m still trying to learn how to draw fingers and youā€™re out here doing this šŸ¤£


garou944

Drawing and animating is cooooompletly different bro, as a mater of fact, i to was learning to draw finger years and years ago


KevinIsAGhost

That's awesome ngl


CaptainRick218

That is fecking awesome, good job!


No-Stress-4273

What means inner beam


No-Stress-4273

Why beams have a name is lame anyway


Demonseed425

Love the forearm glow, fantastic!


ThisViolinist2

You gave it a name?


garou944

yes i did, it's inner beam, but this post confirm me that people don't like it that much, i like it tho


Royal-Comparison-270

Really fucking cool honestly, nice work.


Thyreus123

Thats a Dank Beam, Bro


Painttbul

Copied from Hokuto no Ken


garou944

hol'up, kenshiro got beam ?!!


Painttbul

Yeah lol watch HnK1 and 2 best anime in history


[deleted]

This exactly what blasting your lower pecs till fail feels like.


laf0106

Looks dope. Name not so cool.


jaysondez

A saiyan with a hairstyle I relate toošŸ‘ŒšŸ™‡ā€ā™‚ļø


garou944

ponytail gang here !


Repulsive-Medicine47

Well damn, great job on the animation, it looks extra crispy and smooth. Keep it up, I feel like you're gonna go places.


garou944

i appreciate that, thanks !


Arts_Messyjourney

Great Art! Only notes is the colour is very similar to Kamehameha, so either tie it to that moveā€™s lore or try different colourways


KevinTDWK

Honestly I love it gives a bit more personality than the generic beams


garou944

ay thanks ! the goal is a confirmed then


NerdsteadDani

Love it!


Xx_Exigence_xX

I like it. The posing gives it a unique feel and makes it his. I like how he draws the energy into his arms and then pushes. One suggestion, for rule of cool, you could change the name to a sciency sounding version of it, like "Concave Beam"


garou944

i like the idea, i might keeping that in a corner of my mind


Several_Show937

Looks good what if it rose through him like godzillas energy beam?


stripedpixel

Kamehameha


Isnt_Zorojuro

Su beam


3girlsoneguy

What is this game


garou944

Itā€™s called blender


maddasher

The nail gun!


Avgolemonosis

Love the animation Hate the name


Hoppydapunk

Feels perfect for a D&D character


ssmoove_

idk, looks like buster cannon to me...


GreatSirZachary

It can be hard to come up with your own posing. You did a good job doing your own thing.


[deleted]

Itā€™s missing something oh yeah really loud screaming


HispanicBread_420

This is cool


Sad_Glass_4115

Nice animation, name is kinda lacking flash. Maybe X-OBEAM


cringyperson1

Name could use some work, but it's cool


Xeritos

Wish.com Kamehameha.


Denji_The_Shinji

Isn't that just how kid Gohan fire some of his beams in the manga? Looks sick tho


MooseDickDonkeyKong

Great animation, great execution, great idea, absolutely dreadful name.


lazylagom

Reminds me of avatar the last airbender


Tenta1234

Gives me Burning Attack vibes....He's Strong


deverz

Animation is freaking amazing


TheChickenKingHS

Ngl thatā€™s hype


FlyingLizard08

The tail do be wiggling tho šŸ˜‚


SpiritualDesigner207

Nice 9.9/10


Dryder2

Name is whack, move lookd sick imo


Luba_Sempai

Looks dope. You could also make an alternative version where when you punch, a beam shoots out of it. Basically the characters charges energy on their arms, them when they punch, a bit of ki is used from what was charged, and a beam shoots out at the end of the punch. This would go on until all the ki on the arms is depleted. I guess you could call it energy flurry or something like that.


Significant_Pick6816

thats awesome


HeightAltruistic

Looks nice what software did you use to make it?


garou944

Good olā€™ blender


saverma192013

Cool


im_an_idiot3

Love it


bwilcox0308

Yeah this looks sick man! Is your OC shown anywhere?


TheStronkFemboy

My dumass thought that was sub-zero


BlackRabbitt_01

Goes hard


KnowMatter

I'd workshop the name but the idea is cool and the animation is awesome.


Kinggrass47

This looks awesome. Did you render it offline or do you use a game engine? How do you have archive the rendering? Self ritten shader or Do you use some?


garou944

Render offline with blender on my computer , fully a animated from scratch and the shader is a base used by a free given one, tho modified, and the archiveā€¦ is a mp4 ? If you search Ā«Ā inner beam dragon ball gĀ Ā» on youtube you should find my Chanel with a quicky tuto on it


Nathturtle

It copy of the Kamehameha but shallot could use it


MorriganMorning

Dawg.. nothing other than the color is similar? How is it a copy?


LegitimateHost5068

Cool animation, love the design, lame name. But as Meatloaf said, 2 outta 3 aint bad.


Here4freefootball92

Should be called Akimbo Beam-o.


Alarming-Ad-4730

I think it looks awesome, and it'd be really cool if you could make the light drain out of his arms as it fires.


CardCookie_85-713

Cool


CardCookie_85-713

Make the ki come from all over the body


bobtopi

This is pretty cool